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#51 Oct 16, 2009 7:50 PM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

There is two lemons in this one... I have now stopped to do lemons so I now do hided lemons like the one in that chapter ^^

Argon is normal... I thought to use his cursed form but I never used it ^^"

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Chapter 27:
Repair to the journey.

Argon came into the hall to wait for the others there should go on the journey and he saw that Night already was there.
“Hi Night” he said and walked to him friend there looked a little down.
“Is there something wrong?” asked Argon worried of his friend.
“I don’t want to go with ‘him’” answered Night.
“Then why are you here?” asked Argon confused.
“Because I have been forced to do it… or me and Carol would be kicked out”
“Wait while would Carol be kicked out too?”
“I don’t know… she catched us in-” he stopped and blushed deeply.
“Yeah she cathed me and Frost too…” sighed Argon.
“So you two?…” asked Night.
“Yeah we did” chuckled Argon happily.
“So I guess that it is just us two and… my father” sighed Night.
“Hey don’t take it that bad… as I have heard from Cynder that he has changed a lot” said Argon.
“I don’t care… he still *bleep*ed my mother and I hate him for it”
“I understand you buddy… but try to give him a chance alright?”
“Maybe…” said Night annoyed.

“You don’t have to come with me!” yelled a voice at the stairs and the two black dragons looked up to see NightShade with Singe behind him.
“If you go out like that then will you die!” yelled the white dragoness back.
“I don’t care… much” said NightShade.
“I think it would be good if you took Singe with you NightShade” said another voice and they all four looked up to see that it was Spyro.
“Having a nurse with you could be a great help… besides as you said to us you were in bad shape so Singe would be really good to take with you” said Spyro.
“Alright then you can come with us” sighed NightShade a bit annoyed.
NightShade walked to the two black dragons, Night of cause wouldn’t look at him so he focused on the other black dragon.
“What’s your name dragon?” asked NightShade.
“Um Argon” said Argon.
“Oh yeah you’re the one Damien cursed… I‘m sorry about that” he sighed.
“It’s alright sir”
“Call me NightShade please… I don’t deserve to be called sir” he said and continued to walk.
Singe then came up to them with some bags.
“Here you two be some gentlemen and carry those for me” she said and gave Night and Argon a bag each.
“What is it?” asked Argon.
“Medicine and herbs to NightShade and us if we would get hurt” explained Singe.
“That is a lot of medicine” said Night and took the heavy bag on him.

Then came Frost and Carol.
“Now you dare to not return back” said Frost with a tear in her eye.
“Don’t worry I will be back in one piece” said Argon and kissed his mate on the lips.
“Now try to be nice to your dad please” said Carol there hugged her mate.
“I will give it a try” sighed Night and found it very annoying that everyone should tell him it.
“Thanks and return back to me… maybe is there a surprise for you” she giggled and Night know what she meant.
When Cynder catched them and told them about it was Night shocked, he actually never thought of it could end up that he would be a father, but it didn’t scare him and he would love to be a father with his love.

“Are we all ready?” asked NightShade with Singe next to him.
The couples kissed a last good bye and then did the black dragons ran to them and they all four took flight…


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#52 Oct 17, 2009 2:09 AM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Nice. so Night looks like his father then right just smaller? Are his marks on his body different color, i'd like to draw him too, if its cool with u bro?

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Awesome, I like this story


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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Here is the picture of Night:
I will be very glad if you draw him ^^ are you on DA? if you are then comment the link to the drawing on my page ^^

And the following character called Nightmare belongs to my friend thehotfuzz from DA ^^

