Dragon Comic Review, look if ya want

fbocabral · Jan 15, 2009 2:31 AM

i print some spyro pics, so i can try to draw them.... but it usualy looks like a crocodile ><

Leafstorm · Jan 20, 2009 12:48 AM

DELAYED!!!!!!!!!!!
unfortunately i'm going to have to make the first chapter very short
i've been having drawing problems, probably from my pressuring first week back to school ugh.
i tried to work on a scene today.... but...
anyway this is what i came up with

somethings... happening to me!

sorry! i'll return to making the first chapter when i am drawing better, but until then i'll skip that part
unless you want me to improvise so you can understand what is happening, i'll just write down what is happening, so you can read even more... muhahhaaa....
so i'll be working on the chapter in story mode! yay!

RedDragonX · Jan 20, 2009 2:33 AM

Sweet stuff once more...but I am missing the story part as well tongue ...but you're certainly doing more then what I am. Good job!

Leafstorm · Jan 20, 2009 3:29 AM

First Chapter of Leafstorm

Brewing the Storm

Underneath the beautiful lush high canopy of the Giant Tree Scunns, under the layers of lightly, drifting fog, touching the bark of the tree trunks, and misting the dried leaves below, on the wild jungle explosion interweaving upon the top of a fierce mountian, is home to the proud race of the Dragons. Though highly ambitious, somewhat unkind, though a proud race, the high sentinle beings of the world, the Dragons never cease to amaze all the races of the land, good and evil alike, which has been the main cause of the many wars and sieges throughout history.

Which brings to these isolated nesting grounds, safe from the horrors below, where the dragons can raise families in peace. Among many of these family clans, is a pair, a strange pair of dragons, though they keep to themselves, are often seen as a threat from the wiser, maybe aggressive and territorial male dragons, just trying to guard what is theirs.
Light seldom finds it's way, filtering through leaves and wildlife, reaching out to little areas among the Jungle. One of these little clearings of light, among one of the smaller ones, a little outcast spends his days playing among puddles and streams. He is often watched, and observed, though it is not always his father.
Other Dragons come to see this hatchling. They shake their heads, and shame the creature that brought it into the world. Everyone saw this little harmless Dragon as a disgrace to the race. They believe him to be utterly helpless, a runt, a freak of nature, and an embarrassment to live. They forsee his little runty appearance as an omen, a sign of darkness. And they blame the creature that brought him here for bringing darkness to their offspring.

The little runt doesn't know of the other Dragons who shun him from the shadows. He is always quiet, curious of the water, the moisture in the air, and he is always full of questions about the weather. But there is no one to talk to most of the time. His father is almost always gone, hiding his shame, far from the mountain.

The little Dragon would often stare upon his reflection in the water, and question himself, teaching himself about life, since no one else was available. He would always regret looking into these pools. He understands his appearance scares creatures away. He didn't know why. He thought of himself as a normal, ok sort of Dragon. Day and day on, he would always come to a pool, and look into it.

He was surely small. His limbs long and thin, his horns awkward. His scales seemed normal to him, to everyone else, no one has ever seen a Dragon with scales grey as the clouds, wings as black as night and silver as the gems, or as big. At the end of his tail, a black spade rests, hanging gently, and to a Dragon, they summerized that a black spade was considered unlucky in some cultures and clans.

Leafstorm · Jan 20, 2009 3:44 AM

"Chase?" A low growl sounded far from the shadows of the high trees and dense plants that grew everywhere. The young grey creature stared off at the noise. He always checks that the scent is familair, and not that of another Dragon that has come to rid of him.
"I'm here Father."
He heard the sound of plants breaking and branches and twigs snapping from a force, and a large, mud-red Dragon strode to the little grey Dragon. He was magnificant, and a dragon that can hold his head high, though not for long. The young Dragon, Chase, wasn't sure what to make of his Father visiting him. It was unlike him, so sudden, so bold.

"Day after day, you sit here." His father began. Chase slumped his shoulders and hung his. He is unsure of what he had been doing that would cause him to come down and lecture him so suddenly. "I grow tired of you, mindlessly staring into streams and soil and the air. I can understand if you are truely retarded in the head, I can learn to deal with it."
The young dragon sat there, silent as ever. He understood that a dumb Dragon does not live very long because hardly anyone would care for a creature that will die quickly. But retarded? That just stabbed his heart. He knew he probably wasn't a normal Dragon, he liked his lonelyness, watching and learning. Why would Father not like that?
"...if so I promise you; there are many out there who would take pleasure in taking you far away, probably for an evil purpose, or to kill you, or I can gladly step aside and let one of the Dragons here take care of you quickly. Because believe me, they will not pass up the chance, and I am the only reason you are alive." His father continued to talk. Chase was completely confused. He hadn't been listening. Not even his own father liked him.

ontels · Jan 20, 2009 4:38 PM

I thought this was a comic?

Leafstorm · Jan 27, 2009 5:40 AM

(in terminator voice) I'm back.
when i find a difficult task, i write it down
when i write things down, i come back to life
i am master of the universe
so here we are, taking off where i stopped writing
each character speaks with a different font to reflect their personality and voice, so sorry if it gets hard to read
i only managed to come up with these within two hours
i take quite a while to think, and then picture the scene, then think of whats happening, and then the task of making it
so here!

Leafstorm · Jan 27, 2009 6:01 AM

i'll draw more later. its quite late here in hollywood
thank god for surfin' bird, otherwise life would be pointless. its the best song in the world!

RedDragonX · Jan 27, 2009 8:59 PM

Hollywood eh....no wonder you are going for the drawing and entertainment experience smile

Leafstorm · Feb 05, 2009 12:53 PM

i had to make a video for my dance class since i didn't want to dance for my school preformance -_- it took a lot of effort
guess what im drawing again
drew some really nice scenes in math yesterday
i got so happy, i couldn't sleep
im drawing scenes this morning before school without sleeping yikes
until then.... (gotta go get a drink)

Leafstorm · Feb 13, 2009 12:04 AM

every time a new character appears, check first page for colored picture

Spyro Master · Feb 13, 2009 7:27 PM

cool looks good so far smile keep it up what your doing smile

Leafstorm · Feb 14, 2009 3:08 PM

Spyro Master · Feb 15, 2009 8:23 PM

kl another one, it must take you a while to do them but still good detailing on it.

RedDragonX · Feb 17, 2009 4:47 AM

So long as your heart is in it then everything's good....just like writing.

Leafstorm · Feb 24, 2009 2:50 AM

remember to check first page for updates
i recently added my hand drawn section, so check that out as well

business is going a bit slow, my sister uses this computer a lot, and i have a friend that likes to come home from school with me and use my computer, so i haven't been getting on lately, not to mention the homework i never do big_smile (don't forget taking time out to play world of warcraft with my parents)

Swaffy · Feb 24, 2009 3:00 AM

That's very fun to read and move along with. LoL, I get kicks from these
kind of stories. Sometimes, people have to enjoy the small things in life...

I wonder what the forum will be like in five years... Who will still be here,
who will be new, and who leaves... [Waiting to say "Oh, the good times"]

Leafstorm · Mar 08, 2009 11:08 PM

haven't been able to use this computer in a while. alas, i have a labtop... from 1995!!!!!!! i feel special.

it has no internet and only uses floppy disks, and im writing stories. if i feel like it, i will copy it on this computer and maybe post them on this site so you have something new to read big_smile

cynderfire · Mar 11, 2009 8:44 AM

Awesome drawings! I like the way you did the wings!^^

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