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#1 Jul 05, 2008 2:17 AM
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Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
Spyro is now a full grown adult,but he lost a very dear dragon.(Cynder)
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Spyro opend his eyes seeing a blood red sun,a tear came down from his tired eyes he got up and ran out of the temple,screaming Cynder,skidding to a stop he looked around and saw in front of him a grave stone marking out the word Cynder.
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FLASH BACK
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Spyro was fighting along side Cynder against the DM.His Strong flame knocked Spyro to the ground it burned his whole body,a mad laugh came out of the DM's slobbering mouth "Now Cynder prepare to DIE!"
"No Cynder!!"Spyro tried to get up but he just fell back down.
The DM was rising up now preparing to finish off Cynder.
Spyro closed his eyes as a terrible scream of pain came from the dying black dragon,every thing went quiet.
"You monster!!You killed her!!"
No matter what Spyro got up charging for the Dark Master his love just died and he was angryer than ever "This time YOU die!"Spyro screamed as loud as he could,spreading his wings the Dark Master gasped as Spyro unleashed a most devastating fury.
Spyro dropped as the beast weakly fell to the groubnd and trotted to his loves corpse "CYNDER NO!!" He tapped her but she just lay there,dead.
Sniffing he left,he destroyed the cave taking the corpse with him.
When he arrived back at the temple he hung his head,Ignitus came to his side.
"She's dead."He croaked sadly
Ignitus felt a tear-as well as the others.
After the funeral Spyro left to sleep.
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FLASH BACK
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Spyro Cried out yet again the word Cynder 4 times.
Without Sparx he had nobody,Sparx found a dragonfly and fell in love.
Spyro had nobody.
Terrador walked out "Spyro she is still in your heart,she is not lost."
"T-Terrador i'll never talk to her again!"
Terrador was sad too he thought it was best to leave Spyro next to the gravestone of Cynder.
Spyro decided to stay next to the stone.Ignitus and Cyril were on the top of the temple keeping an eye on Spyro.
"Ignitus the young lad is sad,can't we help?"Slowly spoke Cyril.
"We'll leave him for a few days,I have felt that pain before Cyril and it is most terrible losing a loved one."Said Ignitus coldly.
Spyro tossed and turned in his sleep as the death as Cynder replayed.
"Spyro."Spoke a ghostly voice.
"Huh!"He woke up in a flash,but merly looked around.
I need you Cynder.
He cried for he knew she was really gone.
Ignitus came to try and cheer Spyro,or at least lighten up his spirit.
The dry temple aged as Spyro did.
Ignitus walked up to Spyro.
"Spyro is there anything I can do to help?"
Spyro awas hanging his head and shook "It's my fault she is gone,I shouldn't of let her come with me."He sniffed he thought of that too much.
"Spyro it isn't your fault,"The old guardian lay down",If it wasn't for Cynder you'd most likely not be here!"
Spyro wanted to ask a thousand questions to Ignitus but just asked "Is there any other dragons out there?Females at the most?"
Ignitus had taken the liberty of Spyro's future being good,just now he feared the worst.
"Do you wish me to go?"Ignitus got up shakily.
"Can you stay here for the night?"Pleaded Spyro,company would be the best of lonlyness.
"Ok for you."He lay back down as Spyro gave Ignitus a loving hug.
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#2 Feb 24, 2009 10:40 PM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
:'( 
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOW DARE YOU POST A STORY ABOUT CYNDER'S DEATH!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? *BLEEP* YOU!!!!! *BLEEP YOU TO *BLEEP*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >_< (nuke) :explode:
One day the unreal shall be real, the fallen shall rise, and the nightmares shall become a reality. Those who follow shall earn life eternal. Those who don't shall die. The rising of the Dark Lord shall be humanity's undoing. All hail the Dark Lord of the Sith.
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#3 Feb 25, 2009 12:21 AM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
Obsessive over Cynder much?
I thought the fic itself was a bit bland, but I did enjoy what I read. I think you can actually go far with this Cynderfan if you practice. Keep writting.
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#4 Feb 25, 2009 12:25 AM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
Yeah man...seriously.....it's just a story. Keep things in perspective.
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#5 Feb 25, 2009 12:27 AM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
I am getting very ticked at your behavior, and if you refuse to stop acting like this and insulting other members in this way, I will have to give you a ban.
Everyone knows I only eat Cynder fangirls.
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#6 Feb 25, 2009 1:53 AM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
Calm Down O_O You dont know if Cynderfans done with the story yet.In the end of the story,you dont even know if Cynders going to come back or not.So,relax.
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#7 Feb 26, 2009 1:15 AM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
Sorry for that meltdown I had :-[ :-[ :-[ I just... really... like Cynder :-[. Please don't take it as a threat. I just have some issues that need ironed out. Please forgive me, I just get really furious when I hear or read stories like that. I don't know why I went ballistic there. All I ask is, DON'T POST ANYMORE CYNDER DEATH STORIES, PLEASE!!! IT HURTS MY FEELINGS!!!
