The Legend of Spyro: Legend of the Dragon Warrier

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Oct 27, 2009 9:29 PM

Yup here is a new fanfic I have started and it is a special one tongue

The story is written in anthro style but ALSO in Japanese style xD
You will know what I mean when you read it tongue

And this is a projekt I am tring to do... I have teamed up with a artist from DA there do some artwork to this fanfic ^^ I got the idea from her so she should get a lot of cidit from the fic ^^

Thanks to my correcter Loyboys for the correction of the text ^^

All the artwork you see belongs to saoswife from DA

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Picture to CH 1: http://saoswife.deviantart.com/art/LoDW … -141172657

Chapter 1:
New bodyguards

It was peaceful in the dragon realm…
The whole world was ruled by a beautiful princess named Ailiera. She's colorful like rainbow, but her hair and underbelly is pink. outfit simple but beautiful pink dress
The princess had a bodyguard and her name was Cynder, she was more the quiet type and the princess didn’t really know anything about her because she never really talked with her, but she was a skilled bodyguard as she had saved the princess many times without getting hurt herself.
Cynder wear a violet Jimbei
The princess also had a servant and her name was Ember, she was very kind and was one of the princesses best friends and enjoyed being her servant.
She liked to talk but she was annoying at times but the princess didn’t care so much of it as she was her friend.
Ember wear a white kimono with some beautiful purple flower marks on it.

“Anything you need my lady?” asked Ember and bowed for her master while Cynder sat not far away quietly and was always ready to strike if someone tried to do something.
“No not at the moment… but we will get some guests tomorrow… I think it was some new bodyguards” she said and Cynder then turned her head around.
“I thought I was enough to protect you my lady?” she said coldly.
“Oh I didn’t mean it that way Cynder… but there have been a lot of evil dragons that want me dead for some reason and I would feel more comfortable if I had more bodyguards” explain Ailiera
“I understand princess” said Cynder shortly and went back to her duty.
“Can you explain more about them my lady?” asked Ember curiously.
“It is two male samurais there have been trained by the four legendary masters of the elements“
“Oh wow now do I'm really excited… what shall I then do my lady?”
“Make the guest rooms ready for them please”
“Yes my lady” she bowed again and then went cheerfully away.
`Hihi maybe can one of them be my mate´ she thought with a giggle.

Two dragons stood on a mountain and looked over the land they was visiting.
“This most be the place sensei told us about” said a purple dragon dressed in a green Jimbei. His name was Spyro.
“It looks like it… he also said it would be a beautiful place” said a red dragon dressed in a orange Jimbei. His name was Flame
“So we are going to be bodyguards for a princess huh?” said Spyro, excited about it.
“Yeah it is an honor”
“Hehe and finally shall we not be pushed so hard in training by our senseis” chuckled Flame.
“Yeah but we shall still train hard to become stronger”
“Of course… but under our own methods”
“Yeah and maybe one day can we be senseis ourselves” chuckled Spyro.
“Yeah… but I now more want to start a family” said Flame and Spyro then looked at him with a smile.
“That is a good idea… like sensei Ignitus said: ‘You most follow your own part in life‘ so your part is to get a family” said Spyro.
“Yeah I just need to find the right girl” sighed Flame.
“Don’t worry it will come one day I just know it” said Spyro and took his paw on his best friend’s shoulder.
“Now lets get down there and meet the princess”
Flame nodded and they then continued there trip towards the castle.

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Princess Ailiera belongs to saoswife!

Pictures of the designs of the characters:

Spyro, Cynder, Flame and Ember: http://saoswife.deviantart.com/art/LoDW … -140781752
The guardians / Senseis: http://saoswife.deviantart.com/art/LoDW … -141080004
Princess Ailiera: http://saoswife.deviantart.com/art/LoDW … -141081844

Apoc · Oct 27, 2009 11:04 PM

Huh, this is new. Nice story

S240sx24 · Oct 28, 2009 3:14 AM

Nice new story bro. & nice nightshade drawing hmm well im gonna have to compete against that. i'll try to do my best.

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Oct 28, 2009 7:36 AM

Thanks guys ^^

And I don't think you can do better then Spartan-029 tongue
He is the AWESOMEST artist I know ^^
Plus he have wrote the longest fanfic I know... so far is it about 150 chapters xD

S240sx24 · Oct 28, 2009 3:46 PM

Hey man thats a awesome drawing. i didnt say i can do better but i'll try. he's a awesome artist. i just use a led pencil on my drawings lol, i use what i can find unfortunately lol.

