Spyro: Days of light

Hero58 · Jul 03, 2008 8:03 PM

that was a great chapter and Ms Spider-Face XD thats a pretty funny name for a character lol

shade105 · Jul 03, 2008 9:37 PM

thanks hero.... thanks to you all..........................

Spash the Bandragon · Jul 04, 2008 2:26 PM

This is a great fanfic, but could you edit it together to be in one post or something, because it's kind of hard to find my place once I lose it.

shade105 · Jul 04, 2008 6:41 PM

......? well i still have alot more to do....

Spyro_For_Life · Jul 06, 2008 12:31 AM

I love it. Spider-face... Haha! Oh, it sounds like Sparx is in looooove!!! Heh heh.

shade105 · Jul 07, 2008 5:51 PM

yup, finnally!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

xXxSpyro__CynderxXx · Jul 08, 2008 10:48 PM

wow man. this story is great! you are a very gifted writer for someone as young as you. i mean were both young but i cant even write a story like this even if i tried. smile

power to the people · Jul 09, 2008 12:36 AM

Hey I'm back. And reading the chapters that I missed, I felt bad not being here for their debut. I really love the intimacy of your story. In fact I just got an animation program and I thought I would do an animated series of Spyro: Days of Light. I'm actually working on it as we speak. Now don't get your hopes too high as this is my first project in animation but I'm pretty sure it will be decent. Of course for this I will need your approval Shade105 as it is your copyrighted material.

shade105 · Jul 09, 2008 5:08 AM

you have full approval for it, and im glad you liked the chapters......

Spash the Bandragon · Jul 09, 2008 5:31 PM

xXxSpyro__CynderxXx wrote:

wow man. this story is great! you are a very gifted writer for someone as young as you. i mean were both young but i cant even write a story like this even if i tried.

I'm 12, and I can also write good fanfics, I just haven't put many on the internet...Maybe I should...But where to start?...(And not to brag, but mine are considerably longer than this one)

shade105 · Jul 09, 2008 6:55 PM

there's no need to call it bragging.... i personally dont care if you are as good, and if it is better, great! I can learn from you, dont ever make your over-dog an enemy, make him a person you look up to

Spash the Bandragon · Jul 09, 2008 9:34 PM

Um...Thanks. But I still say this story should be edited. For example, when I was in 3rd grade I wrote a fanfiction about Spyro, Crash, Sonic, and Shadow (It's more like 4 seperate stories that intertwine) and I kept adding to the story until it became very large and long. At first I was making it up as I went along and just didn't want to stop adding to it, but I am now in 6th grade, I have the whole thing planned out, and I'm STILL not done writing it because I had to stop halfway to rewrite the first half because I'd gotten so much better at writing since then.
All I mean by saying this is that if you go back and edit the story once you're done, it will be an even greater story, and not to mention sound more proffesional. So I'd wait to get it animated until it is edited, because once it's in film like Outcast Bandicot it'll probably be harder to edit stuff.

shade105 · Jul 10, 2008 5:08 AM

Ummm dude..... no offence, but i kinda like to take my own way, i have a revelious nature to not listen to people that corner me into somthing...... I will edit it, when im done, and if i really want to do somthing with it l8r, PTTP, go on with it, its good to add your creativety to it.......

Spyro_For_Life · Jul 10, 2008 6:11 PM

I don't want to be annoying, but I'm saying it again: Awesome story! In fact, this is so long, it could almost be a book! That reminds me of how I write. O:) Stories so long they begin to be books... and I really need to shut up now because I'm being annoying... I'll shut up now. :-X

Spash the Bandragon · Jul 10, 2008 11:04 PM

shade105 wrote:

Ummm dude..... no offence, but i kinda like to take my own way, i have a revelious nature to not listen to people that corner me into somthing...... I will edit it, when im done, and if i really want to do somthing with it l8r, PTTP, go on with it, its good to add your creativety to it.......

Sorry if I annoyed you, I can stop now.. :-[

power to the people · Jul 10, 2008 11:46 PM

shade105 wrote:

Ummm dude..... no offence, but i kinda like to take my own way, i have a revelious nature to not listen to people that corner me into somthing...... I will edit it, when im done, and if i really want to do somthing with it l8r, PTTP, go on with it, its good to add your creativety to it.......

