Ok.... who would like to see my fanfic... but in a comic version?

shade105 · Sep 27, 2008 5:18 AM

ok guys, hey wazup.... i just decided not so long ago that i wanted to make my fanfic "Spyro: Days of Light" into a comic, like PTTP started.... but i decided i would continue it smile

here is the first Chapter..... this portion is pretty much the concept that PTTP created, but when he posted it it came out blurry and hard to see, so i redrew it freehand and with a lil touch of my own Style.... the next couple chapters will be totally of my own creation, so here you go:

ch1 pg1:

ch1 pg2:

ch1 pg3:

well... i hope you likes them all.... plz plz comment on what you think smile

xXxSpyro__CynderxXx · Sep 27, 2008 5:54 AM

This is pretty awesome Shade! you should definetly continue making this comic!

Although you could make some words a bit darker..... anyways, Awesome work! smile

Fletch_Talon · Sep 27, 2008 6:07 AM

a bit of constructive criticism for you

with the text, write first, then add the speech bubble (assuming you havnt been doing that) and dont be too afraid to over lap small parts of the art, or even the panels

otherwise its pretty good

shade105 · Sep 27, 2008 4:47 PM

hey, thanks for that... you guys are great for seeing this smile

cooldude22345 · Sep 27, 2008 6:15 PM

You rock, man. Good writer and artist make an interesting combination.

shade105 · Sep 27, 2008 8:19 PM

hehe, thanks alot.... smile

ontels · Sep 27, 2008 11:01 PM

praise=
1=great drawings
2=decent looking story
critizizem=
1.hard to read text
2.jumbeled up picture make it hard to find oout what go's on first

shade105 · Sep 28, 2008 7:25 PM

thanks for that, i love feedback...

raven · Sep 28, 2008 11:26 PM

I second what the other's said. I think it's a good idea, because some people can skim through comics and absorb information through pictures easier than reading chunks of text. Your drawing is pretty good.

shade105 · Sep 29, 2008 5:54 PM

thanks... i love comic making too.... its hard to figure out how to make things look good tho..

SpyroandCynder4EVAH · Sep 29, 2008 8:02 PM

This might seem like a stupid question but, wich way do you read it?

shade105 · Sep 29, 2008 8:26 PM

its not a stupid question... people always wonder, manga or comic? well since its in manga style drawings you would think Manga, but no, ts comic version actually....

SpyroandCynder4EVAH · Sep 29, 2008 10:03 PM

Ok. Thankyou! Thats a realy good comic! More!

shade105 · Sep 30, 2008 4:23 AM

thank you very much

ok, this does not come from my Fanfic comic, but it is one of my comics, its a gift i made for CR, part one of 2, ok, so a little background of the comic, its read left to right, and the two chars are both me, or shoudl i say my personalities.... the Spyro is my fan, RPG freak of me, and the regular me, is the normal, emo me..... well please comment

power to the people · Oct 01, 2008 11:47 PM

now where have i seen those pictures before. lol. what's up shade. just got back and i gotta say i still love your literary works but it looks like your trying to come onto the art scene. i can still give you those lessons if you want and since i missed your birthday i guess i'll need to make you a birthday card. let's see... i've just about perfected my character "RALE" so i'll put him in there and whatever else you might want. ove your story and keep it up.
-<3 Eric Near

shade105 · Oct 02, 2008 1:16 AM

omfg you are freaking back, wazup dude.... man i have been wating for you to come back forever... i thought you like dissapeared.... man i do need your help in the drawing, i need also some help with dragon concepts, since i took up your comic and i guess am making more, with your style of course... man ill pm you

shade105 · Oct 02, 2008 5:36 AM

heym the second part of CR's B-day gift.... this time, me and my friends sing!

please comment!

power to the people · Oct 02, 2008 10:47 PM

you make great chibi doodles. that's one thing i cant do. anyway i'd be glad to help you with your concept artz. i suppose cynder rules is a fan of deathnote also. ne way i'm back and hopefully here to stay so... see ya laterz. must eat food now. (Just got back from grappling training with a freakin marine and I am bruised everywhere)

shade105 · Oct 02, 2008 11:02 PM

haha... well thanks... ill pm you again, i need to get into business wit you... (More like Artistic "joking around" XD)

shade105 · Oct 05, 2008 4:30 AM

well.... i have decided to make my own coverpage to the comic, please tell me what you thnk

if you cant tell so clearly what it is, its sorta like a scroll, with the element symbols and Spyro, Cynder, and Sparx..... well please comment

shade105 · Oct 06, 2008 3:59 PM

here you guys, page 4, the begining of Chapter 2... if you noticed a downgrade in the art, im sorry, im not as good as PTTP is in comic plotting.... welll enjoy.....

Spyro_For_Life · Oct 06, 2008 9:19 PM

Artist and Writer. Always a good combo. I would know; I write my Spyro stories and draw ze art. Nice work on ze comic. wink

shade105 · Oct 07, 2008 4:31 AM

kool thanks alot smile

Spyro_For_Life · Oct 07, 2008 1:55 PM

No problem. smile

shade105 · Oct 10, 2008 8:14 PM

heh cool... ok guys, stay tuned... soon im going put another cover page... like a type B cover page, i want to know which you like better....

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