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Chapter 28:
Damien returns

In the graveyard behind the temple had Spyro and Cynder buried Damien there, he was evil but they still wanted to lie him a place where he could rest in peace… but another evil creature appeared.
He was a black demonic dragon with a pentagram on his chest.
The dragon looked at the demon dragon’s grave and smiled evilly.
“You don’t deserve to die yet…” he said and placed a paw on the grave and it started to glow with a red light.
The ground under his grave started to shake and a read paw came from the ground and up.
The dragon moved back and let the red dragon come up of his own grave.
The red dragon coughed hard the earth up from his lungs and first looked around.
“I… I’m alive?” he asked confused and looked on himself, he had still all his wounds and the hole in his heart was still there.
“You are only half alive my friend…” said the black dragon.
Damien then noticed him and glared at this unknown dragon.
“Who are you!?”
“Is that your way to say thank you? Geez maybe should I not have awaken you from your death” said the black dragon a bit annoyed.
The red dragon looked oddly at the black dragon.
“Thanks but who are you and why did you do it?”
“That’s better… I’m Nightmare and I did it because you deserve to get another chance… I saw your fights and it looked like you could get another chance”
“What chance?”
“A chance to live again… do I really have to explain everything?” he said with an annoyed voice.
“Whatever… but what’s with my heart? The hole is still there?”
“Yeah you are a living dead now… so the only way to kill you is to break your skull…”
“Hmm… this way could I easily kill that traitor to NightShade” said Damien and remembered NightShade.
“Well I don’t stop you… actually I don’t want to involve me” said Nightmare and just vanished out of nowhere.
Damien shaped his senses and felt a huge energy flaw away from the temple, they was far away but they was there.
“I’m coming after you NightShade” he said and took flight.

Meanwhile was the three black dragons and the white dragoness flying towards that holy stone NightShade was talking about.
Night flew behind them all, he didn’t want to look at his father.
But Argon found NightShade quiet interesting and they talked a lot together.
“Are you serious!? Did you just kill others for fun and because you was bored?” asked Argon shocked that a dragon could do something that horrible.
“Yeah I did but that is over now… I have a lot of bad memories about it now” said NightShade shamefully.
“Do you have any family?” asked Argon.
NightShade looked at him for a second and then back to where they was flying.
“I don’t know… I can’t remember it but I guess I have” he sighed.
“Oh I’m sorry about that” said Argon
“It’s alright you couldn’t know-”
“Sorry that I interrupt” said Singe behind them and the two black dragons looked at her.
“What is it?” asked NightShade.
“Um… you told Argon that you could move in shadows… so why don’t you just move on your own to the stone?”
“Yeah I wondered that too” said Argon and looked at NightShade.
“The stone have a kind of a light field three miles around it where no shadows can come in so it wouldn’t help… and there is some wild beasts there live inside that field to protect the stone… I wouldn’t had survived without help” he explained.
“But you are a strong dragon… you could easily beat them” said Argon.
“The problem is that the light field let all my shadow abilities to not work… that means I can’t turn to my shadow form” said NightShade.
“Oh I see the problem now…” said Argon.
“Let us just hurry so we can get this done” said Night behind them annoyed.
“Yeah we should… we are soon ther-” said NightShade but then screamed in pain as one of his wounds hurt.
“Okay down to the ground guys!” said Singe loudly and they all flow to the ground and Singe then looked closely at his wound.
“I got to give you a new bandage on” she said and took the old one off him slowly.
“You two can get some wood so we can set a fire up… this is probably going to take the whole day so we set camp here” said Singe to the two black dragons.
“Okay” replied Argon and they went out in the woods to find some wood.


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Thanks bro. wheres the link to where night looks like? its not on there lol. yeah i was thinking of drawing them both father & son side by side. & unfortunately no im not on DA im going to get a account when i get a computer. then i'll add u & apoc. i like to draw although its going to take a while cause i work but i'll get it done & post it on spyro picture section

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Cool, when you get a DA account look for kruddthedragonboy. That's me


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UPS! I first wrote the comment and THEN should I add the link but it looks like I forgot it ^^"
Oh well here is it: http://dragonofdarkness1992.deviantart. … -122372429
And okay... you could also PM me and then can I tell you my E-mail ^^
I will gladly upload it on my FA account that I mostly use to upload all gifts, Requests and Commissions I get xD