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Oct 28, 2009 5:31 PM

Lol okay xD well I know I will like it ^^

S240sx24 · Oct 28, 2009 6:33 PM

Hey i'll try lol. congrats bro i didn't know u had a girlfriend awesome man

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Oct 29, 2009 8:07 AM

Hehe thanks xD lol

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Oct 31, 2009 6:10 PM

Oh see now is it a new picture xD
A picture I commissioned CASF to do xD

S240sx24 · Oct 31, 2009 7:12 PM

Hey u guys i just uploaded one of my drawings on the forums. I think its ok not that very good though. but if u guys want to see feel free to & comment if u would like too as well, i'll post additional pictures later when i get them colored.

Apoc · Nov 01, 2009 6:32 PM

You still can use Alexi in this if you want to, you're my friend and you have my permission

S240sx24 · Nov 01, 2009 10:07 PM

Ok cool thanks bro. im also making a spyro comic book. I'll post it soon on here when im finished. its going to be long but hopefully u guys will like it.

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Nov 02, 2009 8:44 AM

Hey can you send me the link to your drawing? I am a bit lazy you see tongue

Anyway... here is the new chapter of this fanfic big_smile

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Picture to the chapter: http://saoswife.deviantart.com/art/LoDW … -141517088

Chapter 2:
Evilness rises

A black dragon was running away from her village while she cried loudly.
“Why do they always pick on me?” she sobbed.
In her village was she getting bullied from a gang that everybody is afraid to face.
She was a black dragoness with a green belly, she had marks around both her eyes and one big mark on her whole back. She wear a black Jimbei with green marks on.
She fell to the ground and sobbed “I can’t take it anymore… I would rather end my life then live like this” she said and then looked up to see where she was and her eyes widened a bit.
She was outside of a big dark castle.
“What is this? Why haven’t I seen this place before?” she asked herself and then walked closer to the big castle.
The doors wasn’t locked so she walked inside.
She looked around and saw a lot of paintings… but they was all drawings of demons with a bad history behind them.
“This place is creepy” she said and shivered a bit scared but she wanted to know what there was in this place.
She then came to a room where a king or queen normally would be but there was no one around… there was a throne but it was empty.
“Over… here…” said a faint voice and the black dragoness jumped back a bit.
“W-W-Who said that?” she asked and then heard the voice again and she then looked where the voice came from.
It came from a dark blue flame there was inside a bottle.
"Please… let me out…” said the voice and the black dragoness walked closer to it.
“Um… but what do I get for it?” she asked… she was poor and had lost her family as a little girl so she had to steal food and money to survive, so she wanted to get something from this flame thing to free it.
“Everything…..” said the voice.
“Hmm… okay then” she said with a smile and then took the cork off the bottle, but when she did it then started there to be much colder inside the room and the black dragoness shivered.
The flame then got out of the bottle in a large stream of flames and flew around the room.
“HAHAHAHA I’M FREE!!!” did the voice said and it was much more powerful now then that weak sounding voice before.
The flames then collected each other on the throne.
When it was over then did the black dragoness look at the throne and her eyes widened.
There now sat a black dragon with some glowing blue marks on his whole right side of his body. He wear a dark blue samurai coat.
“Hehehe thanks young girl… finally am I free” he grinned and then looked at the black dragoness there was still shocked.
“Y-You… you…” she stuttered as she wanted to say something but he finished her line.
“A demon yes” he grinned again “But don’t be afraid… I wouldn’t harm the one there freed me”
The black dragon sighed, relived… she thought she was going to die.
“So what are you doing inside my castle? But first let me hear your name” asked the black dragon.
“I-I’m Kira… and I just came to this castle and wanted to look around” she answered.
“Hehehe it is not normal that someone would check out a demon castle… but there is more to it isn’t there?”
“What do you mean?”
“You have cried… it is clear to see… why?” he asked her.
“Um… I just get bullied from the village I come from… also because I am a thief and wanted to see if there was something worth to steal in here” she admitted.
“Hmm I am glad that you tell me the truth… no one comes forward faster by lying… as my old sensei have told me… but I keep my promise and you shall get whatever you want” he said.
“Um…” she said and thought about it. “I… I don’t know what I shall wish…”
“Okay then… you can stay here if you want to… the demons wouldn’t do anything if you see some so just take it easy”
“T-Thank you lord…” she said and looked at him.
“NightShade”
“Lord NightShade” she said and then bowed to him and then ran around to find a room.
“This girl….. She have some hidden powers that she don’t even know about herself… she could be good as a student… there can help me to take over this realm” he grinned and it grow to a evil laugher.

