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#26 Mar 22, 2010 10:46 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Yeah, he's rebooted it twice now which got on my quik at first... But if he's not happy with it then there's no point in him publishing it, so I'm not bothered.


"The phoenix hope, can wing her way through desert skies. And still defying fortune's spite; revive from ashes and rise."

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#27 Mar 22, 2010 10:48 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Good point are you going to make him another one if he asks you???


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#28 Mar 22, 2010 10:52 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Yeah, if he asks me and I have an idea in my head. I've drawn quite a few pictures for him as well.

Here's one:
Serthal_and_Virith_by_Phoenix_Flyer.jpg

Virith is on the left and Serthal is on the right. At this point they're flying away from the castle where they first encounter the Undead.
If I help him as much as I did last time I may demand he invents a character based off of one of mine! No I wouldn't, But I will verbally abuse him over MSN if he keeps doing it! XD


"The phoenix hope, can wing her way through desert skies. And still defying fortune's spite; revive from ashes and rise."

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#29 Mar 22, 2010 10:55 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

WOW thats beautiful just looking at it wow were do you come with suck ideas this is just.... WOW ....


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#30 Mar 22, 2010 11:12 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Cheers, though this one wasn't my idea at all; it was all Rurik's. I really just put it into a visual format.


"The phoenix hope, can wing her way through desert skies. And still defying fortune's spite; revive from ashes and rise."

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#31 Mar 22, 2010 11:15 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

He may have made the idea but it's your artwork that amazes me


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#32 Mar 22, 2010 11:42 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Sorry for not being satisfied with my book, PF. And yes, it has made me better.


http://rurik-redwolf.deviantart.com/

Harsh, blunt, and even evil on many occasions. What's not to like about me?

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#33 Mar 22, 2010 11:46 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Phoenix_Flyer wrote:

It was a kind of fantasy/action kind of story, basically his characters stumbled upon a plot involving Undead.

So THAT's why he had a shotgun


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#34 Mar 22, 2010 11:50 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Apoc wrote:
Phoenix_Flyer wrote:

It was a kind of fantasy/action kind of story, basically his characters stumbled upon a plot involving Undead.

So THAT's why he had a shotgun

Now we all know lolz


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#35 Mar 22, 2010 11:53 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

*cries cause nobody paid attention to my poem*

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#36 Mar 22, 2010 11:53 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

spyroNcynder wrote:
Apoc wrote:
Phoenix_Flyer wrote:

It was a kind of fantasy/action kind of story, basically his characters stumbled upon a plot involving Undead.

So THAT's why he had a shotgun

Now we all know lolz

Thankfully, I'm standing more than 50 feet away


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#37 Mar 22, 2010 11:58 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

HAHA I'm standing a country away from him ^.^


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#38 Mar 23, 2010 12:39 AM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

I live in the UK


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#39 Mar 23, 2010 2:23 AM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

I tried making a song using my acoustic guitar and playing while singing,
but because of the rhyme scheme of the poem, it is very hard to get the
timing right in the song. I have to "fake" some of the syllables and jam
them together to get some of the lines to fit, along with stretching some
syllables to get the line to fit. But I'll show you the guitar part I used, and
will tell you guys what part of the song I'm entering into.

For example, when I begin the Chorus, it will say, "Chorus."

In this song, I made "Open the gate" and "The gate is open" the Chorus of
the song. The previous lyrics of the same paragraph is the Verse. I'll show
you in the first spoiler, with chords and tablature in the second spoiler:

Hidden text

Verse 1
Twisting marble; ancient stone,
Alone on a hilltop; its own private throne.
The voices are calling,
His will is falling,
Will he listen to reason?
Chorus 1
Open the gate. [Repeat once]

Verse 2
Cast away family; then cast away friends,
Black and red; it never ends.
Fervor is failing,
Vengence prevailing,
Will he complete his betrayal?
Chorus 2
Open the gate. [Repeat once]

Instrumental 1 [Maybe a calm guitar solo if done electric.]

Verse 3
Shadows lengthening; consumed by red,
Blood is spilt; an angel is dead.
Darkness is winning,
The end is beginning,
Will he return to light?
Chorus 3
Open the gate. [Repeat once]

Verse 4
Death unleashed; chaos ensues,
When realisation dawns; too late to refuse.
A God is coming,
No use running,
Will he win this fight?
Chorus 4
The gate is open. [Repeat once]

Instrumental 2

Hidden text
-=Chords:

- - - - - - - - - -

=Chorus:
D G D G E A

>D chord
E|-0-|
B|-3-|
G|-2-|
D|-0-|
A|---|
E|---|

>G chord
E|-3-|
B|-3-|
G|-0-|
D|-0-|
A|-2-|
E|-3-|

>E chord
E|-3-|
B|-3-|
G|-0-|
D|-2-|
A|-2-|
E|-0-|

>A chord
E|-0-|
B|-3-|
G|-2-|
D|-2-|
A|-0-|
E|---|

- - - - - - - - - -

=Verse:
B Asus2 G E A

>B chord
E|-0-|
B|-3-|
G|-4-|
D|-4-|
A|-2-|
E|---|

>Asus2 chord [Only used for Verses]
E|-0-|
B|-0-|
G|-2-|
D|-2-|
A|-0-|
E|---|

>G chord [Same form as Chorus's G chord]
>E chord [Same form as Chorus's E chord]
>Second A chord [Same form as Chorus's A chord]

- - - - - - - - - -

=First Instrumental:
B D G G[EEE] G[EEE] A

- - - - - - - - - -

=Second Instrumental:
[Ask for the little lead parts]
B Amaj G G[EEE] G[EEE]

>Amaj chord [Only used for Instrumental 2]
E|-0-|
B|-2-|
G|-2-|
D|-2-|
A|-0-|
E|---|

Video [YouTube]


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#40 Mar 23, 2010 3:31 AM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

I've seen those lyrics before, Apoc showed me those he had like 5-6 songs up there on the art thing.


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#41 Mar 23, 2010 3:59 AM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Deviant Art.

@Swaffy: I love the riff, your guitar has nice tone. I would add the vocals but my recording program doesn't work and the other one needs to be registered


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#42 Mar 23, 2010 4:05 AM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Thanks.
: )


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#43 Mar 23, 2010 11:25 AM

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Thanks Swaffy, it's awesome! wink

I thought it was good, cooldude. Though the image of having a shotgun pointed at my head isn't something I know how to comment on! XD


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#44 Mar 23, 2010 1:59 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

lol, well I got it from what rurik said earlier on.

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#45 Mar 23, 2010 4:11 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Swaffy wrote:

Thanks.
: )

No prob bro.


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#46 Mar 23, 2010 11:24 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

By my knowledge, reliable recording equipment doesn't come cheap.
Unless you borrow it from somebody to use temporarily.


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#47 Mar 23, 2010 11:40 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Yeah but some just don't seem to have the film (Thats off of ReddragonX signature)


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#48 Mar 24, 2010 12:43 AM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Swaffy wrote:

By my knowledge, reliable recording equipment doesn't come cheap.
Unless you borrow it from somebody to use temporarily.

We could always torrent


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#49 Mar 26, 2010 2:59 AM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Hey guys I made an account on Deviantart it's username is spyroXcynder1223 and I
already have something posted up there if you want you can look it up if you all like.
http://spyroxcynder1223.deviantart.com/


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#50 Mar 26, 2010 6:08 PM

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Re: Poems of all kinds

Added, I'm Krudd


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