Cool, when you get a DA account look for kruddthedragonboy. That's me

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Chapter 29:
More info about NightShade


After some time did Argon and Night come back with some wood to make the fire.
Singe was still changing NightShade’s bandages and small yelps of pain came for NightShade’s mouth.
“Are he going to be alright?” asked Argon worried.
Singe looked at the young black dragon and smiled.
“He are doing fine… but it will take some time to change all his bandages” she said and continued her work.
Argon smiled back and he and Night sat the wood together.
“Now we only need some fire…” said Night and looked at the others.
“Don’t look at me I’m a light dragoness” said Singe and NightShade then looked at her surprised.
“A light dragoness? I thought that light dragons was a myth”
“Nope we are pretty real” she giggled in a joke fully manner.
“That still doesn’t help our little problem” said Night.
NightShade looked at the fire and breath a blue flame at it there right away started to set the wood on fire.
They all looked surprised at him.
“I thought you was a shadow dragon…” said Argon.
“I never said that… my original element was fire… until I got this curse” explained NightShade.
“Was the fire also blue?” asked Singe
“Yes it was… I was a special dragon… so evil forces wanted to kidnap me” he said.
“We have time so please explain it all to us” said Singe and continued her work while NightShade explained about his past, that he was over 1000 years old by now and his parents got killed right in front of his and his little sisters eyes and then got kidnapped by there murders, he told them about when he got his curse and his life in a unknown evil realm and then about Damien and his escape form the evil realm.

They all listened to his story while Singe took good care of his wounds.
“Wow what a story…” said Singe quietly and felt bad about his past.
“You have had a hard time…” said Argon
Night looked at the ground and some thoughts ran though his head, he had listened to all what his father had said and took it into him
`I didn‘t know that he had it that bad… and all he wants to do know is to be normal and have a normal life with me… I guess I can‘t blame him for that… but it doesn’t change that he *bleep*ed mom´ he thought and kept his glare at his father that he had done all the time now.
NightShade sighed as he saw his sons glare but he still understood him.
“Hey Night…” he said to his son.
“What is it?…”
“I’m very sorry about what I did to Krystal… my mind was darkened at that time… I’m sorry…” he said and looked sadly at the ground.
Night also looked at the ground.
“Well… I would forgive you… if you didn’t do it then wouldn’t I be here… but I deepest inside me still can’t fully forgive you for what you did… if you know how sad she have been in all those years” he said and started to sob a bit.
“I know… I feel really bad about it” said NightShade and kept looking at the ground.
“You should” glared Night at him and NightShade started to get enough of it and glared back.
Both Argon and Singe could see what was about to happen and stepped in front of them.
“That’s enough both of you!” said Singe angrily at them.
“Fine whatever” said Night and leaved to get some sleep far away from his father.
Argon sighed and followed his friend.

“What was all that for?” asked Singe a bit mad.
“Hey I actually tried to be good friends with him by say sorry for what I did in the past… I’m not the one with the bad attitude” said NightShade.
Singe sighed and went back to his bandages.
“I’m sorry… I know you try your best to be good friends with your son”
“It’s alright…” he sighed.
“I’m soon done with your bandages” she said with a little smile and NightShade saw that little smile and smiled himself.
“You know… you look pretty cute when you smile like that” he grinned.
Singe blushed a bit there could be clearly seen on her white scales.
“U-Um… thank you” she said and kept blushing while she fixed his last bandages.
NightShade blushed himself and looked away.
`W-Why the heck did I say that?´ he thought to himself.
`Um… do he maybe have… feelings for me? Well… he are pretty cute if you don‘t look at his dark past and the fact that he was evil before… and he are also pretty handsome´ thought Singe there blushed even more as she looked closer at his body.
“Um… let’s get some sleep Singe… it is going to be a long day tomorrow” said NightShade and started to lie down on the soft grass and fall asleep.
Singe sighed and also tried to get some sleep.


