#1 Jun 22, 2008 6:34 PM

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My story

Hey guys, I'm writing a story ad I wanted to know what you guys think of it. This has to do with my RP character, Ika.

Here it is so far.

Chapter 1
The new wolf

   

        It was all he had ever wished for, to be in a pack. His dream was to be leader. Oh how he hoped that someday he could be top wolf, pack leader, head wolf. But that always will stay a dream, always.
    Ika rested his head on his paws and fell into a deep sleep. He had fallen asleep in the most dangerous part of spring forest, outside their den. The others walked into the den and fell asleep next to the fire. Whimpering and howling was heard from within.
    As Ika awoke – at about five in the morning – he heard a growling from he trees. It was still dark out so he couldn’t see much. He snarled back loudly. “Who’s there?” He asked into the night. The snarling soon stopped and he heard footsteps. Ika was sure something was there.
    And he was right. Out stepped a beautiful wolf with markings that resembled a blue jay . She promptly howled before Ika and lied down. Ika wasn’t sure what she was, a wolf… or a dragolf. So, he reared up – eager to see her expression – and out stretched his large red dragon wings. His many teeth showed and it frightened the white wolf but she stayed stern. Her ears twitched as she moved her paws back and forth.
    When Ika landed, she rose to her feet. Ika’s wings disappeared into his skin. As the sun appeared in the sky, it became clear to Ika that she too had wings, blue jay wings. But how? All the members in his pack were supposed to be the only ones. “I’m sorry…. Did I interru-.” She began. “No. No… It’s alright.” He smiled. It was obvious that Ika was attracted to her. “Do you have a place to sleep?” She looked around then at the den. “N… No, I don’t” she said. Ika motioned over to the den and she walked with him into it.

Chapter 2

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Re: My story

Let me know what you think

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Re: My story

i like it!    that remids me so much of ika! XD