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#1 May 02, 2008 12:10 AM

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Here is the sequel (The Elemental Entities) Scrapped....

heres the sequel enjoy

Prologue: Six years have passed since the eternal dragon was defeated and peace was once again bought to the lands. New races began to emerge creating several new villages, caves, mines and even towns. Weapons started to appear in production, many wars have broke out between the races. During the Great War between the humans and the prehistoric creatures new entities began to form threatening every creature in the world. These entities earned the name of the elementals as several were formed each commanding a specific element. Two sets of elementals were formed, the weaker of the sets known as the basic elementals and the stronger of the sets known as the entites. Embrace in a new story of destruction as Spyro and the others form alliances with other races to bring down the elementals beings that now roam the world and meet hundreds of new characters.

Part 1

Narrator – The story begins with Spyro consulting Ignitus about what to do next and battle plans.

Spyro – What must we do now Ignitus?
Ignitus – Well firstly we must travel to the hidden village of Lihaba to discover ancient relics
Spyro – Lihaba? But there isn’t an entrance to that village anymore
Ignitus – Yes that will be a major problem but we must search for a way
Spyro – What is so important about going back there?
Ignitus – The relics that we must find contain unknown secrets about the elements
Spyro – What sort of secrets?
Ignitus – Weaknesses, strengths, immunities and also which elements are absorbed
Spyro – I see but we know most of that already
Ignitus – Really? Then tell me
Spyro – Well we all know that a weakness to fire is water and absorbs fire based attacks, plus fire has no immunities to other elements and also no strengths
Ignitus – That is where you are wrong each element has an immunity, strength, absorption and a weakness that is why we must find the relics
Spyro – Then we must go now then to save time
Ignitus – Yes get everyone together
Spyro – Ok I’ll meet you back here
Ignitus – No meet up at the village entrance
Spyro – Ok that makes more sense ok I’ll meet you at the entrance in about ten minutes
Ignitus – Be quick we don’t have much time

Narrator – Spyro charges off to gather everyone up and tell them all where they are going. Elsewhere in the land of the humans.

Private Kirk – Sir I have the map of the entire world as requested
Sergeant Liam – Good work private dismissed
Private Kirk – (salutes) Sir yes sir
Sergeant Liam – General this is the map we have been after for quite awhile now
General Dean – Finally, now mark up all the places we know of and what the inhabitants are
Sergeant Liam – Yes sir, ok we are in the central part of the map, the Behemoth’s lie to the north-eastern parts but there are few islands that we haven’t been able to search due to storms and blocked pathways within mineshafts, the southern areas are all unknown to us and finally the north-western area belongs to the dragons we believe but again we haven’t explored that area yet
General Dean – Ok good do we know the locations of the elementals?
Sergeant Liam – Only a couple of the basic elementals but we haven’t got an exact location for them
General Dean – Hmm get me the president he’ll know what to do from here
Sergeant Liam – (salutes) Yes sir
Private Steven – Sir incoming entite
General Dean – Dammit set up the defence team now!
Private Steven – Sir yes sir
General Dean – Blasted things never give a moments peace
????? – Does any invader?
General Dean – How do you still live?
????? – Wouldn’t you like to know?
General Dean – You have no right being here knight
Lone Knight – Who does have the rights to be here then Dean? As I can see you need all the help you can get
General Dean – Hmph very well go and help out on the defensive teams
Lone Knight – So be it but let me give you this info before I do, in the northwest lies a village of dragons as you might already know?
General Dean – No, how do you know this information?
Lone Knight – Because I know most of the dragons that lie there
General Dean – I see so why do you tell me this?
Lone Knight – It would be in your best interest to ask them for help, as they are an extremely powerful race after all
General Dean – Hmph I’d rather die then ask for the help of creatures
Lone Knight – So be it, I will ask them
General Dean – Do whatever you want I could not care less
Lone Knight – You will need all the help you can get when the time comes
Sergeant Liam – Just get out of here, sir the president is on the line for you
General Dean – Good go and help out on the defence and report back here at zero eight hundred hours
Sergeant Liam – Yes sir

Narrator – So the lone knight lives! As for the human army they find themselves in a constant alert from attacking elementals, as for the Behemoth’s.

Geruda – Looks like we will be fighting along side the dragons
Daruna – Hmph it took this long for it too happen but what can you do?
Behemoth Elder – Impatient as always
Daruna – Heh I’ve wanted to fight something for a long long time and now my chance has arisen
Goliath – You forget that the elementals are extremely powerful
Daruna – Does it matter? We are a strong race
Goliath – Not as strong as the elementals
Daruna – Hmph your just scared
Geruda – Calm down Daruna our time will come
Daruna – Whatever I’m getting extremely bored
????? – You have changed Daruna
Daruna – Strall? Is that you?
Strall – Long time no see eh?
Geruda – Where have you been all these years?
Behemoth Elder – Eight thousand years to be precise
Strall – Oh you know travelling, searching for the scroll
Behemoth Elder – Did you ever find it?
Strall – Nope
Goliath – I’m sorry what scroll?
Strall – A scroll that contains a power that can wipe out the entire world if in the wrong hands
Goliath – And an item like that exists?
Strall – Who knows, to most it’s a tale but no one really knows if it exists or not
Behemoth Elder – Well you have been searching for eight thousand years so it can’t really exist
Strall – True but there may be places I did not search, I will continue my search but first I will remain here for some time
Daruna – Well its good to have you back
Geruda – Its good to see him alive
Behemoth Elder – Well let us eat and let us here Strall’s tales about his travels

Narrator – A behemoth that has been missing for eight thousand years shows up at the nick of time. Meanwhile back with at the dragon village Spyro has gathered everyone and shown up at the village entrance.

Flame – So we are going to Lihaba again huh?
Cynder – I wonder if Avion is still there
Sapphire – Who knows he never returned to us
Cynder – Yeah that was a surprise
Silvia – Well if there is another entrance to the village then we will find out
Sparx – If he is still alive
Otis – Knowing Avion I should imagine he is still alive but I don’t know if he would’ve stayed at the place
Spyro – Well we did defeat Leah there and he did say that it was going to be her memorial ground
Ember – He loved her so he couldn’t really stay there seeing her dead all the time
Ruby – True but it still doesn’t explain why he never returned to us
Topaz – There could be another explanation but it is a bit farfetched
Sparx – What are you saying?
Topaz – Well it could’ve been possible that he killed himself just to be reunited with Leah
Silvia – It’s possible but I can’t really see Avion doing that to himself
Spyro – Lets not rule anything out we shall find out if we get there
Cynder – I really felt sorry for him though
Ember – Yeah it must have been hard for him to fight the love of his life
Sapphire – Spyro what are we to do about the children?
Spyro – Ignitus is going to stay with them while we go to Lihaba
Ignitus – Don’t worry too much Sapphire we shall be fine now get going before its too late
Flame – Shall we go then?
Spyro – Lets go everyone

Narrator – Spyro and the others begin to head towards Lihaba if there is another possible entrance to the village as for the humans they still are trying to fend off the entite.