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NightShade and Kira belongs to ME!

Kira: http://saoswife.deviantart.com/art/LoDW-Kira-141179318
NightShade: http://saoswife.deviantart.com/art/Comm … -140019526

S240sx24 · Nov 02, 2009 5:52 PM

http://www.spyroforum.com/topic-10229-s … o-art.html heres the link guys hope u guys like it. i got more to post but im still not sure if i should color them since my color pencils suck haha. i'll see

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Nov 03, 2009 10:47 AM

Nice ^^

Hey guys what happend to the other topics? O_o

S240sx24 · Nov 03, 2009 6:11 PM

What do u mean. i'll post something to keep them up

Apoc · Nov 03, 2009 8:05 PM

DragonOfDrakness1992 wrote:

Hey can you send me the link to your drawing? I am a bit lazy you see
Anyway... here is the new chapter of this fanfic
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Picture to the chapter: http://saoswife.deviantart.com/art/LoDW … -141517088
Chapter 2:
Evilness rises
A black dragon was running away from her village while she cried loudly.
“Why do they always pick on me?” she sobbed.
In her village was she getting bullied from a gang that everybody is afraid to face.
She was a black dragoness with a green belly, she had marks around both her eyes and one big mark on her whole back. She wear a black Jimbei with green marks on.
She fell to the ground and sobbed “I can’t take it anymore… I would rather end my life then live like this” she said and then looked up to see where she was and her eyes widened a bit.
She was outside of a big dark castle.
“What is this? Why haven’t I seen this place before?” she asked herself and then walked closer to the big castle.
The doors wasn’t locked so she walked inside.
She looked around and saw a lot of paintings… but they was all drawings of demons with a bad history behind them.
“This place is creepy” she said and shivered a bit scared but she wanted to know what there was in this place.
She then came to a room where a king or queen normally would be but there was no one around… there was a throne but it was empty.
“Over… here…” said a faint voice and the black dragoness jumped back a bit.
“W-W-Who said that?” she asked and then heard the voice again and she then looked where the voice came from.
It came from a dark blue flame there was inside a bottle.
"Please… let me out…” said the voice and the black dragoness walked closer to it.
“Um… but what do I get for it?” she asked… she was poor and had lost her family as a little girl so she had to steal food and money to survive, so she wanted to get something from this flame thing to free it.
“Everything…..” said the voice.
“Hmm… okay then” she said with a smile and then took the cork off the bottle, but when she did it then started there to be much colder inside the room and the black dragoness shivered.
The flame then got out of the bottle in a large stream of flames and flew around the room.
“HAHAHAHA I’M FREE!!!” did the voice said and it was much more powerful now then that weak sounding voice before.
The flames then collected each other on the throne.
When it was over then did the black dragoness look at the throne and her eyes widened.
There now sat a black dragon with some glowing blue marks on his whole right side of his body. He wear a dark blue samurai coat.
“Hehehe thanks young girl… finally am I free” he grinned and then looked at the black dragoness there was still shocked.
“Y-You… you…” she stuttered as she wanted to say something but he finished her line.
“A demon yes” he grinned again “But don’t be afraid… I wouldn’t harm the one there freed me”
The black dragon sighed, relived… she thought she was going to die.
“So what are you doing inside my castle? But first let me hear your name” asked the black dragon.
“I-I’m Kira… and I just came to this castle and wanted to look around” she answered.
“Hehehe it is not normal that someone would check out a demon castle… but there is more to it isn’t there?”
“What do you mean?”
“You have cried… it is clear to see… why?” he asked her.
“Um… I just get bullied from the village I come from… also because I am a thief and wanted to see if there was something worth to steal in here” she admitted.
“Hmm I am glad that you tell me the truth… no one comes forward faster by lying… as my old sensei have told me… but I keep my promise and you shall get whatever you want” he said.
“Um…” she said and thought about it. “I… I don’t know what I shall wish…”
“Okay then… you can stay here if you want to… the demons wouldn’t do anything if you see some so just take it easy”
“T-Thank you lord…” she said and looked at him.
“NightShade”
“Lord NightShade” she said and then bowed to him and then ran around to find a room.
“This girl….. She have some hidden powers that she don’t even know about herself… she could be good as a student… there can help me to take over this realm” he grinned and it grow to a evil laugher.
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NightShade and Kira belongs to ME!
Kira: http://saoswife.deviantart.com/art/LoDW-Kira-141179318
NightShade: http://saoswife.deviantart.com/art/Comm … -140019526

Unfortunately, I don't have a pic, but can you please ask Singe?

