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#1 May 10, 2009 9:17 PM

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The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Here is a new fanfic I have started...
I hope that you guys (and girls) like it better then my other fanfic I have stopped...

You are very welcome to comment I just don't like to hear how I could do the story better and comments like that please...

And thanks to my correacter Genobee8492 fom DA ^^

Thanks big_smile now read and enjoy.
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Chapter 1:
The rivalry begines:

10 years after the defeat of the evil purple dragon Malefor everything had been quiet and peaceful.
Spyro and Cynder now lived in the temple as the new guardians.
The other guardians had gotten too old to continue to work so the two dragons had took their jobs as guardians.
Spyro and Cynder have lived in the temple in those 10 years, and they have showed there love to each other and have been mates for a long time, but they haven’t had a child yet even after all those years.
Because of that the two dragons can use so many elements so have they started to teach other young dragons what they have learned and learn their students even more, if a new evil power should come then they were prepared to face it.

-Far away the temple-
“*bleep* IT! It is the first day and I’m already late.” It was a full black dragon with a red eye, he had a red mark that started at his eye and got around all over his body and wings. His name was Argon.

After some time he landed at the outside the temple where he should have been, he saw 9 other dragon and dragonesses where he landed.
"Phew it looks like I just made it.” He said to himself.
But then he heard a female voice said:
“No you was late…and you must be Argon since that was the only name no one replied to when we called out names…but what could I expect of a black dragon.” He turned his head and saw a white dragoness with sky blue eyes and belly, her horns and spikes down her back was made of ice. Her name was Frost.
“I was late and…hey what did you mean by that!?” Argon had a high temper.
“Oh nothing…just that that black dragons can’t do anything useful.”
“Do you try to insult me?” But then did they got interrupted by Spyro who told everybody to be quiet.

Shortly after Spyro said two names one after one, they should hear who their roommates were.
`Just that it doesn’t be that annoying witch´ thought Argon.
`Everybody looks nice just not that jerk of a black dragon´ thought Frost.
“Argon and Frost share room number 11!” shouted Spyro.
“WHAT!!?” yelled Frost who couldn’t believe her ears.
“This is going to be a long and rough time at the temple.” said Argon to himself.
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#2 May 11, 2009 1:46 AM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Great job! Keep it up!  Sorry to hear things didn't work out with your other story, but that doesn't mean no one will like this one.

Keep up the good work!


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#3 May 11, 2009 4:23 PM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Two enemies. One room. Can't tell whether it's a classic or a cliché, but there you go. Other than that good start. Let's see if you're any good at character development.


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#4 May 14, 2009 6:49 PM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

To dragonball06: Yeah "Young Heats" was getting boring to write and I really didn't like the story so I choosed to stop it...
but who knows, maybe will I start it again. ^_^

To Aceedwin: Yeah I got the idea to this story of another story here on SF... but I can't remember what is was called ^^"

Can you explain what you mean with "character development"? hmm
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Anyway here is the next chapter big_smile
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Chapter 2:
Roommates:

Argon and Frost walked to their room, Argon walked a little further then Frost.
`Of all the 9 dragons here why should it just be that witch to be my roommate?´ thought Argon and put the key in the door.
`Why that black dragon? I would rather be roommates with a lesbian dragoness that was in love with me then be roommates with HIM!´ thought Frost and was annoyed that HE was her roommate.
Argon opened the door and walked inside. It was luckily a big room with enough space for both of them and the beds were on each side of the room.
Argon was quick and took the bed on the right side.
“Hey who says that you shall have the right bed Blacky?” asked Frost annoyed.
“What did you call me!?” asked Argon angrily. He become very annoyed when other dragons call him nicknames or made fun of his mark, his mark will glow a stronger red color then the red it already is when he’s angry.
“Don’t you like the nickname I have given you Blacky?” she teased him.
“NO I don’t, and I came in first so I choose first bed!” he yelled at her.
“To bad…it fits you.” She said and lied on the bed to the left.

`Don’t listen to that witch…tomorrow I’ll learn more about my shadow element from Cynder…I haven’t seen her yet but from what I’ve heard of her she should be sexy´ thought Argon and was excited about tomorrow.

`Hmm…Spyro is a legend, maybe he has something to teach me against that jerk Argon´ thought Frost and glared at Argon.
Argon noticed it.
“What is your problem?” he asked annoyed.
“You.” She said directly to him.
“It is only because I’m a black dragon?”
“Yeah because black dragons are evil…just look at Cynder.” She said.
“Cynder? What has she done?” he asked a little confused.
“Oh you don’t know? Then find it out by yourself.” She said and tried to fall asleep.
`I could ask her tomorrow´ thought Argon and also tried to fall asleep, it had been a rough day.