Private Kirk – Sir were not succeeding in fending off the entite
Sergeant Liam – What entite are we up against?
Private Dave – I believe it’s the fire based one sir
Sergeant Liam – Dammit our weapons are useless against the fire entite withdraw immediately
Private Dave – But sir if we do that our town will be destroyed
General Dean – What’s going on?
Sergeant Liam – Sir we are facing the fire entite our weapons are useless to that thing
General Dean – *bleep* then we have no choice retreat we must go to the capital and inform the president
Private Sean – Hey wait its leaving
General Dean – What the hell?
Private Steven – Sir look it’s being attacked from the top of the cliff
General Dean – Who or what the hell is that?
Sergeant Liam – It looks like a dragon to me
Private Dave – A dragon that spits water? Is that even possible?
General Dean – Whatever that thing is get it down here now
Private Dave – Sir yes sir, wait it’s coming to us
General Dean – Prepare the weapons we cannot take any chances
President – Stand down men
General Dean – (salutes) Mr president what are you doing here?
President – I hear you have been attacked countless times by that entite
General Dean – No sir that was a new one we were attacked mainly by the ice entite sir
President – I see and whaaaaaaaaaaaat the hell is that thing?
Sergeant Liam – We believe it may be a dragon sir
President – A dragon hmm hold it as a captive for now
????? – That wont be necessary
President – And who are you to ignore my orders?
????? – I am a dragon and I follow no orders not from some human either
President – I see, then you understand the rules here?
????? – Nope I don’t live here
President – Ignoring the presidents orders means death
????? – I would like to see you try
General Dean – Prepare the weapons
President – So be it you are a fool to believe that you can outsmart our weaponry
????? – Oh yeah what weapons?
Soldiers – What the hell? Where the hell is my weapon?
President – Hmph you are testing my patience dragon and I’m in no mood
????? – Do you really think I care? As you might’ve noticed I just saved this town
President – Grr General Dean you and your division is dismissed I would like to speak with this… dragon alone
General Dean – Sir?
President – Just do it!
General Dean - …Sir yes sir everyone back to your positions

Narrator – The president and the mysterious dragon continue talking

President – So do you have a name?
????? – I do but I’m not about to tell you
President – Very well I’m President Carlos leader of the human race
????? – I know who you are I have been monitoring your every moves
President – Why?
????? – So I know if you’re planning to attack my fellow dragons
President – And why would I do that?
????? – Don’t play stupid with me I know what your kind is like
President – I see
????? – And I’m not about to let you take over the entire world
President – And how do you plan on stopping me?
????? – Oh you wait if you even try to attack the dragons I will personally kill you and your army
President – You could never wipe out my army so don’t threaten me
????? – Oh you don’t know my power then do you? Or did you not see me basically killed that entite
President – It still lives you imbecile
????? – I know but my attacks alone could never beat an entite even if it is weak to my attacks
President – Get to the point why are you here?
????? – I’m offering to help you plan out an attack plan against the elementals but on a few conditions of course
President – Name them
????? – Firstly you head to the dragon village and speak with a dragon named Spyro and form an alliance with him, secondly I want you to grant me every bit of information you have on the behemoths
President – Are you serious? I would never give up information
????? – Then you don’t have my help
President – Wait wait wait very well, oh and by the way who is this Spyro?
????? – He is the leader of the dragons
President – Ok well here is the information I have on the behemoths as requested and I shall make my way towards the dragon village right now
????? – You are wise but Spyro isn’t currently at the dragon village he makes way to the village of Lihaba, which can be entered from your iron mines
President – Very well

Narrator – This mysterious dragon made her demands very clear and offers to help the leader of the humans on the basis that he becomes allied to the dragons and gives her info on the behemoths. As Spyro and the others approach the old mines that they used to get into Lihaba six years ago they begin to see things that are not meant to be seen.

Ruby – What is going on here?
Topaz – What are these things we are seeing?
Spyro – Ghosts by the looks of it
????? – No they are spectres, beings that once roamed the mines
Cynder – Spectres?
????? – Yes, you see ghosts cannot physically harm anyone but spectres can
Flame – So basically a ghost with the power to physically attach people?
????? – Yes
Spyro – I’m sorry but who are you?
????? – Quite surprising that you don’t remember me Spyro
Spyro – Avion?
????? – Nope
Spyro – You couldn’t be, that’s just not possible if you are who I now think you are
????? – Who are you thinking of Spyro?
Spyro – Kain?
Kain – Ah you got me
Ember – What!?
Cynder – That’s impossible
Flame – We made sure you were dead
Kain – A human that recited the mystic spell bought me back two years ago
Spyro – Human?
Kain – Have you not met the humans yet?
Cynder – Yes we have but a human reciting an ancient ritual
Kain – Does seem impossible doesn’t it?
Spyro – Yes very but I still don’t understand why you are here
Kain – Oh come on now Spyro I’m here to help you out
Flame – Even though we are the ones that killed you nearly twelve years ago now
Kain – And your point is?
Flame – Just saying
Kain – You really think I would challenge you all now? You beat the eternal dragon dammit how can I hope to beat you now?
Spyro – He has a point Flame
Flame – I know but I still don’t get why he is helping us that’s all
Kain – Ok let me explain it to you,  I cannot beat you even if I tried and there is a much more threatening set of creatures upon us so I’m going to lend my power to help out
Flame – All right already I get the point
Spyro – Kain why didn’t you come to me when you were revived?
Kain – Because I had some other things to do first
Spyro – Ok then, well anyway do you know a way into Lihaba?
Kain – Spyro come on now I have telepathic abilities
Ember – Yeah that was quite annoying
Kain – Ouch Ember is it me or are you just getting fat?
Cynder – Oh dear now your in for it Kain
Kain – Huh why?
Cynder – (whispers) She’s pregnant you fool
Kain – Oops sorry
Ember – Your going to regret saying that
Kain – Why aren’t you back at the village resting?
Ember – Because I’d rather be with everyone else
Ruby – I hate to brake up this little reunion but shall we hurry up?
Kain – Oh right yeah hold on I’ll open up the portal now
Spyro – Make it quick Kain we haven’t got much time
Kain – Already done now go on through

Narrator – So Kain has been revived but is he really back to help? Find out next time.