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DragonOfDrakness1992 wrote:

Cool, when you get a DA account look for kruddthedragonboy. That's me

I think you have added me right?

Yep, you're on my Deviantwatch


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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Great xD

WARNING! This following chapter will include a hided lemon!

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Chapter 30:
A long night:

Singe had some problem to fall asleep that night and woke up with a loud yawn.
“You should get some sleep Singe” said a voice and Singe looked around to find NightShade sit on a rock and looked at the starry sky.
“What about yourself NightShade? You need to recover” said Singe and walked slowly up to him.
“That’s the problem… my curse do that I can’t sleep at night” he sighed deeply as it have been a huge problem in his lonely days.
“Oh… that sounds boring” she said and took a wing over him.
NightShade felt the warm from her wing and it helped on his mood a bit.
“Yeah… to be forced to stay up at night is a pain in the *bleep*” he said with yet another sigh.
“Shall I stay up with you?” she asked kindly
He looked at her and a small smile appeared on his face.
“It is kind of you but you shall need your sleep or we would get trouble to carry your sleepy body tomorrow” he laughed a bit but quietly so Argon and Night wouldn’t wake up, they lied a bit away from them and was sleeping deeply.
“Yeah your right” she laughed a bit herself.

She then thought of something there had made so she couldn’t fall asleep.
“Um NightShade?”
“Yeah what is it?” he asked and looked at the pretty white dragoness.
“Um… did you mean what you said before… that I looked cute when I smiles?” she asked and looked into his dark blue eyes.
NightShade was catched by surprise and blushed deeply.
“U-Um….. Y-Yeah I did…” he said and looked away of embarrassment.
She smiled to his reaction and stroked his cheek with her paw and moved his head so they had eye contact again.
“It is alright NightShade there is noting wrong about it… and I will admit that you look pretty cute too” she said and blushed deeply.
The black dragon was catched by surprise again and blushed deeper and had wide eyes.
“R-Really? You’re the first one there says something like that to me” he said.
“Then is it about time” she giggled and looked deeply into his eyes.
He looked into her yellow eyes and was lost in them.
They moved there heads closer and then closed there eyes before their soft lips meet each other and shared and deep passionately kiss.
The kiss lasted in a long time and they continued it with the tongues as the tongues danced a dance of passion.

They then broke the kiss and looked at each other while they blushed deeply.
“Have you ever got a kiss like that in all the years?” she asked.
“N-No I haven’t… I was close to do a forced kiss once… but that really doesn’t count does it?” he said and blushed shamefully.
“It is alright NightShade… that belongs to the past” she said with a smile.
He looked at her again with a big smile on his face.
“You are really kind… I think I start to love you” he said and blushed even more.
She blushed too as she was catched by surprise.
“Y-You do?” she asked to be sure that she heard right and he nodded slowly.
She smiled and nuzzled his shoulder “I love you too”
NightShade blushed deeply but enjoyed the contact of her head against his shoulder even that it hurt a bit because of a small wound on his shoulder.
Singe blushed as she got an idea that he could do with her.
“Um NightShade? I think there is something you could do while you wait” she said
NightShade looked a bit confused at her and simply asked her.
“What is it?” as he said that then did she tackle him and pinned him down on the ground.
“Make love with me… please” she said and blushed deeply
His eyes widened “A-Are you serious?”
“Yes… I haven’t done it for years” she said and kissed him deeply again.

Night at a time yawned as he was half awake and he went away to get something to drink but he then heard some moans and groans and looked at where the two lovers was and Night blushed deeply as he saw what they was doing.
He tried to ignore it and kept walking to the lake and he found it after some time.
`Well… I guess I should be happy on his ways that he could find real love… yeah… I shouldn‘t be that mad at him… I think I will talk to him tomorrow about something´ he thought and then smiled a little as he started to drink from the clear lake.
After he was done did he return and he took a little look at his father and his new lover, but saw them cuddle up and Singe was in a deep sleep while NightShade looked at her while he breathed heavily.
Night smiled again and went to sleep.


