You are not logged in.
- Topics: Active | Unanswered
- Index
- » General Chat
- » Poetry
#1 Mar 28, 2007 3:32 AM
- dragonrider91
- Member
- From: Alabama
- Registered: Mar 28, 2007
- Posts: 89
- Gems: 0
Poetry
I have noticed that a lot of people today don't like writing poetry or aren't very interested in it. I myself happen to love reading poetry as well as writing it. Just by a show of paws, dragon claws, and hooves, how many like writing as well as reading poetry? lol just kidding. This is just one of my poems. Feel free to post any of your own poems. I'd love to read them. Hope you enjoy it. ^_^
"Lost Souls"
Time passes,
time is lost.
Hearts have gashes,
and eyes are frost.
Souls wander areound,
others are in strife.
Their footsteps have no sound,
leaving no sign of life.
Offline
#2 Mar 28, 2007 3:34 AM
- DanteAndVergil
- Member
- From: UK
- Registered: Mar 25, 2007
- Posts: 2,622
- Gems: 0
- Birthday: 4 April
- Age: 35 years old
- Gender: Male
Re: Poetry
wow cool poem i hope more users will post some well done dragonrider
Offline
#3 Mar 28, 2007 6:52 PM
- Trainer_Spyro
- Member
- From: AQWorlds - Nythera
- Registered: Mar 09, 2007
- Posts: 1,325
- Gems: 0
- Birthday: 1 January
- Age: 34 years old
- Gender: Male
- Website
Re: Poetry
Okay I suppose I could post a villanelle I wrote for english. It sucks so beware.
A mighty dragon roars with elements of pain
His truly fearsome power incomparable and undying
Many mourn the losses left by his hellish rain
Can’t help but wonder why, for what has he to gain
By leaving families homeless, scared, unsure, and crying
A mighty dragon roars with elements of pain
The awesome creature scorned, for all he brings is bane
They attempt to rebuild their lives, but know there’s no point in trying
Many mourn the losses left by his hellish rain
Bow to him for he rules all, is what he seems to ordain
The people fall in reverence when overhead he’s flying
A mighty dragon roars with elements of pain
They do not dare fight him for what was their domain
Knowing resistance brings only death when his unspoken law they’re defying
Many mourn the losses left by his hellish rain
The fact that they will live in fear until his death is plain
Helplessly they watch his rampage, through bolted windows spying
A mighty dragon roars with elements of pain
Many mourn the losses left by his hellish rain
it has no underlying messages and link to anyones deepest feelings that they would never share with the outside world so it's not really poetry.
It just rhymes is all.
Offline
#4 Mar 28, 2007 6:53 PM
- DanteAndVergil
- Member
- From: UK
- Registered: Mar 25, 2007
- Posts: 2,622
- Gems: 0
- Birthday: 4 April
- Age: 35 years old
- Gender: Male
Re: Poetry
excellent use of words there i love it
Offline
#5 Mar 28, 2007 8:14 PM
- The Chickmagnet
- Member
- From: Ohio.....HATE IT
- Registered: Aug 11, 2006
- Posts: 705
- Gems: 0
- Website
Re: Poetry
Offline
#6 Mar 28, 2007 8:35 PM
- DanteAndVergil
- Member
- From: UK
- Registered: Mar 25, 2007
- Posts: 2,622
- Gems: 0
- Birthday: 4 April
- Age: 35 years old
- Gender: Male
Re: Poetry
yeah true some poetry is crap but some is great
Offline
#7 Mar 28, 2007 8:47 PM
- The Chickmagnet
- Member
- From: Ohio.....HATE IT
- Registered: Aug 11, 2006
- Posts: 705
- Gems: 0
- Website
Re: Poetry
all the poetry we did last year in school sucked
except for mine OF COURSE
!!!!!
