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yup, im happy that you guys are enjoying this....

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Magnificent looking forward to more of your story

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im glad you are....................

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Well I know I'd never be albe to do this,but I could do art& some other things that occupy my time.

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is magnificent all yuo can say about this? (no offense though)
i...think..it..is..YAY! ok i cant think of a word to describe how good it is so ill go with magnificint as well

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thanks guys......

Ok, here is chapter 14, read and enjoy.....

Chapter 14- Trust?:

Spyro looked for Cynder everywhere. When he found her, she was in a balcony of the temple, just sitting there, Spyro could tell that she was weeping silently. Spyro began to approach Cynder, Cynder heard something from behind and turned her head to come to see Spyro. She quickly swiped her tears off with her arm as Spyro reached her “Cynder?” asked Spyro.
“What?” said Cynder in a gloomy voice.
She had already lost all her rage for anyone and was just depressed. “I came to see you,” said Spyro lowering his mood to match hers.
Cynder glared at Spyro and said “Well here I am….”
Spyro looked down at the floor guilty and said raising his head “Cynder, I hope you believe me when I tell you this.”
Cynder nodded slowly wating for Spyro to continue. “Cyn…. I never meant to kiss Ember, she, approached me and tried to seduce me. I begged her to stop, telling her that I wanted to be loyal to you, nut then she kissed me, I swear I didn’t kiss her back, I swear,”

A promise, now Cynder waged a war with herself. Her heart, immediately attempting the promise, knowing his love was true, but her head, fighting back her own heart, in fear of betrayal. Her mind sent Cynder a question to ask Spyro, like a natural reaction. Cynder asked starting to weep again “How can I trust you?”
“I don’t know Cyn, I guess you’re just going to have to, and trust me when I say… I love you,” said Spyro
The three words flared up in Cynder, I love you. The word’s of power. Cynder began to heat up inside, the words burning a print, promised to stay there forever. But her mind was still concient, and fighting “I don’t know if I can,” said Cynder
“Why is that Cyn?” asked Spyro
Now the war inside rose out “Oh Spyro,” said Cynder “My heart tells me with great strength to love you, and trust. But my mind, It warns me, telling me I’ll be betrayed,”
“Why do you think I would do such a thing?”
Cynder began crying, her mind reminding her of betrayal. “Back then when I was in the army, besides getting tortured physically by the dark master. I was also tortured mentally, the dark master and them made me trust them, just so they could backstab and ridicule me, It scarred me, now I fear for this,”
Spyro sighed “I would never do anything like that to you,”
“I fear trust,” said Cynder
“It’s fine, you don’t have to trust me, and you can leave me if you want, but there is something that you can’t change, I love you, that can not be stopped by even the weapon of the enemy. I guess there is nothing else to be said,” said Spyro glooming down.

Spyro began to leave, going into the temple. At that moment, the words that Spyro had said sunk into Cynder, and strengthened her heart. Her heart finally over came her mind, and brought a feeling of love to her, she felt she could trust him, and was realy to love him forever and a day. Filled with euphoria, Cynder ran up to Spyro and hugged him before he could get past the door “Oh Spyro! I trust you, I love you! I love you!”
Spyro embraced Cynder, and kissed her, making her feel like she was flying.

I hope you enjoyed, please comment..

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wow! really good! You really took the full advantage of my idea! I'm glad it helped!

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Yay, Cynder's happy again! *sees Ember sneaking towards Spyro* "Back away." *gravity hammer switched for Spartan Laser*

LOL!

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I really am glad she's happy again,because a soul filled with sorrow is not the way to live.

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yup, all thanks to Cynderrules for the idea

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AWESOME! ^_^ YEA! CYNDER IS HAPPY AGAIN! W00T Love prevails! XD Ok time for me to be quiet. XD Please continue! I'm at the edg of meh eat here. 

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....... what?????? oh well im glad you enjoyed it

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As i am sure every one did.:) these are absolutely fantastic i seriously consider this as worth a read as something like Eragon or stuff.( i love that book)

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kool, i hope you kep enjoying.......

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Hey guys, here is Chapter 15, this chapter i have to do somthing

Warning!: This chapter of the fanfic may have a topic that is contrivatial to you, If you dont wish to see it, dont read past this point (Contrivertial might be s*x, racial comments, immigration, and such)

I wrote this because there is a scene here, its not that bad but i wanna keep it safe..... i hope this warning can cover me...... Here you go, read and enjoy....