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Hidden lemons are like hidden cameras. You don't expect them at firs tthen they surprise you and they make you smile.


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Lol yeah xD

Alright only four chapters left ^^

Maybe will I even upload my best fanfic here on this site too hmm not sure yet becasue it have some mature stuff in it there is going to be hard to cencur ^^;

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Chapter 31:
Gravid dragonesses

Frost lied on the meadow and sighed.
“What’s wrong?” asked Carol there lied next to the white dragoness.
“I miss Argon… he just woke up and then should he leave so suddenly…”
“I know what you mean… I miss Night too… I just hope he can deal with his father” she said and was worried.
“Hi girls!” shorted a female voice from behind and the two dragonesses looked behind and saw Leaf, Leaf was the other nurse that Singe was about to teach but she was already very skilled in some things, she come form a village in the forest and had learned a lot of herbs on her village.
“Oh hi Leaf” said Frost and tried to smile to the green earth dragoness.
“What brings you here?” asked Carol.
“Oh Singe told me to look after you two before she left… because your mates… you know” she said and giggled to the last part.
Both dragonesses blushed and looked away a bit embarrassed.
“Hihi it is noting to be embarrassed over… me and my boyfriend have talked about to try it and we did.
“Wait so are you also gravid?” asked Frost.
“Nope we wasn’t lucky with the first try… and now am I here so I shouldn’t try again while Singe is teaching me” she sighed.
“Oh I’m sorry…” said Frost.
“It is alright sweetie… how many times have you two mated with your boys?” she giggled and blushed.
The two dragonesses blushed too but it couldn’t harm to tell her it.
“Um… me and Argon just did it once just before he left” said Frost and blushed more.
“Um… me and Night have… um… I haven’t count on how many times we have done it” said Carol and blushed madly.
“Wow so many times!?” gasped Leaf surprised.
“Well then you probably have big chances to be gravid… but you Frost maybe have less but I think you will be it soon” said Leaf with a warmly smile to Frost.
“Thanks Leaf…” said Frost and smiled back.
“Um girls… I’m feeling dizzy…” said Carol and she didn’t look so good.
“Oh maybe is it already time!” gasped Leaf and walked to her and then Carol puked into the ground.
“Oh my I was right! Frost can you help me? We need to get her to a bed”
“Of cause” said Frost and helped her friend to a bed and gave her a bucket to puke in.
“What about you Frost?” asked Leaf and looked at the white dragoness.
“Now where you say it… that trip up here made me a little dizzy” she said and also started to look sick.
“Here take this bucket and lie down” said Leaf and gave Frost a bucket and not long after she got it then did she start to puke into it.
“Oh my… now I get busy” she said and tried to look at the both dragonesses and help them as good as she could.

Meanwhile was all the black dragons and the white dragoness awake.
Night nervously walked to his father and NightShade was surprised that Night actually walked towards him.
“Um… I want to talk with you dad…” said Night nervously and it felt a bit awkward.
“What is it?” asked his father.
“Um… I… I would like to give you another chance…” when NightShade heard that then did he felt happy then he have never felt before, a single tear ran down his cheek and he looked with a smile at his son and then gave him a hug.
The hug was a bit surprising for Night but he hugged his father back.
“Thanks son…” he sobbed a bit.

“You all make me sick!” yelled a voice and they all looked in shock of who it was.
“Damien!?“


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Aww crap Damiens back


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Oh no damien is back what will happen?

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& i'll draw night & his father next to each other or try gonna take a while to do it perfect bro.