End of Part 1

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#2 May 02, 2008 12:11 AM

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Re: Here is the sequel (The Elemental Entities) Scrapped....

Part 2

Narrator – When Spyro and everyone else arrives at Lihaba they come across a statue that resembles Leah and the President.

President – You are Spyro yes?
Spyro – Yes and who are you?
President – I’m President Carlos leader of the humans and you are?
Spyro – Well you already now my name but I’m Spyro leader of the dragons
President – Convenient
Spyro – What is?
President – Well I’m here on request of a fellow dragon of yours
Spyro – Name?
President – She didn’t say but I’m here to request an alliance
Spyro – It took convincing from another dragon to request an alliance? But we all need to help each other so this alliance is accepted
President – Good I must return to the city now and I wish you to visit me as soon as you’re finished here
Spyro – Very well
Cynder – Spyro are you sure you can trust this guy?
Spyro – Do we have much choice?
Cynder – I guess your right
Sapphire – Even though we need all the help we can get we must tread carefully
Flame – Something is still bothering me
Spyro – What is it Flame?
Flame – That Carlos guy he mentioned a fellow dragon asked him to do this
Ember – And he said the dragon was a girl as well
Spyro – What are you getting at guys?
Silvia – I was thinking Avion at first but then he mentioned “she” so the only others I can think of are Aeris and Leah
Topaz – Well I don’t think it would have been Leah and Aeris well she kind of disappeared about a year after we rebuilt the dragon village
Spyro – I’m not going to rule out Leah it could be possible
Kain – Well seeming that Aeris, Leah and me have been bought back several times everything could be possible
Ruby – Should have asked that human what the dragon looked like
Spyro – That would’ve helped but we haven’t got the time to be thinking about that now lets find these relics and get back to Ignitus
Cynder – I think we will find out who this dragon is later
Spyro – Yeah well this village isn’t all that big so we all should split up and search for these relics

Narrator – Everyone begins to search the village for the ancient relics. Meanwhile back in the city.

President – Everyone as of now we have accepted an alliance with the dragons
Sergeant Liam – Oh great that’s the last thing I wanted to hear
General Dean – You got a problem with that soldier?
Sergeant Liam – Oh no sir, I just didn’t think we would’ve requested an alliance with anyone that’s all
General Dean – We all thought that but things change and we have to help each other out even if it is the last thing on our minds
Private Kirk – Incoming elemental
Sergeant Fred – Don’t they ever give up?
General Dean – Nope, prepare the weapons and set up the defence team
????? – It’s the fire entite again let me handle this
General Dean – Hmph *bleep* fire entite, stand back men let the dragon show you how it’s done
????? – You really need to construct some over weapons if you hope to beat these things
General Dean – And who are you to question our weaponry?
????? – Suit yourself let me explain it for you, your weapons are based on fire based attacks and your swords cant hurt the entites anyway so get pumps that propel water or something and anything that could harm the entites and the basic elementals of course, now if you don’t mind I will get rid of this entite

Narrator – The mysterious dragon charges into the air and quickly releases torrents of water upon the entite defeating the first entite.

????? – Simple as that
General Dean – Well I’ll be *bleep* she defeated that entite with no problems at all
????? – Now you see why you need to construct more weapons
President – And what about you? What are you going to do from here?
????? – I’m going to pay Spyro a visit
President – I see well thanks for the help today
????? – Don’t thank me just yet. That entite I just killed isn’t really dead It will regenerate and reappear later
President – So you are saying that the elementals cant be killed?
????? – That is exactly what I’m saying, we must figure out what keeps them alive and then kill them from what we have learned
President – Very well I will get working on digging up information
????? – Goodbye for now

Narrator – So the mysterious dragon takes off in search of Spyro who is currently still in Lihaba.

Ember – Spyro over here we’ve found something!
Spyro – What is it?
Ember – I don’t know but it looks ancient
Flame – Is this what we are after?
Spyro – Looks like it lets pick them all up and go
Kain – The portal is ready lets go

Narrator – Spyro and the others head on through the portal and end up back at the dragon village.

Spyro – Ignitus I think we have found the relics
Ignitus – Let me see them… Yes these are the relics, finally we can figure out the elementals’ weaknesses
Ember – I’m going to go and lie down let me know when we are heading back out there
Cynder – I think it would be best if you stayed here and got some rest
Ember – I guess your right
Kain – So what do we do from here?
Ignitus – Spyro would you like to explain how he is still alive?
Kain – I can here you, you know? And I was bought back when a human recited the ritual
Spyro – Ignitus another thing has been bothering us as well 
Ignitus – What is it?
Spyro – When we arrived at Lihaba we came across the leader of the humans and he requested an alliance on behalf of a female dragon, I think it is slightly strange
Ignitus – Hmm did he mention this dragons name?
Spyro – No he said that she didn’t tell him her name
Ignitus – I see
Flame – The only dragons that we can think of are Aeris and Leah
Ignitus – Hmm its possible but a dragon that doesn’t say their name I really don’t think it would either of those two
Spyro – Do you have any ideas on who it could be Ignitus?
Ignitus – No I don’t think so but I will let you know if I do
????? – You wont have to look far
Spyro – Whoa who are you?
????? – I’m a descendant of the grand elders of the Grande Steppe
Ignitus – Impossible that place was destroyed thousands of years ago
????? – Yes it was but me and some others managed to escape but as you can see I’m the only one that survived
Spyro – So do you have a name?
Amalia – My name is Amalia the last elder of the Grande Steppe and I’m also known as the God of Water
Spyro – And you are the one that convinced the human leader to request an alliance?
Amalia – Yes it took some time but it worked
Flame – A God of Water?
Amalia – Yes I command the element of water
Spyro – We could really use your help against the elementals
Amalia – That’s why I’m here
Ignitus – I still can’t believe that you have survived all these years
Amalia – You forget Ignitus that grand elders were granted immunities to age
Flame – So you’re basically invincible?
Amalia – Yes but like anyone else I can be killed just as easily as any other creature and that was what happened to my companions
????? – Not exactly Amalia
Amalia – But I saw you die in front of my eyes
????? – Eyes can be deceiving
Amalia – But how did you manage to stay alive Kliever?
Kliever – Ah I will tell you about another day
Amalia – Spyro this is Kliever the God of Earth
Kliever – Pleasure to make an acquaintance
Spyro – Nice to meet you Kliever
Amalia – How many of us are still alive then?
Kliever – Only us two I’m afraid
Amalia – I see, so anyway how did you find me?
Kliever – I guess it was luck that I found you here I only came here because I found out that a large group of dragons inhabited this place and quite a large group it is
Spyro – Could I ask why you came here Kliever?
Kliever – Well since to the elementals have come to rise I wanted to lend a hand in defeating them
Spyro – That’s good to hear, the more help we get the better
Kliever – You know help when you see it
Spyro – That is true
Kliever – You are well-respected Spyro try not to break that
Spyro – I wont
Kliever – Now I’m heading off to find out more information about the elementals I will meet you all back here in four days
Amalia – Kliever we haven’t got four days
Kliever – Trust me Amalia, I sense great power within these dragons
Amalia – Well if you trust them then I guess I can leave you go
Kliever – Don’t worry about me I can take of myself very well and you know that
Amalia – I guess
Kliever – Well I bid you all farewell for now

