Did I do a good job?

DragonFireOKN · Jan 04, 2008 9:31 PM

I just now finished my first fanfic. and I would like to see if anyone here likes my fanfics.
So if you would like to read it, here you go!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3918012/1/S … Chronicles

Please Review and tell me what you think!

Clawtooth35 · Jan 04, 2008 9:39 PM

I read the first chapter. It is quite good but you need to work a bit on description. as for the plot, it is good as far a si have read.

EternalNight · Jan 04, 2008 9:43 PM

Wow, I'm impressed! I don't have a fanfic login, and I have just read the first chapter, But it is really well written!!! big_smile

When I have more time I will read the rest. Great Job!!!!

DragonFireOKN · Jan 04, 2008 10:12 PM

I forgot to mention this above, even if you don't have a fanfic.com login you can still review! Just go down to the bottom of the screen and click the submit a review button! Please do this because it encourages me to continue! Flames are accepted but I wish you to have a reason for flamming me, not just "this is terrible!" Tell me why or why not.

Antr the Rolf · Jan 04, 2008 10:16 PM

I'm in there but I never go there.Just liked to sign up,i guess?

DragonFireOKN · Jan 14, 2008 11:46 PM

Guys, I have put up a poll on my site and I would like for some of you guys to vote.

BTW: My stories are for: Pokemon, Eragon, Jurassic park, and a book about the Loch Ness Monster.
PLEASE CHECK THEM OUT!

P.S. If I am violating any site rules by this thread, please remove it.

Carrottime · Jan 15, 2008 5:18 PM

The internet loves to suck and it won't load up.

I'll get back to you on this one.

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