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#5 May 15, 2009 5:05 PM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

*puts on white coat and pulls down blackboard*

Character development is the growth of a character's personality in relation to its surroundings. For instance, a character in a situation of extreme hard work and pain is likely to become more gritty. Also, if a character is told something dramatic, like, "Your father murdered thousands of innocent people." Your character will be affected.

In GCSE English, we look in great depth into the way events and situations affect characters. Right now in a project, that's what I have to do. In "How I live now" I have to write a presentation on how the war affects the characters of four people.


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#6 May 16, 2009 6:04 AM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Ok okay thanks... I just don't know how much I can do that but maybe can I try. hmm
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Chapter 3:
The first trainings day:

The next morning Argon woke up with a yawn, he looked at Frost’s bed and saw that she was still asleep.
The lessons for ice were later on in the day while the lessons for shadow were earlier in the morning.
It didn’t matter to Argon because he was used to waking up early.
He walked down to get some breakfast and after he ate his breakfast he walked to the dojo.
When he entered it he saw a grown up black dragoness that was waiting.
`That must be Cynder…wow the rumors are true´ he thought and looked around the dojo.
He then saw a black dragon that was sleeping on the floor, it was a black dragon with a blue belly and blue horns. He has a blue moon mark in his forehead and blue stars on his body. He also had a blue moon shaped tail blade.
“Hey Night wake up!” said Cynder and the sleepy black dragon yawned and got up.
“I’m awake.” He said and yawned again.
“And you must be Argon.” Said Cynder and looked at the black dragon.
“Yeah…and you must be Cynder, nice to meet you.” said Argon.
“It is also nice to meet you Argon.” said Cynder with a smile.
Argon then remembered what Frost said yesterday.
“Um…can I ask you about something?” he asked.
“Of course, what is it?” she asked.
“Have you ever been evil?” Cynder looked at him and hesitated to answer his question.
“Um…yeah I have…I had once been the Dark Masters 'pet'.” She answered with a sigh.
Both Argon and Night were surprised.
“The Dark Master!? That evil purple dragon from 10 years ago?” asked Argon and Cynder nodded.
“Yes but please don’t talk with the others about it…I’m trying to forget my evil past.”
“Alright I understand.” Answered Argon and smiled a little.
“Should we train or small talk?” said Night now fully awake.
“Yeah let’s train so you can’t move after we’re done.” said Cynder with a little evil smile.
`Or maybe she’s still a little evil´ thought Night.
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#7 May 20, 2009 7:32 PM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Remember comments are still welcome big_smile
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Chapter 4:
Friends:

After the tough training Argon and Night walked together to get some lunch.
They found a table and sat next to each other.
“*bleep* her Cynder is strong.” said Night still exhausted after the training.
“Yeah she is.” said Argon.
“So…do you have any family?” asked Argon.
“Um…I never knew my father and I don’t want to know him.” answered Night with a sigh.
“Why not?” asked Argon a bit confused.
“Because he *bleep*ed my mom.” Argons eyes widened.
“I’m sorry to hear that.” said Argon.
“It’s okay…if he didn’t do it then wouldn’t I be born right.” said Night and laughed a little.
“What about yourself? Do you have any family?” asked Night.
“Yes but they just leaved me.” sighed Argon.
“What? Why?” asked Night.
“I actually don’t know, they just left me out of nothing,”
“I’m sorry to hear that.” said Night and stroked his back trying to comfort him.
“Thanks…you are actually my first friend Night.” said Argon and smiled.
“No problem my friend.” said Night and smiled back.

“I’m curious…have you ever been evil?” asked Argon.
“How evil?”
“Have you ever killed someone?”
“Hmm…nope but there is one I really want to kill but can’t because then my mother be sad and I don’t want her to be that.” answered Night.
“Who is it?”
“My stepfather”
“Oh…”
“I may have gotten that evilness from my dad…What my mother told me he was a dark demon…but I also got my good sides from my mother.” said Night.
“But why do you hate him?” asked Argon curiously
“Um…I just don’t like him…because he’s my ‘stepfather’…I would like to have a real and kind father…not that stupid demon.” answered Night.
“Yeah I understand that.” said Argon and tried to comfort him as he did before.
“Thanks Argon.” said Night and smiled to him.
“No problem…hey shall we train a little?” asked Argon.
“Sorry but I’m still very exhausted…maybe another time.” said night.
“Alright then… see ya later!” said Argon and walked back to his room.


