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#26 Jan 10, 2009 11:19 AM

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#27 Jan 10, 2009 10:26 PM

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#28 Jan 12, 2009 5:20 PM

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#29 Jan 12, 2009 10:56 PM

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#30 Jan 13, 2009 7:03 PM

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#31 Jan 13, 2009 8:27 PM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: The Purples love

First of all, the speed at which you post your stories is amazing. I update once a month, or closer to once every two months, so I commend you for that.

However, though the antics of your characters was cute and humorous, there seemed to be a lack of depth to them. What I mean is that you really didn't take the time to develop them properly, but since this is a fanfiction, you can get away with that a bit.

Also, I've noticed that there doesn't really seem to be a plot or a storyline in this story, aside from the fact that several young dragons randomly show up and start having romantic intrigues.

I know I'm being a bit vague with my suggestions, but since this is your first fanfiction, don't worry too much about it. You'll get better with time. Hope to see more of your work in the future.

Sincerely

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#32 Jan 13, 2009 8:46 PM

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#33 Jan 14, 2009 7:53 PM

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#34 Jan 15, 2009 6:51 PM

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#35 Jan 16, 2009 10:44 PM

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#36 Jan 17, 2009 8:43 PM

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#37 Jan 18, 2009 8:53 PM

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#38 Jan 19, 2009 10:14 AM

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Re: The Legend of Spyro: The Purples love

Cool can't wait for the next story


are there lemons through?


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#39 Jan 19, 2009 12:34 PM

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Huh???

What are lemons???

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#40 Jan 20, 2009 2:11 AM

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err nevermind i've said too much


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#41 Jan 20, 2009 7:16 PM

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#42 Feb 26, 2009 7:41 PM

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Your work is great.

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#43 Feb 26, 2009 7:51 PM

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#44 Feb 28, 2009 6:53 PM

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I made a story called legend of spyro:torment. tell if you like it. smile but i wouldn't live up to yours but worth a try (i hope)

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#45 Feb 28, 2009 6:56 PM

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I will take a look on it when I have time...
as you know so am I'm busy...
I have only finished one of my three stories...
But I will try to read it... (^_^)

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