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#1 Aug 09, 2018 3:28 PM
- KrakenGuard
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Spyro and the Lost Valley
"ENOUGH! Here is the truest tale of all : There was an almighty, all-powerful wizard, and there was a pathetic purple dragon, AND THE WIZARD DESTROYED HIM!! THE END!"
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#2 Oct 21, 2018 8:03 PM
- thetruefan
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Re: Spyro and the Lost Valley
I like it! My only complaint really is that you divide paragraphs too much, making each one consist of 1-2 lines. It looks unprofessional and makes it sort of hard to read. Other than that, your writing is stylish and has a good flow to it. Keep it up! 
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