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#8 May 24, 2009 6:17 PM

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Chapter 5:
Ups…:

Argon walked back to his room. Frost wasn’t there so he thought that she might be training right now. He then prepared to take a shower after his hard training day. He took what he needed and walked to the bathroom.
But when he opened the door he saw something he hadn’t expected.
Frost was inside and was taking a shower, she stood with her back against him and she hadn’t noticed him.
Argon would have left the room but he couldn’t get his eyes off her.
Her white scales lightened up in the room with a beautiful white glow, he could see-through her ice horn and spikes of the water and now looked like crystals. He blushed and his eyes kept looking at her beautiful body.
But Frost turned her head around and saw that Argon was peeking at her, her eyes widened and she didn’t look happy to see him right there.
“I-I’m sorry!” said Argon quickly and closed the door and walked back to the room.
While he walked there he thought about what he just saw.
`Why can’t I get that picture out of my head?´ he thought and lied on his bed and blushed as he remembered what he saw.

After some time Frost came back to the room from the shower, She walked to her bed and packed her bath stuff.
In the mean time Argon lied with his back against Frost.
“Did you like what you saw?” asked Frost, her voice didn’t sound angry as he thought she would be.
Argon thought about her question.
“Um…I-I’m sorry I thou-“
“I asked did you like what you saw?” She interrupted him.
It was quiet for some time.
“Yeah I did…your white scales gives off a petty glow when they get wet, your horns and spikes I could see though and they looked like crystals.” He said and blushed again when he thought about what he had seen.
Frost blushed when she heard how beautiful he told her she was but she still didn’t like him and that he saw her in the shower.
“I’ve got to go to training blacky.” She said and walked out, he didn’t react to what she said, he just lied on his bed and couldn’t get the picture out of his head.
`What is there wrong with me? I don’t like her, but I can’t stop thinking about her.´ he thought and walked to bed after he had taken his shower.


My heart belongs to SexyCynder from DA ^///^

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#9 May 24, 2009 6:41 PM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Okay, that's kinda silly. Who asks their mortal enemy if they look good naked? That's just a little bit silly.

It's also possibly going too far with sexuality.


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#10 May 24, 2009 6:47 PM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Of cuase it is silly XD i'm a silly boy and I like to be it tongue
And do you know that dragons are always naked? XD
Have you seen a dragon with clouthes on?
I don't think so XD

(Eidted becuase then would the topic be closed)


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#11 May 24, 2009 7:04 PM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Alright, just warning you.

Also, have you ever seen a dragon taking a shower?


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#12 May 26, 2009 11:53 AM

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DragonOfDrakness1992 wrote:

Of cuase it is silly XD i'm a silly boy and I like to be it tongue
And do you know that dragons are always naked? XD
Have you seen a dragon with clouthes on?
I don't think so XD

sexuality? I didn't say anything about there privet parts...
I could write that Argon got a hard on but I didn't XD

But if those who controle this site find it too sexual then can they close it... I don't care tongue

Please edit your post.


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#13 May 28, 2009 6:33 AM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

To Aceedwin: No I haven't seen a dragon taking a shower...
and they don't use beds and all that...
but it is a Fanfic so... so what!? it dosn't matter do it?
I have heard stories where the dragons was almost like humans and that also make it funny...
So do you have more to say?

Anyway here is the next chapter:
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Chapter 6:
Feelings:

The next morning Argon couldn’t concentrate during the training.
He got the entire time beat down by Night and usually it him that beat him down.
“Hey dude is there something wrong?” asked Night confused that he won all the time so easily.
Argon had still that picture of Frost in his mind. The white scales that sparkled and the crystal horns in the water. Argon blushed while he thought about it.
“Hey Argon!” said Cynder and he then woke up from his daydreaming.
“S-Sorry…” he said and stood up
“What is there wrong?” asked Cynder.
Argon looked down at the ground and blushed again.
“Um…it is just this picture I can’t get out of my head.” answered Argon.
“What kind of picture?” asked Cynder.
Argon hesitate a little but then answered:
“Of my roommate.” He answered.
“Wait…don’t you and Frost hate each other?” asked Night who heard rumors about them.
“Yeah but…by accident I saw her in the shower and I can’t get that picture out of my head no matter how much I try.” Answered Argon and blushed.
“Try to talk to her about it…it normally helps.” suggested Cynder.
“Yeah maybe…it can’t hurt to try at least.” He said and leaved the dojo to find Frost.

“Night you can also go now.” said Cynder.
“Oh thanks.” He said and was on his way out but then heard a voice said:
“Hey cute guy!” It was a pink dragoness with a white belly and wing membrane, and she had small horns.
Night looked at her and blushed a little.
“W-Who are you and what are you doing here?” he asked a little nervous.
“I’m Carol and I’m just here to look a little on your training…I’m a fire dragoness and shall train soon with my group…but what is your name handsome?” she asked with a giggle and blushed.
`Huh? She thinks that I’m handsome!´
“I’m Night…and you are cute.” He said and looked away blushing of embarrassment.
“Aww thanks sweetie…do you want to go on a date with me later?” she asked and smiled to him.
“Um…sure I would love that.”
“Alright then. Meet me here after training.” She giggled and walked to the dojo where Spyro talked with Cynder.
`She is beautiful´ thought Night and chose to stay and watch her train.