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Yup he is back yikes

Okay ^^

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Chapter 32:
Damien vs. NightShade again

No I killed you” said NightShade there was most surprised.
Damien stood with his wounds open and he still had that big hole in his heart.
“And you did you *bleep*! But some guy revived me and I have come back to get my revenge!” he roared and then ran towards NightShade but Argon strike Damien in his shoulder with his sharp dark claws.
But then something weird happened… Damien didn’t let out a sound or any clue that he ever had been hit and he just kept running until NightShade blocked his attack with his claws.
“You can’t beat me NightShade… I’m already dead so you can’t kill me again” grinned the dead demon dragon.
But Damien then got pushed away by a powerful shadow attack from Night.
“Don’t you ever touch my dad” he hissed.
Damien then stood up and glared at them all.
“So the kids want to play too? I would actually let you go but now when you have interrupted it then shall you die too!” Roared Damien and ran towards Night and was about to strike his sharp claws into him then did Argon tackle Damien to the ground but Damien then slashed Argon’s chest and made a bad wound.
Argon roared in pain but kept Damien down and then breathed his shadow breath at him.
But again didn’t Damien feel any pain and then pushed Argon off him and got up again.
“Didn’t I tell you!? You can’t kill me!” said Damien and then a loud crack was heard as NightShade strike from behind with his claws and made another hole and totally removed his heart.
“I shall kill you first your *bleep*!” roared Damien and pushed NightShade off him, NightShade then hit a tree and was stunned for some seconds, just what Damien needed to kill him so he ran towards him and strike his claws into his heart… or he thought that.

A loud crack was heard but it wasn’t from NightShade’s bones… Night have jumped in front of his father to protect him.
“W-What the?” said Damien there didn’t expect that.
NightShade’s eyes widened as his son was bleeding in his chest and he was coughing blood up.
“No Night!” he said in disbelieve, he had finally become good friends with his son and now this happens?
“I… I’m… Sorry dad…” said Night weakly before his body become limp and Damien touched him away.
“That’s what happens when you deal with me…” said Damien but then he felt NightShade’s paws at his throat and pushed him hard against another tree.
“YOU KILLED HIM YOUR *bleep*!!!!!” yelled NightShade with tears in his eyes there ran down his cheeks.
Damien was surprised of this sudden move and he couldn’t move, NightShade had a very tight grip and had already broken Damien’s neck so his body wouldn’t work anymore but he still grinned.
“And what will you do about it? Kill me?” he let out a evil laugh.
NightShade breathed heavily in anger but then a smile came on his face.
“You know… I know a trick that I haven’t showed you…”
“W-What!?” said Damien surprised and he then felt NightShade’s paw on his head.
“I can take others souls….. Bye your demon…” he said and Damien then roared in pain as he felt his soul leaved slowly his already dead body and then his body became limp.

They all went to Night there still was limp.
Singe looked over him to try to help but…
“Can you help him?” asked Argon there stood next to her.
Singe sighed deeply.
“I’m sorry… but he is already gone…” when she said that a loud crack could be heard as NightShade broke a tree over with his fist and was crying loudly.
“F-Finally he forgives me… and then this crap happens? No I will not believe it!” he shorted angrily and tears ran down his cheeks.
Singe walked up to him and tried to comfort him and he clamed down a bit, enough so he could talk and think clearly.
“At least can we make a grave to him… oh god what am I going to say to Carol?” said Argon sadly.
“Your not going to say anything to her… move!” ordered NightShade and Argon didn’t wait a second to move away.
NightShade hold his paw at the wound and closed his eyes to concentrate, a glow by four colors appeared at his paw, the colors was: red, yellow, blue and green.
After a short time then did NightShade thrust his paw on the wound and then Night gasped for air.
Both Singe and Argon was surprised to see that he had revived him, none of them have ever seen something like that before.
Night couched badly to get his blood to run around his body again and he looked at the now gone wound.
NightShade then hugged Night tightly while tears ran down his cheeks.
“Oh god yes your alive”
“Um yeah but how?” asked Night there was surprised… he saw Damien killed him but then he came back and was confused.
“I would like to know the same” said Singe.
“Um… it is a healing technique I have heard from… my father” said NightShade.
“Oh… how do it works… all I saw was a colorful glow” said Argon.
“You use the four elements, Fire, Electricity, Ice and Earth, to heal a bad wound that can’t be healed on another way…” explained NightShade.
“So… you helped me?” asked Night.
“Of cause… you are my son… I love you” he said and hugged him again and Night hugged back while he cried too.