Narrator – Kliever heads off into the distance and as he does the village is suddenly covered in a deluge of rain

Amalia – A storm?
Spyro – If it is a storm it started to suddenly
Flame – Wait Spyro look
Spyro – What the hell?
Amalia – That isn’t an elemental
Spyro – I know and the weird thing is that I know that dragon
Amalia – You know that guy?
Spyro – Yes its Avion
Avion – Look who still lives, its good to see you again Spyro
Spyro – You to Avion where the hell have you been?
Avion – At the castle in the desert
Spyro – Why?
Avion – I couldn’t come back I needed to be on my own for awhile and well I have bought along a guest
Spyro – Who?
Avion – Leah you can show yourself now
Ember – Why did you bring her back Avion?
Leah – Don’t worry Ember after you all beaten me I lost all evil within me yet I don’t know why
Avion – So I bought her along
Spyro – What’s with the storm?
Avion – I didn’t do that
Otis – That could explain why there is an entite over there
Spyro – *bleep* now will be a good time to leave
Leah – Allow me to have some fun
Avion – Leah you haven’t fully recovered yet
Leah – Your point?
Avion – You wont be able to hurt it
Leah – Fine lets go then
Spyro – Your personality hasn’t changed at all Leah
Leah – Run now talk later

Narrator – So Leah lives yet again but seems to have no signs of evil left within her. The entite begins destroying the village while everyone evacuates heading towards an unknown tunnel. Meanwhile in the behemoth village.

Daruna – God I’m bored
Goliath – Your always bored
Daruna – Your point is?
Goliath – You need to entertain yourself so why don’t you go into the training area
Daruna – Bah that place is so crappy now that it doesn’t even come into entertainment
Goliath – (sigh) Whatever just stop complaining
Daruna – You want to go into the training area and fight with me?
Goliath – As long as it shuts you up
Daruna – Oh your so on
Geruda – Would you two stop *bleep*ing about and focus on the problems we have now
Goliath – Right, right, right so what are we to do?
Strall – Well firstly we must find the source of the elementals and destroy it then focus the rest of our power on the elementals
Behemoth Elder – The most logical thing I’ve heard all day
Geruda – Well Strall has always been the clever one
Goliath – True but where do we even start to look?
President – I can venture a guess
Behemoth Elder – What is the president doing all the way up here?
President – Spyro told me that you all would be here
Geruda – Spyro!? So he is still around
President – Yes so are so many other dragons
Geruda – So anyway blah blah blah where were you going to say we could find the source of the elementals?
President – Straight to the point, ok you all know the desert of the dark souls right?
Strall – The hell hole yes
President – Well some of my researchers have been monitoring the activity there and discovered something unusual
Strall – And that is?
President – Here take a look for yourselves
Strall – What does all this mean?
President – Unusual beings have been starting to emerge around the mountain that resides in the centre of the desert and not only that strange gasses have begun to form
Strall – I see well I will go and check it out for myself
President – If you wish to go to your grave then be my guest
Strall – I’ve been through many things human and some gas and a few monsters aren’t going to stop me now
President – Very well
Behemoth Elder – Be sure you return Strall
Strall – Don’t worry about me I’ll be back before you know it
Daruna – I’m coming with you being here doing nothing is driving me insane
Strall – Fair enough just keep up

Narrator – So both Daruna and Strall take off to the desert of the dark souls not knowing what they are to face. As for Spyro and the others they approach the caverns that lead to the Behemoth village.

Sparx – Ugh finally I was beginning to think that we were lost
Spyro – Whatever, right the village is on the other side of these caverns you all ready?
All – YES!
Spyro – Ok lets go
Cynder – So do you think they will be glad to see us again?
Otis – Who knows?
Topaz – I barely know them so yeah
Flame – I reckon they will
Ruby – Well all we can do is wait and see
Spyro – Yeah lets just hope they are still hanging around eh?
Otis – That would be a pain if they already left, anyway how are you doing back there Ember?
Ember – Erm I’m extremely tired
Cynder – Not surprising we haven’t had any rest in a while
Spyro – Well we cant really rest here but…
Otis – (interrupts Spyro) Don’t worry about that I’ll wait here and catch up when she regains her energy
Spyro – Ok be careful though Otis we don’t know what could be waiting around the corners here
Ruby – Not being funny or anything but wouldn’t you think this place would be empty considering the behemoth’s live on the other side?
Cynder – That would be reasonable but if I recall the behemoth’s didn’t really like visitors so they could have guards or something like that
Avion – I doubt it these caverns are too small for inhabitants
Leah – You will be surprised what can lurk in the smallest of places
Spyro – I agree with Cynder we should all be careful nevertheless, Otis just keep your guard up until we know if there is anything down here
Otis – Will do Spyro now get going we don’t have much time

Narrator – So Ember and Otis stay behind while the others head deeper into the caverns.

Cynder – Do you think they will ok Spyro?
Spyro – Otis is a tough one so they should be depending on what lurks down here if there is anything down here
Flame – Well I doubt there is anything at all considering the village is like two seconds away
Ruby – Well these caverns aren’t all that long
Avion – Only well hidden
Leah – Like most things these days
Geruda – Spyro is that you?
Spyro – Good to see you again Geruda
Geruda – It is good to see you again at these dark times
Ignitus – That’s usually my line but what the hell
Geruda – Where is Ember and Otis?
Spyro – Resting in the caverns
Geruda – Oh ok
Cynder – Why don’t you have guards or anything down there?
Geruda – Well as you can see there isn’t many of us left so we didn’t have the forces to fortify the caves
Cynder – That makes sense
Goliath – Once we get back on our feet we shall start to fortify the caves and our village like it was eight thousand years ago
Leah – Eight thousand years and this is all you have left quite pitiful
Geruda – And why is the eternal dragon alive?
Avion – The evil that possessed her no longer exists
Geruda – Quite a risk you took Avion
Avion – I know but a risk worth taking
Spyro – Geruda is it ok for us to remain here because our village has been destroyed by the elementals?
Geruda – Sure we can discuss the battle plans here as well
Spyro – Thanks Geruda
Geruda – It’s the least I can do for an old friend you all go and get some rest we will discuss what to do next tomorrow
Spyro – Ok thanks again Geruda oh wait what about Ember and Otis?
Goliath – Don’t worry about them I will go and get them
Spyro – Ok thanks uh…?
Goliath – Oh sorry to be rude I’m Goliath
Spyro – Pleasure to meet you Goliath thanks for the help
Goliath – No problem

Narrator – So Spyro and the others stay and take rest while Goliath goes and gets Ember and Otis.