Somewhere in a evil place far from the temple:
“What do you say my minion?” asked an evil dragon.
“Um…I just said that I think that the purple dragon…Spyro was his name…could be a threat for you…he defeated Malefor.” The minion then got quiet as the evil dragon took him up and hold a tight grip around his neck.
“Don’t say the name ‘Malefor’ again…Because of him we couldn’t choose our own parts and became slaves for him…but now he’s dead, we have become stronger…even stronger than him…and thanks to this ‘Spyro’ but now he shall die.” Said the evil dragon and threw the minion against a wall and the evil dragon started to laugh.
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NOTE: Carol dosn't belongs to me... she belongs to my friend loyboys on DA


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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

To you there is wondering where chapter 7 is, then is it becuase it is a lemon and those aren't allowed on this website so I will not post the chapter here.
To you there wouldn't lose what is happening then is the chapter about Night and Carol.
IF... you want to read the chapter then PM me and tell me your age and I will decide that you can see the chapter

But here is the 8th chapter so enjoy ^^
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Chapter 8:
Why Frost hate black dragons:

`What should I say to her? I don’t even think that I love her.´ thought Argon while he walked to his and Frost’s room.
When he came to the door he could feel that his heart beat faster and he could feel sweat on his forehead.
He opened the door and could see that Frost was sitting on her bed with her back against him.
“Hey Frost do you have time-“
“Get off my site your black freak.” She said and sounded like she was annoyed somehow.
Argon could now feel anger streaming though his body, he had got enough of her bad attitude.
“Enough! What the hell is your problem with black dragons!?” asked Argon with an angry voice.
Frost turned her head around, and her eyes was filled with tears and they rolled down at her cheeks.
“Because of a black jerk like you my parents died!!” she yelled to him and ran crying out of the room.
Argon felt really bad about that way he had talked to her. He looked at her bed and saw a picture; he looked closer to it and saw Frost and two other dragons next to her on each side of her. The male dragon was light blue with a darker blue belly and wing membrane, he had spikes down his back there also was dark blue like his belly. The Female dragoness looked like Frost; she was a white dragon with pretty blue eyes like Frost and had a light blue belly also like Frost.
`That must be her parents.´ thought Argon.

After some time he chose to try to find her and say sorry about the way he had acted to her.
After an hour he found her outside the temple in the garden.
“Frost?” he said with a low voice.
“What do you want you jerk?” she asked and sniffled.
“I will just say…sorry.”
“Sorry for what?” she sounded like she didn’t care about it and him at all.
“That I yelled like that to you…I didn’t know that your parents died because of a black dragon…so I say sorry.” He said and started to walk away.
But then they heard a rumble and not far from them, came there on the ground a blood red pentagram.
“W-What’s happening!?” asked Frost confused.
“I don’t know…but it can’t be good.” said Argon and looked at the pentagram where something became visible on it.


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Chapter 9:
Attack on the temple part 1:

After a few seconds a dragon became visible on the pentagram.
It was a red male dragon with a black belly, he had a scar over his right eye and he had white spikes all over his body.
“So this is the temple where the famous Spyro lives.” said the evil dragon and looked around.
“Who are you!?” asked Argon, and then the dragon looked at him.
“I’m a demonic dragon called Damien and I’m here to kill Spyro.” answered Damien.
Argon now stood in his fighting pose, this dragon was evil and he could feel it.
“HA! Do you think that you have a change against me? Hehe, let me make you suffer first by hurting your girlfriend.” said Damien.
“I’m NOT his girlfriend!!” yelled Frost annoyed.
“So what!?” said Damien and fired a red demonic energy ball towards her.
Frost stood there with fear in her eyes and couldn’t move.
“Frost!!” shorted Argon and jumped in front of her and got hit by the demons attack instead of her.
Frost eyes widened as she saw Argon jump in front of her, she ran to where he landed.
“Argon!!” She said. He opened one of his eyes and saw her cry in front of him.
He was badly hurt and he couldn’t move.
“Your jerk! Why did you do that?” she asked confused of his actions.
Argon could feel that he was about to faint but he managed to say:
“Because I think that I love you.” He answered and closed his eyes.
Frost eyes widened.
`What was it he just said? That he thinks that he loves me?´ she thought and could hear her heart beat fast and she tried to wake him up by shaking his body but with no luck.
“Argon wake up!”

