#301 Jun 05, 2008 11:25 PM

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Re: Spyro: Days of light

YEA, I CAUGHT UP! XD
Awesome chapters Shade, but that last one, when the mom made a remark 'bout having her own grandchildern, I started cracking up. XD

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lol, thanks,seens everyone likes that.......................

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THIS is why i dnt write spyro stories. Shades story says all i ever wanted to say or read.

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yes very funny at the end XD

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thanks everyone, ill see when i work at the next CH.... hopefully soon.....

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Hey guys, put up a new CH, you guys read and enjoy

Chapter 31- Sunset at Island Lake:

Spyro and Cynder remained there for a long while; they spoke to the parents of many things, such as what they did at the temple and so on. Their parents told them of their life while they were gone. “Awful lonely,” said their mom “It was so quiet without Spyro’s and Sparx’s constant fighting,”
“I see,” said Cynder, quite entertained my Spyro’s mother “Hey, I never got your name, what is it?”
“It’s Petunia,” said their mom in an almost Sparx-like tone.
“Oh,” said Cynder recognizing that tone
“So how long have you two been together,” asked Petunia while pointing at Spyro and Cynder
“Well, dating for a bit now, but we’ve known each other for five years,”
“Oh, I see… I’m sure to see grandchildren this year then,” said Petunia
Once again, the remark sunk them into a sea of shame.

After this long talke with Petunia and Shean, and after taking all their embarrassing remarks, Spyro and Cynder decided it was the time to go and see the other destination point Spyro wanted to show Cynder. The lake, was at its top beauty at sunset, is what Spyro would say throughout the whole trip, and that time was near. As Spyo and Cynder began to say their goodbyes to leave, Sparx began to hesitate in leaving. Spyro, noticing this asked “Sparx, what’s wrong?”
“Well… It’s nothing,” he said
Truly, Sparx did not want to leave his parents right now, he was having too much fun, and besides, it would probably bore him to go to the lake. He could not hold it any longer “You know what? You guys can go without me; I kinda wanna stay with mom and pop, have fun by yourselves. Doesn’t matter right?”
When Sparx asked Spyro this, his mind shot into thought. He really did not mind if Sparx did not go, and really, it could be better, Spyro’s instinctive thought kicked in saying that without Sparx, more things could happen in between him and Cynder, physical actions. Spyro was tempted to answer with a big ‘YES!’, but knew that would be wrong, it could lead Sparx to question what could happen at that lake, so he had to answer calmly “No it does not matter, that is… if that’s what you want,” he responded with the most care.
“Oh Cool… you guys have fun,” Sparx said “and bro?”
“Yeah?” asked Spyro
“Thanks,” and Sparx.

From the time they left the village to the time they reached the lake was abrupt, they only had to follow the stream near for about a mile. Once they reached the mouth of the river that lead to the coast Cynder gasped, the lake was truly enormous, and indeed have islands, the lake was so large you could not see the other end. “Wow,” said Cynder as she looked into the lake that touched with the sunset now.
“Welcome,” said Spyro
Quickly, Spyro and Cynder came to a spot to rest and watch the sunset, the spot was a large flat boulder, large enough for both of them, surrounded by a patch of grass. When young, this was Spyro’s ideal spot to do this, he did it about every day. As they began to settle, Cynder layed horizontal to the sunset and Spyro layed behind her. As Cynder rested her wings on Spyro and Spyro laid his leg over Cynder, instinctive tension rose, they both felt ready to mate, but something held them back. “I love you,” whispered Spyro into Cynder’s ear
“I love you too,” said Cynder
Cynder rose her tail up slightly, and Spyro grasped it with his tail, wrapping them around.

little background info about this CH, first, two things inspired me to do this CH, first, "Shadon of the day" by likin park, a touching song, gave me a romantic tone, and mainly this pic

this is what Spyro and Cynder look like at the end of the chapter... just chilling near the lake... FIrst, of all i have to say THIS IS NOT MY WORK OF ART it is some artists, and i kinda forgot his name, if you know this artist please post his name i want to congrtulate him for his work, its so good, it inspired me... and thats alot to say, so thank you artist! but yes

http://youtube.com/watch?v=P_eEE12R8Gw
this is the song shadow of the day, just in case you wanna sink into the tone i was in while writing this.....

well thank you, please comment...

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awww, that's cute. reminds me of my bf and I at the movies.

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well thanks CR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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awesome! I await your chapters as eagerly as the next Inheritance book shade!

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wow, thanks, that makes me feel good...

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Cool picture, whoever drew it is an artist. By the way, I'm new here, but I've read every chapter, and you're doing a magnificent job. You could go into the book writing business. I'm serious. By the way, would anyone like to give me any advice on getting past writers blocks? I would appreciate that...
Also I would like to thank Spyrorocks for allowing me to be a member. Thanks!

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How about try listening to music and see drawings and stuff, writers block sucks....

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Yeah, I got a prologue and chapter 1 of a story on here, and chapter 2 is finishing up, but I don't know what I'll do in chapter 3. I guess I'll know when I get to it. Sometimes stuff just comes to me as I go along. I'll probably be alright. Writer's blocks probably happened to the best authors too, like J.K. Rowling and Stephen King.

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sure does dude, everyone can get it, hey, try planning ahead, get a common target to where you wanna write..... what is the goal you wanna reach? is the question you wanna ask, then the other chapters before that are transition chapters.... thats how i kinda work....

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Actually, I do have a goal. It's just, writing isn't something I plan ahead, unless it's the state EOG writing test. :barf: Then you have to plan ahead. You can look at my story. It's under the name Spyro Fan Fic. I'll change the name once I get through with a few chapters. But yeah, I have a good plan. I just thought it up. Yes! Writer's block over! I'll need to get Chapter 2 finished and put it on here.

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ok........................ koool.....................................................

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Shade this is a good fan fic I have read here its amazing how long it has survived...I havent seen fanfics last so long 0_o. But that makes it better!The suspense!Um sorry there..anyways good fanfic keep up good work ^_^

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thank you thank you..... i am happy more and more people are comming to see this... but yeah, i have kept this fanfic up for a long while, and hope to keep it up for a long while more...

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woot fricken woot to that shade!

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hey shade, i have been reading your story for ages and i just wanted to say that it is awesome! this is the best story i have read in along time.

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I wonder what the next Chapter may be...Oh and shade I am starting my own fan fic now...only the Intro to it is done...the first chapter is being edited for more details.....and keep up the good work!

By the way nice picture!

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thanks i drew it..... Umm im gonna see when i write the next CH.... i dont know when.... but its going to have some... lets say "deep" romance.....

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heh. your fanfiction is getting longer by day... or im not around to read it often (i was just 2 weeks on warcamp <.< most time it rained too)

and about that pic from last chapter its Spyro's Sunset by IceFlame1019 on deviantart.com... well... im not 100% sure but i personally believe it's him/her
keep up the good work!

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thanks for that... and thanks for the comment..

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thanks i drew it..... Umm im gonna see when i write the next CH.... i dont know when.... but its going to have some... lets say "deep" romance.....

just  be careful... has SR said anything yet if youv asked him about it yet? if so then dnt forget to post a link...

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