Ember – Otis I don’t feel all that great
Otis – Don’t worry Ember I’m here for you
Ember – Thanks Otis but seriously I don’t feel great
Goliath – That could be because you are about to give birth
Otis – What already? And who are you?
Goliath – Save the discussion for later lets get this one to the village quickly
Otis – How?
Goliath – I’ll carry her
Otis – Oh
Goliath – Here we go lets go shall we?
Otis – Thanks
Ember – Thank you

Narrator – So Goliath carries Ember on his back and heads back to the village. What will happen next? Find out next time.

End of part 2

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Part 3

Narrator – Goliath returns to the village with Ember and Otis.

Goliath – Geruda get this one to the infirmary and fast
Geruda – Ember? What’s wrong?
Goliath – Save the small talk Geruda she maybe about to give birth
Geruda – Wow well ok
Otis – So who are you?
Goliath – I’m Goliath and you are?
Otis – I’m Otis nice to meet you
Goliath – Back at you
Otis – How do you know that she could give birth at any moment?
Goliath – One of my powers I can sense stuff like this
Otis – Wow you could be a great help
Goliath – Indeed plus one of your friends here is also pregnant
Otis – Really? Who?
Goliath – The black dragon
Otis – You mean Cynder?
Goliath – I think that was her name yeah
Otis – Wow Spyro will be pleased although this is quite bad timing
Goliath – Indeed you should go and join everyone
Otis – Good idea could you do me one favour?
Goliath – Depending on the favour
Otis – Could you keep a close eye on Ember for me?
Goliath – Sure
Otis – Ok thanks

Narrator – Ember could possibly give birth at any moment and Otis learns of some great news but at the wrong time. Meanwhile the president begins to approach the city.

President – (talking to himself) *bleep* what were those beasts? I’ve never seen such creatures. Either way I don’t think I will be messing with them anytime soon.
General Dean – Sir welcome back how did it go?
President – It was as the dragon said the behemoth’s do reside there and to be honest lets not try to get on the wrong side of them they are extremely powerful looking beasts
General Dean – Ok sir I’ll keep that in mind
President – Anything interesting happen while I was away?
General Dean – As you can see we have taken many casualties to the entites constant attacks and in my opinion I don’t think we would be able to withstand another attack from them
President – Dammit right get everyone into the mines we will figure out what to do from there
General Dean – Yes sir, Sergeant Liam start getting everyone down into the mines
Sergeant Liam – Yes sir!
General Dean – And make it quick we don’t know how long we have until the next attack from the entites

Narrator – So the humans prepare to get everyone into the mines before the next attack from the entites. Meanwhile Spyro and the others begin to awake from their nights rest.

Spyro – That’s better how does everyone else feel?
Flame – A bit better than usual
Cynder – (yawns) I’ve been better
Ruby – I want to sleep forever because I know what I’m waking up to
Topaz – I agree with Ruby
Silvia – I just want to finish this and then rest all I want
Sapphire – Why don’t we stop moaning and just get on with it
Sparx – (mumbles) Sounds like an idea
Otis – I will be back in a sec I’m going to check on Ember
Spyro – Why what’s wrong with her?
Otis – You know that Goliath? Well he seemed to think that Ember was going to give birth last night but I really didn’t know what to think so I’m going to find out
Cynder – I’ll come with you
Avion – What’s going on? What did I miss?
Spyro – Only that Ember may have given birth already but other than that not much
Avion – Heh if she has given birth great timing eh?
Silvia – The only thing that I can say top that id f she has then there is some good news to talk about
Spyro – Silvia’s right we’ve all been talking about what to do next and what are we going to do once we’ve beaten the entites but we’ve had nothing good to talk about so this will be something new to talk about
Flame – Some good news at last
Otis – Hey guys Ember has given birth to a batch of thirteen eggs
Spyro – Wow really?
Otis – Come and have a look

Narrator – So everyone goes to see the new addition that will be joining them some time soon.