“How pathetic…I’ll let my minions take care of you two.” said Damien and walked inside the temple and two demonic dragons came near them.
They looked almost like their leader; red dragons with a black belly but they had less white spikes then their leader.
“Argon please wakes up.” said Frost starting to cry of fear.

-TO BE CONTINUED-
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Chapter 10:
Attack on the temple part 2:

The two demonic dragons came closer and closer to them and were ready to kill them.
Frost still tried to wake Argon up but still with no luck.
She cried and was too scared to fight.
But then suddenly the two evil dragons got blown back off a strong wind.
In front of Frost landed a grown black dragoness, it was Cynder.
“Are you alright Frost?” she asked and looked at the white dragoness and she nodded a ‘yes’ back.
Cynder turned her head around again and saw that the two evil dragons were on their way up on their feet and hissed at her and jumped towards her and she fought against them.

After some time the two evil dragons lied down on the ground and were dead.
Cynder looked at the white dragoness.
“Are you alright Frost?” she asked again.
“Yeah I’m fine.” She answered.
“What about Argon?”
“He got badly hurt as he…saved me…” she answered and was blushing a little.
Frost looked at Cynder and saw that she was bleeding, she had got a scar on her cheek.
“You are bleeding!” said Frost.
“It’s nothing…let us get Argon to safety.” said Cynder and took Argon up on Frost’s back.
“W-Why me?” asked Frost and felt his heavy body on her back.
“There are still more of those little demons and I must go and help Spyro…he is fighting their leader.” said Cynder and ran back inside to find Spyro.

Frost ran towards her and Argon’s room but she ran into another evil demonic dragon.
She got frightened again and couldn’t move.
The demon prepared to attack her and jumped towards her.
She closed her eyes and heard the sound of breaking ribs, she opened her eyes and saw the demon lying dead in front of her.
“Are you alright?” asked a voice behind her, she turned around and saw that it was Night, but she didn’t know him and got scared.
“Is Argon hurt!?” he asked surprised and Frost could now guess that he was from the shadow group and she nodded to his question.
“Let us get him to his room.” said Night and then Carol arrived and saw Argon was hurt and understanding the situation continued to run towards his room without running into other demons and at least come to his room.


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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Thanks to my friend loyboys to do this as a RP with me ^^
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Chapter 11:
Spyro vs. Damien:

"What do you want with me?" asked Spyro who stood face to face with the demonic dragon.
"I want to kill you." answered Damien and they started to walk in a circle around each other.
"Why?" asked the purple dragon curious.
"You are the only threat to me...and for that you shall die!" said Damien and attacked Spyro with his spiky tail.
Spyro rolled away and let the spiky tail hit the ground, and then he bit down on it and breathed his electricity breath on it.
Damien felt the electricity streaming though his body and he screamed of pain.
He then fired a ball of demonic energy and hit Spyro with it.
Spyro gasped as he hit the ground and rolled to his feet, then shot a blast of fire at Damien's chest
Damien got hit and screamed of pain.
"So you are as good as the rumors says." he said and made a fear scream at Spyro.
Spyro covered his ears and groaned, then charged against him.
Damien dodged Spyro’s attack and attacked again with his spiky tail and hit his cheek causing it to bleed and gave him a scar.
Spyro shook his head and then froze Damien's feet to the ground
He tried to get free but was stuck. "*bleep* you purple freak!" he hissed.
Spyro closed his eyes and the ground quaked as he unleashed a massive fire fury.
Damien got hit by the flames and landed on the ground, but then got up again.
"I'm not done yet." he said and ran towards Spyro.
Spyro was ready and he charged, ducking under him and throwing him into the air.
From above Damien fired a red beam that hit Spyro on his back. He then landed on his legs again.
Spyro got up shakily and his eyes turned white, he growled.
"After I have killed you I will go after that black dragoness your care about." he said and got ready to attack him again.
Spyro roared and he turned into his dark form, "DON'T YOU TOUCH HER!!!"
Damien was so surprised of his sudden change that he stood wide open to be attacked.
Spyro charged a beam of darkness and blasted him.
Damien’s eyes widened as she saw the beam and almost avoided it.
He got hit on his left shoulder and it burned like hell as he screamed of pain.
Spyro then charged and bit his hurt shoulder.
Damien screamed loudly of pain and couldn't do anything because of the pain he felt in his shoulder.
Spyro threw him into a rock and a sound of cracking ribs was heard.
Damien lied on the ground in pain and knew that he had lost the fight.
But then came Cynder inside the room where they were fighting.
"Spyro!" She shouted as she saw his dark from again after ten peaceful years.
He turned back to normal and looked at Cynder.
Damien saw a chance to get away and the red pentagram appeared under him.
"I will be back!" he said and disappeared.