After that then did they bury Damien’s body so no others would find him.
“Next stop… the holy stone” said Argon excited and the others laughed a bit.


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If Damien won't die, call me, I have Kratos' number.


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Wow for a moment i thought Night was dead. whew. lol

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Kratos will take care of your little bad guy problem.


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Lol xD

Oh noes it is the second last chapter yikes and prepair for a plot twist wink

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Chapter 33:
The holy stone

After a days travel did they finally came to it.
“There is it!” shorted Argon there was the first there saw it.
“Oh god finally” said Singe there was started to get tried.
“Um… do you know how to use it dad?” asked Night.
“I think… well let’s try… stand back everyone” said NightShade and the others moved aside
He then kneeled in front of the stone and looked at it, it was actually a very pretty stone, it didn’t had a single scratch and there was symbols all over it.
“Oh spirit of the stone… please help me” said NightShade and then the stone started to glow a bright light there blinded some of them.
“Yes dark creature there seeks to be pure?” asked a very brightly voice, it sounded as an angel there was singing as the light spoke.
The light then fainted away and a white dragoness’s spirit stood over the stone, she was a very pretty dragoness with blue eyes and some blue marks there glowed on her back and on her legs, her belly was yellow and she had some eye marks there was also yellow and both the marks and her belly glowed a bright light.
And the most beautiful thing about her was that she didn’t had dragon wings but angel wings.
“Oh spirit-” was NightShade about to say but then did the dragoness stop her.
“First… call me Angel… second I will give you some options you can choose…” she said and then NightShade felt the elements he stole from Spyro leaved his body and surrounded the stone in four orbs.
“Okay what is the options… Angel?” asked NightShade.
“You can only choose one remember…
First option is that I will remove that curse you bare…
Second is that I will bless your spirit so you will come in the heaven when you dies and not hell as you should be…
The last one is that I will return those powers to the owner…”
NightShade thought a bit about it… he used a lot of time.
“It can’t be that hard dad… just wish that you would be normal again” said Night there couldn’t wait any longer.
“I have choosed… I will return the powers to Spyro” he answered.

The others looked shocked at him.
“WHAT? But I thought you would get your curse off? Isn’t that’s why we are here?” asked Night there couldn’t believe his fathers answer.
“I do but what about Spyro and Cynder‘s kid? Shall it be my fault that there child wouldn’t see how her or his father really looks? No and that’s why I choose that” explained NightShade.
They all then herd that someone clapped and they saw that it was Angel.
“Good choose NightShade… I’m proud of you” she giggled.
“Um… what?” he asked confused.
“This was a test… all those there comes don’t do it the right way… they steal others powers to get there soul blessed or to remove a curse they have… if they choose one of those options… then would I take there souls and send them to hell” she said and she said the last part in a more cold tone.
“W-W-What?” said NightShade and the others surprised.
“NightShade… stealing isn’t a good thing and it never will… but in your case those options was different”
“How?” asked NightShade there still was confused.
“If you had choose the first one… then would you simply die… remember you are 1103 years old… if your curse got removed you would be that age and then turn to dust…” she explained and NightShade gulped hard.
“And if you had taken the second one then would I have send your soul to hell right away… but you choose the last one and I’m proud… you’re the first there have done that” she giggled again.
“So… you will return Spyro’s powers?” asked NightShade.
“Yes I will… and I will do one thing for you because you have changed… to be a evil dragon in search for power to be a father there take cares of his child… so I will give you this” she said and opened her wings and a ray of light hit NightShade from the sky.
NightShade couldn’t really feel anything but the light was bright so he covered his eyes.
“You have now been blessed and will now return to heaven instead of hell when you dies” she said with a smile.
NightShade looked at her surprised and a tear fall down his cheek.
“T-Tanks a lot Angel”
“Your welcome NightShade… now live peacefully” she said and then disappeared.
Then the orbs flew away towards the temple again.
“Guys… let’s go home” said NightShade with a smile and the tear could still be seen.