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Nov 06, 2009 10:29 AM

Oh I didn't mean you but I meant S240sx24 xD

Anyway next chapter is up ;P

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Picture to the chapter: http://saoswife.deviantart.com/art/LoDW … -141825121

Chapter 3:
Meeting with the princess

"Finally are we here" said Spyro as they came to the gates of the princesses castle.
"But how do we get in?" asked Flame but then did the gates open and Cynder walked out with two guards.
"Wow look at that babe" whispered Flame to Spyro and the purple dragon rolled his eyes.
"We are on duty so try to take control of yourself" Spyro whispered.
"So you two are the new bodyguards for the princess?" asked Cynder and sounded like she didn't care about it… which she didn't.
"Yes I am Spyro and this is my partner Flame" introduced Spyro.
"I am Cynder… bodyguard for the princess… I just don't think you two are as good as me" she said coldly and walked back inside.
"She is a babe… but still a *bleep* bitc-"
"Flame don't talk like that to one of your partners" said Spyro a bit annoyed at Flame's attitude.
"Okay relax buddy… lets just go inside" he said and they then followed after Cynder.

The three bodyguards then walked to the princess's room and when they saw the princess then they both blushed a little.
"She is beautiful" whispered Flame to Spyro.
"I have to agree with you… but remember we are on duty plus she IS the princess so don't even think of anything" whispered Spyro.
"I know I know"
"Here are the new bodyguards my lady… Spyro and Flame" said Cynder and pointed at them when she said there names before she went to her spot next to the princess.
"Welcome to my castle" said Ailiera to her new bodyguards.
Spyro and Flame bowed "Thanks princess"
"Just call me lady please… so have you two really been trained by the legendary masters of the elements?"
"Yes my lady we have… we both have mastered elemental powers" answered Spyro.
"Good, just as I had heard… Cynder here have also elemental powers so maybe can you learn from each other sometime" said Ailiera and Cynder didn't look at them.
"Maybe yes… we will be glad to try our skills to the princess's personal bodyguard" said Spyro and Flame gave him a odd look but then turned back to look normally at the princess.
"Good good… I guess it have been a long journey to come to my castle so let my servant show you to your room" said the princess and clapped her hands twice.
The doors then opened and Ember walked inside.
Flame was about to faint of the site of this beautiful dragoness and he couldn't get his eyes off her.
`Wow there is the dragoness I want to share my whole life with´ he thought.
"Welcome Spyro and Flame… please follow me" said Ember and they then followed her to there rooms.

Meanwhile at NightShade's castle had Kira woke up and looked around as she realized that she wasn't dreaming as she thought she had.
`So I did free that demon yesterday…´ she thought.
"Yes you did" said a voice and Kira then looked surprised right next to her and saw it was NightShade.
"W-What? You can read my thoughts?"
"Yes I can but that isn't what matter right now… listen Kira… do you have a home?" he asked.
"Um… no I haven't… I live as a thief" she answered.
"Good… so you wouldn't mind to stay here and become my student?"
"Student? What do you want to learn me?" she asked with a raised eyebrow.
"Many things… Kendo, Karate and other fighting styles"
"But I don't know anything about fighting… why do you ask me?"
"Well for once did you free me… I feel I shall repay you for that… and I can feel that you have great powers hidden deep inside you"
"I have?" she asked surprised.
"Yes you do… a really great dark energy flows though your veins"
"Um…" she said as she thought about the idea "…Well… it can't hurt to try can it?" she said with a smile.
"Good… but I am not a teacher there takes it easy so expect it to be hard" he said in a cold tone.
"Okay…" she said and know that this wasn't to be easy but she had noting better to do with her life right now so why not just stay with him.
"And from now on call me master or sensei… eat some breakfast and come to the dojo after that" he said and then vanished in a shadow.

Apoc · Nov 06, 2009 10:37 AM

The plot thickens

DragonOfDrakness1992 · Nov 06, 2009 10:40 AM

Yup it does xD I hop you all enjoy this story so far ^^
I have wrote to chapter 8 tongue

Apoc · Nov 06, 2009 10:54 AM

Cool, let's hope this one is long too

S240sx24 · Nov 09, 2009 2:24 AM

the story is getting better.

Apoc · Nov 09, 2009 1:39 PM

I agree, you're a great writer

S240sx24 · Nov 11, 2009 3:05 AM

thats for sure bro

Apoc · Nov 11, 2009 9:06 AM

He's also a good artist. You must see his drawings

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