Cynder ran up to Spyro. "Are you alright...Oh you are bleeding." she saw the scar on his cheek that Damien gave him.
"I'm fine...what about you?" he saw the mark on her face and tears welled in his eyes.
"You mean this? Its nothing." she said and licked his wound.
Spyro flinched as she did. It kind of hurt
"I'm sorry." she said and tried to lick it gently and slowly.
He let her lick it clean and licked hers
"We should check on the students and see if someone got badly hurt." said Cynder and Spyro nodded and followed her to check on the others.

Damien’s minions were also gone and everything went peaceful from now on, the only one that got badly hurt was Argon.


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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Lol ones again I forgot to post a chapter here ^^"
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Chapter 12:
Taking care of Argon:

Argon lied on his bed and was unconscious.
Frost sat next to him on a chair and looked at him.
There was a knock on the door and Night came in.
“How is he?” he asked with a sad tone.
“He is fine I think.” She answered with the same tone as him.
“Okay…I have called Spyro so he could see to him.” said Night and was on his way out when he stopped at the door and looked at her.
“I thought that you didn’t like him.” Frost didn’t answer him and then he walked out and closed the door.

Frost sat and looked at Argon.
`Why? Why do I stay here and look after him? Maybe as a thanks that he saved me?´ she thought and remember the way he jumped in front of her and used himself as a shield against Damien’s attack and his words: “I think that I love you” was in her mind all the time.
`Did he mean it? Or was it the attack made him lose his mind? Or-´ her thoughts stopped when she heard a knock on the door again and this time it was Spyro and he came inside.
“Frost…are you hurt?” he asked and was worried of his student, she was a good student to him, always ready to learn a new technique.
“I’m fine but Argon is unconscious.” She answered.
Spyro walked to Argon and looked at him.
“It looks like he is fine…but he needs to rest.” said Spyro and Frost smiled a little and Spyro noticed, he smiled and walked outside their room.
“It looks like they like each other.” He said to himself and walked away.

Damien lied hurt in his hideout.
“That *bleep* purple dragon! Who knew that he had dark powers?” He said annoyed over his defeat by Spyro.
“W-What do we do then?” asked one of his minions.
“Hehehe…my attacks on one of their students cursed him…when I want to I can release his curse and then attack from the inside of the temple.” said Damien and laughed an evil laugher.
“But…first we prepare another attack and this time they don’t have a chance to win.” He said and continued his evil laugher.


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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Chapter 13:
Maybe in love:

Argon slowly woke up and could feel that he had a very painful headache.
He looked around and saw that he was inside his room; his eyes widened when he looked down and saw Frost lying on his chest with her head and arms and was asleep, he blushed and smiled.
He moved his paw and stroked her head that made her moan lightly.
`She looks so cute and peaceful when she is sleeping´ he thought and pulled his paw back.
Short time after this Frost woke up with a yawn and saw that Argon was awake.
She almost jumped up and stared at him, she blushed over her own reaction.
Argon grinned inside himself as he saw that she blushed.
“Morning.” He said with a smile.
Frost didn’t know what she should say and simply asked:
“H-How do you feel?” Argon took his paw to his head.
“I have a bad headache and my body feels sore.” He answered.
She walked back up to him and took her paw on his forehead, the contact made them blush.
“Wow you are warm! You need to rest.” She said and removed her paw from him.
He ginned inside himself again.
“Are you now my personally nurse?” he teased.
Frost blushed again.
“Um…I have some experience with healing so…yeah I suppose I am.”
Argon blushed to her answer.
“Then I will do what you say.” He smiled and then lied down to rest as she said he should.

Thoughts flew though Frost’s head.
`Do I like him…he is actually funny and…sweet…and brave…he saved me from that demon´
Frost didn’t know that she loved him or not.
What would others think if the black dragon hater fell in love with a black dragon?
She should wait and see what would happen; first he needed to recover.

Night and Carol sat under a tree in the temple’s garden and held around each other.
“I’m worried about Argon.” said Night.
“Don’t worry he will be fine…Frost is taking care of him.” said Carol with a smile.
Night started to laugh and Carol looked confused at him.
“What is so funny?” she asked. He then looked at her.
“You don’t know Frost?” he asked and she shaked her head as a no.
“She hates black dragons…I don’t know why but she does hate them…and now she has to take care of one and I find that funny.” He said smiling still laughing a little.
“Oh I understand what you mean…but I think it is kind of her that she wants to take care of him.”
“Wait she chose to take care of him? That doesn’t sound like the Frost I have heard of.” said Night.
“I don’t know…I have never met her but she looks worried at him…maybe she likes him” when Carol said that then Night could not stop laughing.
“I’m sorry but I don’t think that they will end up falling in love.” he said.
“Yeah maybe not…that is just a feeling I had.” She said.
“Wow are you cute.” Said Night and kissed her lips lightly.
Carol blushed and kissed back with a deep kiss.
“You are silly…but I like that” she giggled.
“Hehe I couldn’t get a better girlfriend then you.” Said Night and then cuddled Carol up to him and he stroked her head.
“And I couldn’t get a better boyfriend.” She giggled.