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Wow i expected him to get his curse removed, but thats cool he gave spyros powers back. Cant wait to see the last chapter bro.

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Thanks a lot ^^

Oh and I have also now uplaoded my new and what I think is my BEST fanfic here on this site big_smile
Please check it out: http://www.spyroforum.com/topic-10162-t … night.html

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Final Chapter:
Returning home:

The dragons finally came back to the temple after another day and they was all tried.
“We see you made it” said a male voice and they looked up to see Spyro as his normal self and Cynder stood there and welcomed them back home.
“Yeah we kind of did… too bad that dad couldn’t get his curse off” said Night a bit sadly
“It’s alright son… I can survive like this… as long I have you and my love” he grinned and then kissed Singe on the cheek and they both blushed.
Argon looked surprised at them, he didn’t know that they were a couple now.
“But father… there is one thing I want you to do… I would had said it earlier but then did Damien came and I forgot it after that” said Night.
“What is it son?”
“I want you to go to mom and talk with her…” said Night with a serious face.
NightShade looked at his son and then smiled.
“Of course… I will do it right away… I know where she lives” said NightShade
“And I will go with you… I think I can help a bit” said Singe with a smile.
“Sure that would help… see you all” said NightShade and the two new lovers flew away.

“Oh by the way how have Frost and Carol it?” asked Argon there was really excited.
“What about you two check for yourself” giggled Cynder and pointed to a door with her tail blade.
The two young dragons looked first at each other and then ran towards the door and opened it.
They then saw Frost and Carol was cuddling up, Leaf was also in the room and she giggled while she smiled.
The two dragonesses smiled at them and they both then lifted there wings to show them the eggs.
Frost and Argon’s egg was black on the half side and white on the other side.
Carol and Night’s egg was blue with white spots on.
Both the boys widened there eyes and then walked to each there dragonesses and kissed them, Leaf’s giggling could be heard in the background.
“Welcome home” said Frost with a warmly smile.
“Thanks… I have missed you so much” said Argon and kissed her once again and then looked at the egg.
“So it happened… we are going to be parents” said Argon and a tear of happiness ran down his cheek.
Frost giggled and then licked the tear off his cheek.
“Yes we are”

Carol and Night said almost the same thing…
But what would probably happen in the future?

-THE END-

I hope you all enjoyed this fanfic ^^
I have wrote a continueing story to it but I have only wrote two chapters and I am working on two other fanfics I like better so I will wait with that one ^^"


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Hey bro awesome story man. I don't normally like to read because its either boring cause no action or way too much romance. But u found the right balance man, very cool i really am excited u made a continuing story from this. I hope u post it here soon & i hope u post any stories u have on hear. Good job bro.

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Awesome, it's quite sad that it has to end so soon. Oh well, read it again


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Hey bro awesome story man. I don't normally like to read because its either boring cause no action or way too much romance. But u found the right balance man, very cool i really am excited u made a continuing story from this. I hope u post it here soon & i hope u post any stories u have on hear. Good job bro.

Thanks a lot buddy ^^ and if I ever upload the continuing story then will I tell you it wink

Awesome, it's quite sad that it has to end so soon. Oh well, read it again

Lol and thanks ;D


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#75 Oct 20, 2009 9:14 PM

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Not a bad story but you have too many grammar and sentence structure errors. Other then that it's a pretty decent plot. Just make sure you keep no lemons on this site, but you've been following that pretty well since I told you last time. Good work smile


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