Silvia – Seeing all these eggs has just reminded me what about our children back at the dragon village?
Spyro – Ignitus was to take care of them
Ignitus – And take care of them I did.
Sapphire – Oh thank god for that
Ignitus – There was no other safe place to take them but here and I have spoken to the Elder, he said that they can remain here until peace is once restored outside
Cynder – That was nice of him, oh Ignitus did you tell him that they are a handful?
Ignitus – Yes and I offered to stay and look after them all while you guys are cleaning up outside
Flame – Ignitus was always good with the children
Ignitus – try not to keep that in mind Flame I wont be around forever
Flame – Unfortunately
Ignitus – Oh and Spyro I have figured out which entite and elemental each of you will fight
Spyro – What do you mean by each one of you?
Ignitus – One of each of you will take an entite and an elemental
Spyro – So we wont be fighting them together this time?
Ignitus – No
Cynder – That’s going to be a bit different than usual but we should be able to handle it
Ignitus- Yes and here is how we will be beating them, Spyro you will be taking down the dark elementals, Cynder you will be taking the holy elementals, Ruby you will be taking the ice elementals, Topaz you will be taking the water elementals, Leah you will be taking the fire elementals, Silvia you will be taking the earth elementals, Sapphire you will be taking the wind elementals and Avion you shall be taking the thunder elementals
Flame – What about the rest of us?
Ignitus – You will all remain here and help me with this lot
Flame – That makes sense
Spyro – Ignitus do you even know where most of the elementals are?
Ignitus – Its not hard to figure it out Spyro just simply think about which place the elementals are more likely to be for example the fire elementals are more likely to near the volcano to the east of the human city and the water elementals are more likely to be near the sea just think about it
Spyro – That makes it hard for me and Cynder we have holy and darkness I cant think of anywhere that suits those elements
Leah – The dark element could be my old castle
Avion – As for holy there is only one place that has a high holy element count and that’s the desert of the lost or the lost desert in a simpler manor
Spyro – I never thought of Leah’s old castle but how can the lost desert have a high holy count?
Leah – The temple that once stood there taught visitors the power of the holy element and something I tried to seek out but never found yet the holy power still remains there
Spyro – I see
Goliath – You are still forgetting one thing Ignitus and that’s the source of these creatures once one falls they re-spawn in the same location that they started off in
Geruda – I believe Strall and Daruna where going to check something that could be the source out
Ignitus – Whereabouts?
Geruda – The desert of dark souls or something like that
Ignitus – The blackened desert?
Behemoth Elder – Yes a god forsaken hell hole where all manor of creatures reside
Ignitus – If there is a source to these elementals and it is in that place then I dread to think what it is going to be
Flame – Come on Ignitus we have fought Kain and won what could possibly be worse?
Kain – Is that an insult?
Flame – In a way yes
Ignitus – Don’t start and Flame I don’t think you realise, the blackened desert is the home of many twisted creatures bound to nothing other than darkness
Flame – Like Kain
Ignitus – Creatures far worse than you can imagine
Leah – I can think of a few, lets see for starters you have the constructs that were given life by the power from the darkness and then you have the odd looking plant like creatures that have taught themselves to absorb the power within in the darkness to make themselves much more powerful and in all honestly not even I could stand up to those creatures
Flame – Even if you were still evil?
Leah – Yes though they could not kill me I couldn’t even hope to hurt them
Flame – Ok I kind of get the picture now
Avion – Luckily they would never threaten us because with their sacrifice for power they are bound to darkness they would never be able to leave the desert unless the world was covered in the thick fog like darkness that surrounds the desert
Behemoth Elder – But that doesn’t explain how these elementals have come to appear among us
Strall – The president was right about the desert it is no longer enterable
Daruna – That fog has thickened and a strange obsidian coloured aura permits the top of the desert mountain
Strall – The worst thing is that the fog is very slowly expanding covering nearby lakes and forests
Behemoth Elder – You mean that the fog is beginning to cover the world?
Strall – It would seem that way yes
Ignitus – Then that gives us little time to beat the elementals
Strall – But the elementals come back as soon as they are defeated
????? – There is only one way to defeat them
Spyro – Who are you?
????? – My name is not important
Spyro – Uh ok then how do you beat those things?
????? – They must be defeated all at the same time
Spyro – You mean beat all sixteen of them at the same time? That would be an impossibility
????? – Well there is two sets of them correct?
Strall – I see now first beat the weaker ones then the stronger ones
????? – Yes
Spyro – But still how are we going to manage that?
????? – There is one place in the world that any element can live without the fear of dying out
Behemoth Elder – And where is this place? And the name of the place also
????? – The place is known as the elemental plains and it is located in the very centre of the planet
Spyro – The very centre? That’s the human city
Leah – That doesn’t make sense if the humans live on such a plain then how is it that they only have been able to construct one elemental weapon?
????? – Because they have never been able to dig up the materials to construct weapons to support certain elements
Daruna – That also explains why the human city is attacked by all different elementals

Narrator – So everyone continues to talk about the elemental plains as Amalia and Kliever meet up and begin to head back to Spyro and the others.

Amalia – What did you find out there Kliever?
Kliever – Nothing that is of use to us unfortunately
Amalia – So what do we do know?
Kliever – Well I’m going back to Spyro and the others to see if they have dug up anything of interest
Amalia – I’ll come with you
Kliever – And I was wrong about us being the only two survivors
Amalia – What?
Kliever – Yes I found one of our friends buried among a rockslide and I was able to get him back on his feet
Amalia – Who?
Kliever – Our good friend Synth
Amalia – Wow this is good news he may know what to do about these elementals
Kliever – I don’t know he was very evasive when I asked him
Amalia – Then he knows something but wont say anything
Kliever – Anyway he has gone to the Behemoth village to speak with Strall and I will be going there once I have gone to speak with Spyro and the others
Amalia – Ok then what are we waiting for lets get going

Narrator – So the pair begin to head toward the dragon village not knowing that it was destroyed. As for the humans they have managed to get underground in time.

President – Good work men hopefully the elementals won’t attack us down here
Private Callum – Sir what are we to do with the injured? We have no medical supplies down here
President – Didn’t you pick them up when we were evacuating?
Private Callum – No sir
General Dean – Sir you didn’t mention to pick up supplies as well
President – Dammit, ok Dean you gather up a few men and go up to the surface and gather as much medical supplies and weapons as possible
General Dean – Yes sir!
President – Liam you get all the wounded into the biggest room of the mines
Sergeant Liam – Yes sir!
President – And Gary you get all the weapons we have down here into one area
General Gary – Yes sir!
Sergeant Patrick – Sir what about food and water?
President – For fu… God dammit isn’t there anything I did right?
Sergeant Patrick – Apart from evacuate I’m afraid not sir
President – Dammit, ok Patrick go and join Dean and gather food and water
Sergeant Patrick – Yes sir!

Narrator – It seems that President Carlos is having trouble remembering important things and while he has his faithful men gathering supplies that will keep them alive within the mines and strange creature begins to roam the planet. Meanwhile Kliever and Amalia arrive at the dragon village.

Amalia – What happened here?
Kliever – Looks like the elementals have made a visit
Amalia – I hope the others made it out alive
Kliever – Well seeing as there aren’t any bodies I would say they are all right
Amalia – I hope your right Kliever
Kliever – Well I guess we might as well head to the behemoth village and meet up with Synth
Amalia – Who knows maybe Spyro and the others are there
Kliever – Its possible but lets find out and see
Amalia – I’m right behind you

Narrator – So Amalia and Kliever learn that the dragon village no longer exists but know that the others made it out alive. Meanwhile back the Behemoth village Ember begins to awaken.

Otis – Hey Ember how are you feeling?
Ember – I’m ok I guess where is everyone else?
Otis – Outside talking about the elementals and all that boring stuff
Ember – Oh fun uh
Otis – Whoa hey try and rest ok you still haven’t fully recovered
Ember – I’m sorry I don’t like sitting around like this
Otis – I know you don’t but you have to
Ember – How many eggs did I have by the way? I kind of passed out during birth
Otis – You had thirteen
Ember – Wow really?
Otis – Yeah
Ember – Wow early birth and thirteen eggs what a day
Otis – Yeah it is quite surprising and the funny thing is that Goliath knew that you were going to give birth
Ember – Yeah how did he know?
Otis – He says he sense illness and stuff like that
Ember – Well pregnancy isn’t an illness
Otis – That’s why I said and stuff like that but the strange thing is he said that Cynder could be pregnant
Ember – Well if she is it couldn’t have happened at a worse time
Otis – The funny thing is that I don’t think either her or Spyro know about it
Ember – I should imagine Cynder would know I mean I felt like I would rather sleep than anything during my pregnancy
Otis – Mind you Cynder hasn’t been pregnant before so she might not know the symptoms
Ember – I guess, I’ll talk to her can you send her in for me?
Otis – Sure hold on

Narrator – As Otis walks out of the room to get Cynder he comes out to a heated argument between Strall and Synth.