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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

*Sigh* And here we go again... no comments... -_-
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Chapter 14:
The kiss:

Days went with Frost taking care of Argon and her feelings towards him grew stronger with each day that went.
One of the days Frost fell over something and landed on Argon, their heads was very close to each other, they both looked into each other’s eyes and blushed.
Frost came to herself and got quickly up and apologized.

After that day her heart beat fast every time she was near him.
Argon noticed that Frost had changed very much lately.
She didn’t talk bad to him anymore and she didn’t complain that she should take care of him.
He liked the new Frost so much that he had decided to do something that would be stupid.
“Hey Frost?” he said and she looked at him.
“Yeah Argon?” she asked and he took his paw up and signaled that she should come closer.
She wondered what he wanted but still came closer and sat next to the bed.
“Come closer…” he whispered and she then moved closer to him.
When she moved closer he then rose his head up and kissed her on the lips while he had her eyes closed.
Frost eyes widened and she would have pushed him away but deep inside her it felt good and she couldn’t stop but to kiss back, and this was both there first kiss they ever had.
Argon stroked the back of her head with his paw and felt her soft scales.
Frost moved one of her paws to his chest and felt his muscular body.
She hadn’t noticed how handsome a body he had.

Then they broke the kiss and looked deeply into each other’s eyes.
“W-Why did you do that?” she asked and blushed.
He softly stroked her cheek while he smiled.
“Because I know now that I love you.” He answered and kissed her lightly on her lips.
She blushed and looked at the ground.
“I can’t believe it but I love you too.”
“I know.” He said and nuzzled her cheek with his cheek.
After some time Frost got on his bed and lied closely to Argon and stroked his muscular body again.
“Why haven’t I noticed that you are so handsome?” she said with a giggle and blushed.
Argon grinned and stroked her shoulder softly.
“Because the only thing you noticed about me was my color and not how I am.”
Frost blushed of embarrassment.
“Sorry that I have been so mean to you.”
“I forgive you.” He said and held her in a lovely embrace till they fall asleep.


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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

I really hope that you all enjoy my story so far...
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Chapter 15:
A new enemy:

After some days Argon recovered at last.
He left his room with Frost and they took a walk in the temple while their tails were twisted.
On their walk all the other dragons watched with a surprised expression on their faces.
Frost blushed, it was embarrassing for her.
Argon noticed it and then comforted her by lying a wing over her and kissed her cheek and smiled.
“Just ignore them.”
“I know…but it is hard.” She said and was still blushed of embarrassment.

“No f***ing way!” said a voice behind them.
They turned around and saw Night with his mouth open and Carol there smiling.
“Something wrong Night?” grinned Argon.
“Um…the two dragons that hate each other are now walking together with their tails twisted is pretty weird.” said Night and still couldn’t believe it.
“I think it is cute” giggled Carol.
“Thanks Carol…shall we all walk together?” asked Argon and the others thought that it sounded as a great idea so they walked towards the garden.

“Soon we will be ready again” said Damien who now could walk without it hurting too much.
“Hehe looks like you could need some help old friend” said a voice though the cave.
“Hm!? How dare you to come here to me…do you really want to die?” said the demonic dragon and knew who it was.
“Aww is this the way you say hi to an old friend Damien?” asked a black dragon that walked out of a shadow. He had dark blue eyes and belly, his marks and scars was the same color as his eyes but there were only marks and scars on the right side of his body.
“What do you want…NightShade?”
“As I said…help an old friend.”
“How can you call me your friend when you left me in the dark demon realm like that!?” hissed the red demonic dragon.
“I just wanted to come out first…you would have done the same…anyway I saw your failure”
“WHAT! How!?”
“Have you got old in those ten years? I’m a shadow I can watch everything…and I also see this Spyro as a threat…just this time I will help you and then I will leave again.” said NightShde.
“Hmm…fine then but if you stay a second more then will I kill you.”
“Sounds fair enough…oh I have some family in the temple as well and maybe could we…make him on our side? Said NightShade with a evil smile on his face.
“Ha! I already have something strong inside the temple.”
“And that is?”
“I have cursed one of their students…I thought you saw everything?” said Damien with a grin on his face.
“Oh shut up! And what does this curse do?” he asked.
“When I want to he will turn into an evil from under my control…but first I shall ready myself to attack again.”
“I can just try to fight Spyro then…or will you take him?” asked NightShade.
“I don’t care…just that he dies.” Said Damien and the two evil dragons planned there next attack.
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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

This is your best story. You could take that as a compliment or an insult.