One day the unreal shall be real, the fallen shall rise, and the nightmares shall become a reality. Those who follow shall earn life eternal. Those who don't shall die. The rising of the Dark Lord shall be humanity's undoing. All hail the Dark Lord of the Sith.
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#8 Feb 27, 2009 12:26 AM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
Sorry for that meltdown I had :-[ :-[ :-[ I just... really... like Cynder :-[. Please don't take it as a threat. I just have some issues that need ironed out. Please forgive me, I just get really furious when I hear or read stories like that. I don't know why I went ballistic there. All I ask is, DON'T POST ANYMORE CYNDER DEATH STORIES, PLEASE!!! IT HURTS MY FEELINGS!!!
If you don't like the story, then don't read it. This story has to do with Spyro and has a more unique storyline, and you can't make people not post things like this.
Everyone knows I only eat Cynder fangirls.
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#9 Feb 27, 2009 10:39 AM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
To grievous16... WHY THE HECK DID YOU THEN READ IT!? >_<
Anyway... really nice story... was this a one-shot?
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#10 Feb 28, 2009 6:40 PM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
Hey hey hey! Chill! And if the cynder death stories annoy you so much then why read them? Please read the titles first, before going on a rampage. >_<
As for the story, I really loved it. It was very heart-warming and it was a good story. 
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#11 Feb 28, 2009 10:06 PM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
Yeah, I guess. It IS a heart-warming story in the end. I just... thinking of Cynder's... death... just... wants to... make me... cry :'( :'( :'( :'( . I am curious about what the story is, that is all :'( :'( .
One day the unreal shall be real, the fallen shall rise, and the nightmares shall become a reality. Those who follow shall earn life eternal. Those who don't shall die. The rising of the Dark Lord shall be humanity's undoing. All hail the Dark Lord of the Sith.
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#12 Apr 28, 2009 2:18 AM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
Chapter 2
Reunion
"Ugh, dad THAT thing was your friend!?"
"Eranoru,SHUT IT!"
"Geez, my brother is still fat..."
"Oh Sparx, I thought your were making it up but he sure is huge, heh both ways."
The transperent words hovered above Spyro, chatting on about the heartbroken dragon.
All this, Spyro presumed was his mind trying to distract him until he heard
Ignitus's frosty words of anger.
"You were supposed to come when he was awake bafoons!"
"Sparxy, that thing is huge, both ways again."
"Yeah, this is Ignitus, and old...well companion."
Grunting Spyro moaned "Shust up Sparx."
"Daddy, it's talking!"
Suddenly a pulse of long lost happiness came in Spyro.
"SPARX!"
Shooting up as fast as Volteer's sleep talk he rushed the the familiar glow.
"Hey buddy, this is Anisopt." Sparx signaled the female dragonfly that had a wonderful pink aura.
Anisopt gave a faint smile and waved.
Looking around Spyro saw 6 familiar faces and two very unknown.
Spotting the slim cheeta and a smaller black one Spyro soon realised Hunter.
"Oh, Hunter!"
Running close Hunter greeted Spyro as well as the smaller one.
"This is my daughter, Eranoru."
Turning around Spyro saw the small cheeta, presumably the one that insulted him.
"Erm, hi." She said softly.
Turning to the Guardians, Spyro's smile softened.
"Why?"
Volteer, jumping to it started to explain that he and the others decided a little 'get together' to see what they could do about, you know."
Realising about Cynder again he said, with the tone as before.
"Oh, yeah."
The sky seemed to darken as he remembererd.
Walking up to Ignitus he said "Thankyou."
"Spyro, this wasn't my idea." Turing his head to Terrador, he winked.
"Um, Spyro sorry to interupt but, I know a Witch Doctor outside of Avalar, and well she could allow contact with Cynder."
Spyro felt the heavy cloud in his heart lighten as he said, "All who wish to join me," his lips began to tremble ", say I."
Then everybody said "I!"
"So it is decided, let's go." Announced Ignitus.
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I tried to lighten up the mood here.
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#13 Jun 22, 2009 12:48 AM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
OMG! This is such a nice heart warming story! I can't wait to read the rest! 
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#14 Jun 22, 2009 3:40 AM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
In retrospective I'd have to say calm down.... chances are that you have all ready.. lol... that's the idea of writing a story... lol
and some how this story has had most of the community post on it... lol
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#15 Jul 12, 2009 10:27 PM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
Whoa, dude! Chill out! Its just a story, you sound like the chinese guy at the $2 dollar shop after I tried to steal something.
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#16 Aug 17, 2009 6:20 PM
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Re: Spyro:Gone(Rated 10+ for sad themes)
inspiration. That's almost all I have to say. After I'm done with my ember storey I'll write a story of cynder dieing. but the story is just, sorta lame. no offense but the writing is bad and it's almost a pointless story. serousily.
Never returning. may pop in once in a blue moon. *shrugs*
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