Poems of all kinds

spyroNcynder · Mar 22, 2010 2:33 AM

sometimes you mistake thing to be a fairytale
but love is something you use to set sail.
Love is between you and I when ever we touch I feel as if I can fly.
You and I were ment to be together
baby can't you see it's suppose to last forever.
You gave me a brand new start
I just hope you don't break my heart.
Without you life isn't worth living
because you'r the only one who deserves the love I'm giving.

Thats all of it, it's called TOGETHER FOREVER

I love that one it's one of my favorite poems I've writen I have alot more so so tell me if you would like to hear them.

Apoc · Mar 22, 2010 3:02 AM

I said it once, I'll say it again. Nice poems. big_smile

spyroNcynder · Mar 22, 2010 3:04 AM

Thanks do you like it that much lolz wow your really first who said it twice.

Apoc · Mar 22, 2010 3:06 AM

I have a respect for poets

spyroNcynder · Mar 22, 2010 3:17 AM

cool why so much what made you respect them this much?

Apoc · Mar 22, 2010 4:46 PM

I know quite a lot of good writers and I learned to appreciate poetry through them

Phoenix_Flyer · Mar 22, 2010 5:02 PM

I wrote this for Rurikredwolf ages ago, it's based on his story (well, until he rebooted it it was...)

Black and Red

Twisting marble; ancient stone,
Alone on a hilltop; its own private throne.
The voices are calling,
His will is falling,
Will he listen to reason?
Open the gate.

Cast away family; then cast away friends,
Black and red; it never ends.
Fervor is failing,
Vengence prevailing,
Will he complete his betrayal?
Open the gate.

Shadows lengthening; consumed by red,
Blood is spilt; an angel is dead.
Darkness is winning,
The end is beginning,
Will he return to light?
Open the gate.

Death unleashed; chaos ensues,
When realisation dawns; too late to refuse.
A God is coming,
No use running,
Will he win this fight?
The gate is open.

Apoc · Mar 22, 2010 5:07 PM

That would actually make a good song

Nightfall · Mar 22, 2010 5:18 PM

Great poems guys! big_smile And yes, PF, that would make a good song.

As for me, I've never really tried poetry. I've always preferred fanfics and novels. But if I happen to write one, I'll share it.

Apoc · Mar 22, 2010 5:40 PM

You must try it.

Phoenix_Flyer · Mar 22, 2010 6:05 PM

It would? Thanks! I'm no musician though, so I would have no idea what to do... XP

Yeah, try it Saph. It's a pain to find the right ideas, but once you get going it's easy.

Apoc · Mar 22, 2010 6:10 PM

Once I get some decent recording equipment, a drum kit and a guitar I can turn it into a song for you

Phoenix_Flyer · Mar 22, 2010 6:24 PM

Sure, go for it if you want to. I'm not exactly going to do anything more with it than let it sit on deviantART.

Apoc · Mar 22, 2010 6:30 PM

Thanks. Once I get all my stuff together, I will make into a song

spyroNcynder · Mar 22, 2010 8:18 PM

Phoenix_Flyer wrote:

I wrote this for Rurikredwolf ages ago, it's based on his story (well, until he rebooted it it was...)
Black and Red
Twisting marble; ancient stone,
Alone on a hilltop; its own private throne.
The voices are calling,
His will is falling,
Will he listen to reason?
Open the gate.
Cast away family; then cast away friends,
Black and red; it never ends.
Fervor is failing,
Vengence prevailing,
Will he complete his betrayal?
Open the gate.
Shadows lengthening; consumed by red,
Blood is spilt; an angel is dead.
Darkness is winning,
The end is beginning,
Will he return to light?
Open the gate.
Death unleashed; chaos ensues,
When realisation dawns; too late to refuse.
A God is coming,
No use running,
Will he win this fight?
The gate is open.

Wow that amazing!!! XD how long did it to make that, thats very cool and interesting

EDIT: and don't forget to comment on mine if you guys like ^.^

Phoenix_Flyer · Mar 22, 2010 10:15 PM

Thanks, yours isn't bad at all! wink

Err... fifteen minutes? It just 'came out' if that makes sense... I was talking to Rurik over MSN and he said he wanted a poem to go with his story preview, but he had no ideas. I said I would write him one to help him get an idea, and that's what I came up with.

spyroNcynder · Mar 22, 2010 10:19 PM

wow thats cool, did he use it???

Rurikredwolf · Mar 22, 2010 10:20 PM

I totally didn't force her. Nope. Not even with the shotgun pressed against her head there.

spyroNcynder · Mar 22, 2010 10:22 PM

A shotgun is kind of a weird way to put it but okay I'll go with it what kind of story is it anyway?

Rurikredwolf · Mar 22, 2010 10:23 PM

It was...a story.

cooldude22345 · Mar 22, 2010 10:26 PM

He pressed the shotgun to her head
And her eyes welled up with tears.
Her time had come, to face her fears
She knew by dawn, she'd be dead.

LOLZORZ FIVE SECOND POEM.

spyroNcynder · Mar 22, 2010 10:26 PM

I know that but what kind of story like fiction, romance, sci-fi, ect.

Phoenix_Flyer · Mar 22, 2010 10:37 PM

It was a kind of fantasy/action kind of story, basically his characters stumbled upon a plot involving Undead. This is a poem which refers to a kind of Legend which his characters had where two corrupted dragons fought against a 'calling' to unleash the Undead plague in the first place as well as an almost invincible Warlord.
Either way, he's rebooted it now, so the poem is void because the story doesn't exist anymore.

spyroNcynder · Mar 22, 2010 10:41 PM

well that was a wast... when ever I start something I finish it no matter what it is
I'm havn't been about to get to it cause of all my work but I have been working
on somewhat.

cooldude22345 · Mar 22, 2010 10:45 PM

No, not a waste. It's just a part of the writing process. I'm sure it made him better at writing.

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