What? Well, you looked like you wanted comments...


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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Did you just come with a lie or do you really mean it?
Nah I'm just joking XD thanks a lot for the comment and I hope that it didn't hurt you too much to post it wink

Okay back to the fanfic... chapter 16 is another lemon
(I could have skiped it but two friends on DA said I should still do it)
And again if you want to read it so send me a PM and I will decide that I will show it to you smile

To you there don't want to lose what happend but don't read lemons so can I say that it was about Spyro and Cynder there tried to get a child again... and did it work?
read it in the next chapter here wink
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Chapter 17:
New coming child

After a week came there a surprise for everyone, but mostly for Spyro.
Cynder was finally gravide.
It was great news but then Spyro and Cynder couldn’t train the students.
Cynder was sick because she was gravide and Spyro had to take care of Cynder.
So the students had a kind of vacation while the teachers waited on the coming child.

Cynder sat and puked into a bucked with Spyro sitting next to her with a paw on her back.
“Are you alright Cynder?” Asked Spyro worried.
“Do It look like I’m alright!?” hissed Cynder.
She was in the middle of a mood swing in the moment and Spyro knew it, so he didn’t get mad because of her answer.
Cynder stopped to vomitting after a few minutes.
“I’m sorry Spyro.” Said Cynder because of the answer she gave him before.
Spyro hold his paws around her in a lovely embrace.
“It is alright Cynder… just relax and think that we shall have a child together.” Said Spyro and kissed her forehead. Cynder smiled.
“Yeah… after 10 long years shall we finally have a child together.” She said and a tear rolled down at her cheek.
Spyro licked it away and kissed her cheek.
“I love you Cynder.”
“I love you too Spyro.” Said they and then shared a passionate kiss.

After some time Cynder asked,“What do you think it will be? A boy or a girl?”
“I don’t know… I will be happy with both.” Answered Spyro with a smile, “I just know that you will be a great mother Cynder” Cynder then started to cry again because of her mate's sweet words.
“And I know you will be a great father” she said and kissed him again.
Spyro broke the kiss after some time.
“Lie down and rest… you need it.” Said Spyro and Cynder felt a little dizzy and lied down on the bed and slowly dowsed off to sleep.
Spyro smiled and left their bedroom when he knew that Cynder was asleep.


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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Sorry for the long wait ^^"
But I had some other stories to work on ^^"
But here is the next chapter... I hope you all still like my story smile
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Chapter 18:
Thoughts:

In the time that Cynder was gravide all the students had a vacation.
Argon and Frost lay on the soft grass in the temple gardens and relaxed by looking on the white clouds in the blue sky.
“So… Spyro and Cynder shall have a child.” Frost sighed.
She had always wanted to get one herself but didn’t know if she was ready to get one.
Argon had the same thoughts as Frost had.
He lied closer to her and kissed her neck, making her let out a small moan.
“I thought…” said Argon and looked at the beautiful white dragoness and she looked at him.
Argon could feel that he was getting nervous when he should tell her the rest.
“Um… s-shall w-w-we also h-have a c-c-child?”
Frost eyes widened when she heard that and they both blushed deeply.
“A-Are you serious?” asked Frost.
Argon looked away and was afraid that she would say no.
“Y-Yeah I am”
Frost thought about it in some time.
“I-I don’t really know about it… I don’t know if I can do it.”
Argon looked disappointed but understood her.
“Let me think about it Argon.” She said and kissed him on the cheek.
Argon’s face lit up and he kissed her back.
“Alright use the time you need.” He said with a smile and they shared a deep kiss in the lips.

At the mean time at the demon dragons hideout was Damien still too weak to fight but he could walk fine.
“How long will it be before you can fight again?” asked NightShade.
“A month I think” answered Damien, having almost made peace with the black dragon so far.
“That was a long time… I could destroy the temple in that time.” said NightShade.
“Then do it!” hissed Damien.
“I would… but it would be suicide when Spyro and Cynder are there.” He explained.
“Then we must wait” said Damien and lied down to rest.
“Yeah… we must.” Said NightShade and walked outside of the cave.
“Maybe… could I return to normal again…”


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Re: The Legend of Spyro: Rivals

Well I have an important messages...
I got suspended from DA in two weeks... and it sucks >.<
And I first post a new chapter on DA and then on this site so I will not post anything here in two weeks...
So if the adminds sees that I don't post anything so don't lock it... it is just becuase I'm suspended from DA...


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