Chapter 15- Close:

Spyro continued kissing Cynder in the lips; Cynder could feel the passion Spyro had. Spyro began kissing Cynder’s neck as well; Cynder felt confused about this, yet enjoyed every single moment of it, she stood there, letting Spyro kiss her in whatever matter he wished. Now Spyro had an urge to shove Cynder, he began shoving her making her first fall on her hind making her sit, then pushing her more, until she fell on her back crashing a bit hard, but she could not feel it, she was too concentrated on Spyro, who now stood in top of her. Cynder also began kissing Spyro’s neck, on one attempt accidentally biting him causing a little cut on his neck, Spyro shivered a little from the cut, but besides that ignored it.

They continued this little kissing ritual, but before anything could happen Sparx barged in, as he entered, he saw Spyro on top of Cynder and said slowly and sorta disgusted “Umm… Spyro?”
This small yet slow phrase entered Spyro’s ears and rang as loud as church bells, Sparx really didn’t say it very loud, but it felt loud to Spyro do to the fact that his presence appeared at this moment. Spyro jumped off Cynder and Cynder stood up as they turned their heads to see Sparx, both with wide-eyes and panting.
“Sparx!” said Spyro partially shouting “What are you doing here!?”
Sparx just stood there still in shock from the image and said “Errm……….. Did I interrupt you?”
Spyro and Cynder both looked at each other still panting and both said innocently “No no, not at all,”
Sparx shook his head violently while shivering then said “I’m just going to forget what I just saw. Spyro, I heard something happened in between Ember and doom-and-gloom here,”
Cynder glared at Sparx for that comment, but only to make her look normal, she really didn’t care, she was still processing what just happened, “Yeah,” said Spyro “They got in a fight,”
“ooh, I knew jealousy would overcome her,” said Sparx
“Shut up,” said Cynder annoyed at Sparx now for interrupting.
“He he, Spyro, we should go rest. It is late and there’s training towmorrow. Ember is sleeping with us tonight, but tomorrow Cyril is taking her to a sanctuary across the relm,” said Sparx
“That’s great,” said Cynder sarcasticly
“Lets go to our room,” said Sparx
A wave of nervousness struck Cynder, she did not feel like being in the pressure of Sparx questioning her, so she devised an escape plan “I’ll catch up with you guys later, I wanna be in the balcony to…. Look! That’s right look for…. A star, a star I wanted to see, see you guys later,” she said nervously
Spyro knew what Cynder was thinking and said “Ok, see you later,”
“Riiiight…” said Sparx suspiciously
They left to their room.

As they walked towards their room, Sparx asked “So… What where you doing there?”
“What?” asked Spyro jumped by the question
“what, where you doing in there,” repeated Sparx.
“Nothing,” said Spyro avoiding the question
“Dude,” said Spax angry as Spyro’s answer “Your bleeding from the neck, that has to be something,”
Spyronoticed the cut, now feeling the cool red fluid run down his neck, he rubbed his neck to his shoulder to clean it off ad said “Me and Cyn where kissing,”
“Kissing!” shouted Sparx “No no my buddy, that’s more like toying around,”
“No….. Its was just kissing,” said Spyro
“Then your one funky kisser my bud, Ill tell you that,” said Sparx
“Whatever,” said Spyro
“You grossed me out there, on pot of her and all,” said Sparx, but then grinned “You where looking for some,”
Spyro wanted to hold back, but he couldn’t keep that a secret “I… no… me… ga…”he said studdering “Yes, but it’s not like that,”
“No? then how is it?” asked Sparx
“Sparx, I’m in love with Cyn, so it’s not just that simple,” explained Spyro
“I don’t belive in love,” said Sparx
“Sparx,” said Spyro as they reached their room “You don’t belive in anything,”

i hope you read and enjoyed it, plz comment....

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A little too warm and fuzzy, but you did stop it before it got too into it.  That is EXACTLY how I would think Sparx would react.

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the last line is great! I love it! And even though it is a bit more mature, it's done quite tastefully, but I wouldn't recommend you continually putting themes like that in your story.

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oh no, i will keep it to a strict limit, im glad you enjoyed it................

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AWESOOOOMMMMEE!Sorry for spamming.

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no, i call that a comment, you coold say COOOOOOL, and i would not call that spamming here....

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OHHHH!Well Thanks!

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np. i guess, what did you thank me for anyways....

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na i think it was cool thats probably as mature as you could go on here but keep it up!

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yup, i think ill keep it as clean as i can, but i will send thoes warnings out, so SR does not get in trouble for making kids see this, like a go at your own risk....... I think ill only put one more of thoes, at least that i have planned.... keep it clean tho......

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im looking forward to seeing more keep it up !

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