Strall – Dammit Synth we can’t just wander into the blackened desert it would be a *bleep* death wish
Synth – Then what do you propose we do?
Strall – I would rather go by what you said when you arrived
Synth – You mean do it the hard way? Have you lost your mind?
Strall – Ugh after all these years you haven’t changed a bit
Spyro – Uh guys could you calm down?
Strall and Synth – NO!
Spyro – Whoa ok
Otis – (over the arguing) hey Cynder Ember wants to see you
Cynder – Oh ok

Narrator – The argument continues and Cynder goes to see Ember

Cynder – Hey you’re awake
Ember – Oh hey Cynder
Cynder – How are you feeling?
Ember – Exhausted
Cynder – I don’t blame you
Ember – Yeah and to be honest I’m glad its over
Cynder – What do you mean?
Ember – I mean during pregnancy you feel like you don’t want to do anything and you feel like crap every time you wake up
Cynder – That’s odd I kind have felt like that for the past few weeks
Ember – What? Really?
Cynder – Yeah, so um you think I could be pregnant?
Ember – Yeah I think so
Cynder – Wow Spyro will be so pleased
Ember – Cynder thing about it if you are pregnant look at the timing
Cynder – I guess
Spyro – Hey Ember your finally awake
Ember – What do you mean finally?
Spyro – I mean uh well you know
Cynder – (laughs) I haven’t seen you stutter like that in a long, long while
Spyro – (goes red in the face) Whatever, anyway what were you too talking about?
Cynder – Not much I was just talking to Ember about the current situation
Spyro – Oh ok, you sure Cynder it looks like something is bothering you
Cynder – I don’t know but I uh um well Ember thinks I maybe pregnant
Spyro – Really!?
Ember – She does have all the symptoms
Spyro – Wow this is amazing I mean ok the timing could’ve been better but wow I’m going to be a father after all this time
Cynder – So you’re happy?
Spyro – I’m over the moon
Ember – I knew he would
Spyro – I have got to tell the others
Cynder – Go ahead I’m going to stay and talk to Ember

Narrator – Spyro runs outside to tell everyone the good news but the argument between Synth and Strall still rages on. What will happen next? Find out next time

End of part 3

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Part 4

Narrator – The argument between Synth and Strall begins to die down when Spyro tells everyone the good news.

Spyro – Hey everyone Ember is awake now
Flame – Finally
Spyro – That’s not all I know this isn’t great timing but I’m going to be a father
Flame – Did I just here that right?
Spyro – Yes I’m going to be a dad
Flame – Wow congratulations you and Cynder must happy
Cynder – We are
Silvia – Took your time though eh?
Cynder – I guess so
Spyro – We were picking the right moment but as you can see we picked bad timing
Cynder – That kind of puts me out of fighting the holy elementals
Otis – I can fight them if you like
Ignitus – I don’t think that’s a good idea considering your attacks are mainly holy based
Otis – Oh I see then who will take the holy elementals?
Ignitus – Well considering Cynder is pretty much the only person that wields darkness as her main element then I don’t think there is anyone else
Synth – Oh I can help with that most of my attacks are based on darkness
Ignitus – Well this makes it harder considering you were the one to help us communicate while we are apart sorting these beasts
Synth – I know but we have no choice
Ignitus – Then what are we to do?
Synth – I can still use my power but it will take longer than usual
Spyro – Then we should still be ok
Synth – We should be we should now begin to prepare for the battles ahead
Flame – Easier said than done eh?
Spyro – Isn’t everything?
Flame – Yeah true
Goliath – If you all wish to train the training room is over by the fountain
Spyro – Might as well train up everyone so lets go
Silvia – Sounds like fun
Sapphire – Sounds boring but I guess I should keep up
Synth – It is best for those that are not fighting to also train as after the elementals are killed we shall be crossing the darkened desert
Strall – Once you figure the way in obviously
Synth – Of course
Strall – Well then everyone lets go and train up

Narrator – So the fight against the elementals draws near. Meanwhile the humans are struggling to stay alive within the mines.

President – We cannot stay under here much longer
Sergeant Liam – Sir there are many fiends coming through the mines and they are heading our way
General Dean – Form a defensive perimeter covering all entry points and do it quickly
Sergeant Liam – Yes sir
President – What are we going to do? We haven’t much food supplies and we haven’t got much ammunition left either
General Dean – The only thing we can do is make our way back to the surface and seek shelter elsewhere
President – Where would you suggest?
General Dean – The dragon village or the behemoth village
President – We can’t really ask them to protect us considering we were their enemies in the last few wars
General Dean – I guess but look at our current situation sir we kind of don’t have a choice
President – Hmm ok gather a group of men and check the city and if the coast is clear then come down and begin heading towards the behemoth village
General Dean – Yes sir

Narrator – As Dean begins to scan the horizon Spyro and the others begin to prepare for the attack on the elementals.

Spyro – We’ve all had enough training so it’s best to get this other and done with
Synth – I agree
Cynder – Good luck everyone
Synth – Thanks Cynder
Spyro – We will be back as soon as possible
Leah – This will be simple
Avion – Over-confident as always
Leah – And your point is?
Avion – Nothing just saying
Spyro – Not the time to argue lets start heading to our designated destinations and Synth that’s when we will be relying on you
Synth – You don’t have to worry about me I’ll get the job done
Spyro – Good because we cant afford failure now
Ignitus – We can’t afford failure at all
Cynder – Just go and finish the job guys
Synth – With pleasure young dragon

Narrator – So everyone that is fighting heads off to their designated area to destroy the elementals once and for all. Meanwhile the humans begin to leave the mines.

Civilians – Finally fresh air
President – They seem happy to be out of the mines
General Dean – Don’t we all though sir?
President – True I suppose but we were safer down there
General Dean – But we cant stay down there forever so we are best to move like now
President – Right gather up your men Dean and get the civilians to the behemoth village and John will gather up his men and protect your passage
General John & Dean – Yes sir!

Narrator – So the humans decide to head towards the behemoth village. But little do they know that Spyro and the others have left to fight the elementals.

