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#1 Aug 13, 2008 2:09 AM

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||- ~Dream Rave!~ -|-|- ~Kazdra Raver!~ -||

Well....here is meh first "Dream" Rave song/music. I will add more. EVENTUALLY! Comment to.

PS: Why doesnt anyone comment on my vids on my YT? Seriously, no one ever comments on them... >.<


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#2 Aug 13, 2008 2:21 AM

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Re: ||- ~Dream Rave!~ -|-|- ~Kazdra Raver!~ -||

well um... i didn't understand the point of that so i don't know what to say. sorry


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#3 Aug 13, 2008 2:55 AM

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Re: ||- ~Dream Rave!~ -|-|- ~Kazdra Raver!~ -||

shadowsfall wrote:

well um... i didn't understand the point of that so i don't know what to say. sorry

It's Rave music, a sub genre of electronica...

I luff it, Ayumi. big_smile


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#4 Aug 13, 2008 3:47 PM

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Re: ||- ~Dream Rave!~ -|-|- ~Kazdra Raver!~ -||

oh okay well then the video gets a 7/10!

reason: well i like the music but it's not all that good if there is no entertainment. now i am not insulting you or anything if you think i am but it's good.


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#5 Aug 13, 2008 9:13 PM

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Re: ||- ~Dream Rave!~ -|-|- ~Kazdra Raver!~ -||

I love it! And you did it yourself? AWESOME!


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#6 Aug 14, 2008 6:18 AM

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Re: ||- ~Dream Rave!~ -|-|- ~Kazdra Raver!~ -||

The song is not bad for a start. I'll admit though, it did make me fall asleep. It can have a lot of potential though, and as you said, you'll eventually add more I hope. For starters, you did set the music for a dreamy rave sound, which is nice.

What stood out:
- sound quality (perhaps needs some mastering done)
- syncing of some melodies offbeat (e.g. near the beginning)
- overusage of loops? (if this is the case, try to be more original)

BTW, what program did you use to make the music?

shadowsfall wrote:

oh okay well then the video gets a 7/10!

reason: well i like the music but it's not all that good if there is no entertainment. now i am not insulting you or anything if you think i am but it's good.

Ayumi posted this for the song, not for anything else. You shouldn't take the actual video into account, really.

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#7 Aug 14, 2008 7:29 PM

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Re: ||- ~Dream Rave!~ -|-|- ~Kazdra Raver!~ -||

bmah wrote:

The song is not bad for a start. I'll admit though, it did make me fall asleep. It can have a lot of potential though, and as you said, you'll eventually add more I hope. For starters, you did set the music for a dreamy rave sound, which is nice.

What stood out:
- sound quality (perhaps needs some mastering done)
- syncing of some melodies offbeat (e.g. near the beginning)
- overusage of loops? (if this is the case, try to be more original)

BTW, what program did you use to make the music?

shadowsfall wrote:

oh okay well then the video gets a 7/10!

reason: well i like the music but it's not all that good if there is no entertainment. now i am not insulting you or anything if you think i am but it's good.

Ayumi posted this for the song, not for anything else. You shouldn't take the actual video into account, really.

It is looped...?

I used my trusty Synthesizer! The YPT-400!
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I sometimes mess up, though It means it IS User Made.

I used the edited vers. of "Rave" which had too much KB. 38 KB.

Instrument can take 30 KB ONLY. X(
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I hope I finally get the Tyros-3


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#8 Aug 14, 2008 8:48 PM

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Re: ||- ~Dream Rave!~ -|-|- ~Kazdra Raver!~ -||

Ayumi posted this for the song, not for anything else. You shouldn't take the actual video into account, really.

i know that bmah thank you. i am just saying


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#9 Aug 14, 2008 10:03 PM

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Re: ||- ~Dream Rave!~ -|-|- ~Kazdra Raver!~ -||

Ayumi_the_Dark_Wolf wrote:
bmah wrote:

The song is not bad for a start. I'll admit though, it did make me fall asleep. It can have a lot of potential though, and as you said, you'll eventually add more I hope. For starters, you did set the music for a dreamy rave sound, which is nice.

What stood out:
- sound quality (perhaps needs some mastering done)
- syncing of some melodies offbeat (e.g. near the beginning)
- overusage of loops? (if this is the case, try to be more original)

BTW, what program did you use to make the music?

shadowsfall wrote:

oh okay well then the video gets a 7/10!

reason: well i like the music but it's not all that good if there is no entertainment. now i am not insulting you or anything if you think i am but it's good.

Ayumi posted this for the song, not for anything else. You shouldn't take the actual video into account, really.

It is looped...?

I used my trusty Synthesizer! The YPT-400!
--------

I sometimes mess up, though It means it IS User Made.

I used the edited vers. of "Rave" which had too much KB. 38 KB.

Instrument can take 30 KB ONLY. X(
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I hope I finally get the Tyros-3

Oh! I didn't know you were using actual hardware to make your music. I'd still think there would be a way to sync what you initially recorded. I personally haven't worked with a real synthesizer (like I can afford one), so I can't say too much else.

and 30kb max? lol, that might be a reason for the quality.

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