LOL
Offline
#8 Mar 28, 2007 8:48 PM
- DanteAndVergil
- Member
- From: UK
- Registered: Mar 25, 2007
- Posts: 2,622
- Gems: 0
- Birthday: 4 April
- Age: 35 years old
- Gender: Male
Re: Poetry
lol big headed lmao
Offline
#9 Mar 28, 2007 8:55 PM
- The Chickmagnet
- Member
- From: Ohio.....HATE IT
- Registered: Aug 11, 2006
- Posts: 705
- Gems: 0
- Website
Re: Poetry
:'(
that wasn't very nice
but look at this great poem
roses are red
violets are blue
and there is knowone as sweet as *coughs*
lol
beautiful
Offline
#10 Mar 28, 2007 8:56 PM
- DanteAndVergil
- Member
- From: UK
- Registered: Mar 25, 2007
- Posts: 2,622
- Gems: 0
- Birthday: 4 April
- Age: 35 years old
- Gender: Male
Re: Poetry
lol best one yet
Offline
#11 Mar 28, 2007 9:24 PM
- The Chickmagnet
- Member
- From: Ohio.....HATE IT
- Registered: Aug 11, 2006
- Posts: 705
- Gems: 0
- Website
Re: Poetry
why thank you veru much
:-P
Offline
#12 Mar 28, 2007 9:26 PM
- DanteAndVergil
- Member
- From: UK
- Registered: Mar 25, 2007
- Posts: 2,622
- Gems: 0
- Birthday: 4 April
- Age: 35 years old
- Gender: Male
Re: Poetry
your welcome hehe what a poem to bring up lol
Offline
#13 Mar 28, 2007 9:58 PM
- dragonrider91
- Member
- From: Alabama
- Registered: Mar 28, 2007
- Posts: 89
- Gems: 0
Re: Poetry
Yay! 11 replies. I'm so happy! ^.^ I love this site!*hugs computer* ....uhh no one saw that.*points at dragongaz*He did it. lol jk
Offline
#14 Mar 28, 2007 9:59 PM
- DanteAndVergil
- Member
- From: UK
- Registered: Mar 25, 2007
- Posts: 2,622
- Gems: 0
- Birthday: 4 April
- Age: 35 years old
- Gender: Male
Re: Poetry
hey :-P
dragons rule the sky
krakens rule seas
who rules the earth?
Offline
#15 Mar 28, 2007 10:03 PM
- The Chickmagnet
- Member
- From: Ohio.....HATE IT
- Registered: Aug 11, 2006
- Posts: 705
- Gems: 0
- Website
Re: Poetry
ummmm
idk
people?
lol
Offline
#16 Mar 28, 2007 10:05 PM
- DanteAndVergil
- Member
- From: UK
- Registered: Mar 25, 2007
- Posts: 2,622
- Gems: 0
- Birthday: 4 April
- Age: 35 years old
- Gender: Male
Re: Poetry
Offline
#17 Mar 28, 2007 10:09 PM
- dragonrider91
- Member
- From: Alabama
- Registered: Mar 28, 2007
- Posts: 89
- Gems: 0
Re: Poetry
hmmmm I'd half to say kings, elves, creaures??? Or....people like chickmagnet suggested.
Offline
#18 Mar 30, 2007 10:30 PM
- Zekira Drake
- Member
- From: MASTER SPARK
- Registered: Jun 08, 2006
- Posts: 2,060
- Gems: 0
Re: Poetry
Offline
#19 Mar 30, 2007 11:03 PM
- dragonoftheflames
- Member
- From: Wollongong, Australia
- Registered: Dec 31, 2006
- Posts: 183
- Gems: 0
Re: Poetry
Cool, there's people out there who still loves poetry. All of you who posted a poem, well done, I must say those are the two greatest poems I've ever read.
Ah Everythings back to normal.
Offline
#20 Mar 31, 2007 8:41 PM
- dragonrider91
- Member
- From: Alabama
- Registered: Mar 28, 2007
- Posts: 89
- Gems: 0
Re: Poetry
awww thanks flames. I love it when I get a comment on my poetry. Normally people don't read them. They just skim then and say"That was good" or "Yeah" and I'm like well you didn't even read the poem. Ugh, it gets me aggravated sometimes. But thanks flames*hugs tight* That really means a lot to me.
Offline
#21 Mar 31, 2007 9:12 PM
- dragonoftheflames
- Member
- From: Wollongong, Australia
- Registered: Dec 31, 2006
- Posts: 183
- Gems: 0
Re: Poetry
Your welcome, I'm just glad that people still like poetry. I'd post some of my own but I can't find 'em.
Ah Everythings back to normal.
Offline
#22 Apr 01, 2007 7:45 PM
- dragonrider91
- Member
- From: Alabama
- Registered: Mar 28, 2007
- Posts: 89
- Gems: 0
Re: Poetry
*smiles* And flames you don't have to post one of your poems on here to prove that you're a poet. To me, a good poet is one at heart no matter how good their poetry is. ^.^ And you my friend, are a good poet to me. I can tell by your personality. lol and I'm not trying to creep you out or anything. I'm just being honest and trying to put what my heart tells me too. ^_^
Offline
#23 Apr 01, 2007 8:00 PM
- Brom the Wise
- Member
- From: The deepest bowles of the hot
- Registered: Feb 25, 2007
- Posts: 1,831
- Gems: 0
Re: Poetry
Offline
#24 Apr 01, 2007 8:36 PM
- dragonrider91
- Member
- From: Alabama
- Registered: Mar 28, 2007
- Posts: 89
- Gems: 0
Re: Poetry
Offline
#25 Apr 01, 2007 8:51 PM
- Brom the Wise
- Member
- From: The deepest bowles of the hot
- Registered: Feb 25, 2007
- Posts: 1,831
- Gems: 0
Re: Poetry
Offline
- Index
- » General Chat
- » Poetry