Alright I'll see what I can do. I just realized I bought a piece of crap program but it came with two others: manga studio EX (excellent manga maker) and Poser v.7 (a realistic animator) and I might just buy them (only have the trial version). At any rate, I'm going to go for anime studio pro 5.6 first so maybe it won't be as big a piece of crap as I think it will be. Cross your fingers people.

Spash the Bandragon · Jul 11, 2008 1:52 AM

A manga maker? CAN I HAVRE ONE?!!!!! I wanna make a manga! I love manga, but I tried to draw my own and it sucked. YAY MANGA MAKERS!!!!!

*calms down*

So anyways, I'm gonna stop pestering about editing and manga so you can get to work on the next chapter. Wait a minute...editing? Manga? 4KIDSTV!!! AAAAAAAAGH!!!!!!!

*calms down again*

Sorry. :-[

shade105 · Jul 11, 2008 3:26 AM

naw dude, no need to be brought down, im really sorry if i did, i never meant to do it, i was just a lil off yesturday..... anyways..... I know i need to edit, but i'l do it with time.... when i feel like it

shade105 · Jul 13, 2008 3:39 AM

Ok, i got my next CH done, i personlly think its small but i hope you all like it, it could have been larer tho... anyways, enjoy....

Chapter 34- Like to have your kids

Spyro and Cynder returned to the temple in heist, not stopping to notice anything along the road at all, too much was at risk. As they walked, they tried to speak to each other as much as they could, but most of the conversations were very abrupt, they truly did not want to stay in one conversation to long, despite the fact that they were totally alone, both feared of someone revealing what they did the night before due to the speaking, a truly naive behavior. Eventually Spyro came up with the conversation about the night before. â€œSoâ€¦ what did you think about last night?â€
Cynder, hearing this blushed softly and said â€œWell, Iâ€¦ I think it was all great, all the events of the day were wonderful,â€
â€œSo Cynder, was that promise you made me yesterday really serious?â€ asked Spyro
â€œYes,â€ said Cynder, now feeling a warmness by the blush â€œ I did mean it Spyro, Youâ€™d be the only person I would want to be with anyways, I may be crazy, but when Iâ€™m near you Iâ€¦ feel free, and protected at the same time,â€
â€œYouâ€™re not crazy Cyn, I feel that for you too, I think its love,â€ said Spyro
â€œYeah,â€ said Cynder
Spyro then got closer to Cynderâ€™s side and leaned on her, laying his head on her shoulder, he was being very tender right now, and Cynder liked it. â€œYou were the right one,â€ she said
â€œHmm?â€ asked Spyro, overhearing her out-loud thought.
Cynder looked back at Spyro, and smiled â€œYou were the right one to do that promise to, I believe youâ€™re destiny,â€ she responded
â€œOh,â€ said Spyro, and then gave her a kiss â€œI love you,â€ he said
â€œI love you too, to the point were I would like to have your kids,â€ said Cynder
As soon as Cynder said this and both of them recognized she did this, they both went quiet and blushed. Spyro also had a little shock as well, all the past couple days events have lead ultimately to the chroniclers prophesy, did that mean it was close to happening?

For the rest of the trip they walked in complete silence, that phrase left them both thinking deeply. At last, they arrived to the temple, and by the door, stood that familiar face, but it did not look friendly. They both got closer to him with their heads down â€œWhere were you two?â€ he asked calmly.

I hope you liked, plz comment!

spyromaster330 · Jul 13, 2008 11:07 AM

Cool chapter. It was a bit short but i still liked it smile

shade105 · Jul 13, 2008 4:19 PM

thanks. thanks a million.............................................................

Spash the Bandragon · Jul 13, 2008 5:38 PM

Ignitus: You were THREE SECONDS LATE!!!

Spyro: But-

Ignitus: From now on, I shall have Moneybags follow you around to make sure you're never late again!

Spyro and Cynder: NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!

Anyways, cool chapter. Spyro's probably late to his thing he's supposed to go to. And I believe having kids would count as interfering with their training...

shade105 · Jul 13, 2008 9:04 PM

heh, well, thats for foreshadow to reveal... heh heh...

LordRattler · Jul 13, 2008 9:52 PM

NOOOOOOOO THEY LATE sad but that means....*remebers what ignitus said a few chapters back*GASP....

xXxSpyro__CynderxXx · Jul 13, 2008 11:15 PM

So much suspence! Cant wait to read the next chapter. smile

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