Spyro – Right this is where we all split up good luck everyone
Synth – Have fun everyone
Ruby – This will be interesting
Topaz – Interesting? More like hell
Leah – Piece of cake
Silvia – Just the warm up for the final fight against the source eh?
Sapphire – Sounds about right
Avion – Lets get this over and done with
All – GOOD LUCK TO US ALL!!!
Spyro – But does everyone know where they are going?
Synth – Lost Desert is my first choice
Ruby – Caverns Of Ice or the Snowy Mountain
Topaz – Granada Sea
Leah – The Heart of the Grand Volcano is my best bet
Silvia – Only place I can think of is Lihaba Village
Sapphire – Solina Desert
Avion – Mine has to be the Plains of Eternal thunder
Spyro – Ok my best bet is Leah’s castle
Synth – Remember to use your power to activate the medallion that I gave you all
Topaz – What is this for again?
Synth – (sigh) It’s to let me know when to tell everyone to begin attacking
Avion – Do we have to kill these at the EXACT same time?
Synth – No but they must all be defeated within sixty minutes otherwise they regenerate
Leah – That’s long enough for me
Spyro – Ok lets finish this

Narrator – So everyone that is fighting head off to their designated location and the humans begin to approach the cave to the behemoths village.

Daruna – Geruda we have company
Geruda – The humans what the hell do they want?
Goliath – Looks to me that they need a place to hide
Otis – But why here?
Goliath – To them we are the strongest race they have come across and with that they wish to seek shelter amongst us
Daruna – Well I say we eat them
Geruda – Seems good enough to me
Otis – Wait! Why would you do that?
Daruna – These incompetent fools tried to obliterate this village when they found it
Behemoth Elder – That maybe the case but I have accepted their alliance
Daruna – You must be joking?
Behemoth Elder – No the president came here seeking my help and I gladly accepted but with many conditions
Geruda – What kind of conditions?
Behemoth Elder – After the defeat of the elementals and their source they must aid us in any war we come across, they must surrender their weapons once here and finally they are to forget this villages location
Geruda – Sounds good enough to me
Daruna – Whatever as long as they don’t *bleep* me off I’m fine with it
Strall – I will go and help them in…. Wait a minute you know Synth said that the elementals can only stay where there is a high concentration of their element then how does one roam freely?
Behemoth Elder – Holy element can freely roam but must return to its concentrated elemental zone before it deteriorates
Strall – That’s unlike me to forget that oh well be right back

Narrator – Strall heads through the cavern to aid the humans.

Strall – Carlos get your men inside the cavern
President – It’s president Carlos
Strall – Not here its not anyone within the village right now may call you and your men whatever they wish
President – Very well Dean get the men inside
General Dean – Yes sir
President – Strall right?
Strall – Yes
President – Do you think we all will live through this?
Strall – Hah I have great faith in Spyro and his friends so yes I do
President – Good at least we have one thing less to worry about
Strall – You’re a fool Carlos just get in there

Narrator – So the humans have arrived at the behemoth’s village meanwhile Synth arrives at the lost desert.

Synth – Right now I hang around until the others make it to their locations
Undead Monk – Please help us
Synth – Hmm that’s strange
Undead Monk – The power of the light is failing us please help
Synth – Hmm who are you?
Undead Monk – I am a monk that protects the grand monument of the light
Synth – So you can see and hear me this is extremely unusual
Undead Monk – What is?
Synth – Well your monument was destroyed many years ago
Undead Monk – That’s impossible its right there

Narrator – The monk points to a circular building and inside a monument

Synth – What the hell?
Undead Monk – You look surprised and may I ask what creature you are?
Synth – I’m part of the behemoth tribe and yes I am surprised because I witnessed the destruction of this place many years back
Undead monk – You aren’t wrong what you are witnessing is a spiritual representation of our memories
Synth – Hmm?
Undead Monk – We wish to show you something that will happen to a village a few years into the future
Synth – Ok… this is far too confusing but why show me?
Undead Monk – Because the creature that destroys the village is one of your friends
Synth – WHAT?

Narrator – Synth is shown a future image that shocks him and soon after the image has finished the building and the monks disappear.

Synth – Ok now that’s not possible I must inform the others of this when I return and I wish the others would hurry up

Narrator – Synth’s medallion begins to emit a strange aura and then seven voices are heard

Synth – Finally ok everyone lets go

Narrator – Everyone has reached their locations and not long after they spot their targets.

Spyro – Right the dark elementals are about to go down

Narrator – The Dark Elements begin to emit strange darkness from their bodies, which rapidly thrusts toward Spyro, luckily Spyro moves out of the way, but is then struck down by the entite.

Dark Entite – Hah this will be easy
Spyro – You do talk…?
Dark Entite – Of course you fool

Narrator – The entite doesn’t allow Spyro to regain his footing and launches many powerful bolts of darkness sending him into nearby walls and the bolts continue to attack Spyro and one manages to pierce his skin.

Spyro – (screams in agony)
Dark Entite – So easy
Dark Element – My turn

Narrator – The Elemental begins to charge an unusual surge of power and quickly releases it upon Spyro, which actually does nothing.

Dark Element – Huh?
Dark Entite – Fool your meant to charge the attack much longer than that
Spyro – Are you quite finished?
Dark Entite – So you want more? I will be glad to give you more!
Spyro – Bring it

Narrator – The dark entite sends out pulses of extreme dark energy releasing a fog-like entity smothering Spyro and in turn slowly choking him but Spyro blasts the dark cloud with a white breath.

Dark Entite – What the hell is that?
Dark Element – I don’t know but he removed your attack
Dark Entite – Hmph lucky attack
Spyro – That’s nothing

Narrator – The cloud vanishes and Spyro emerges with a great white aura around him.

Dark Entite – You must be joking
Dark Element – The power of holy!
Dark Entite – So be it if you want a fight then I guess its time to release our energy
Dark Element – but the boss wants the planet intact
Dark Entite – Do you think he would allow us to fail?
Dark Element – I guess not
Dark Entite – Then begin the charging process
Dark Element – Right but where am I destroying first?
Dark Entite – The behemoth’s village
Spyro –What!
Dark Entite – Witness our true power

Narrator – Both dark elementals begin a joined charging process and within the elementals bodies a wave of pure dark energy begins to form.

Dark Entite – RELEASE IT NOW!

Narrator – Once the dark entite commands the attack a massive surge of darkness is sent into the air and then heads south towards the behemoth’s village. Before the attack gains it’s speed Spyro throws himself in the attacks way but the wave cuts straight through Spyro’s wing and carries on towards the village and Spyro screams in agony whilst falling back to the floor. Meanwhile Topaz is confronted by the water elementals at the Granada Sea.

Water Entite – Another that wishes to die
Topaz – So you fools actually can speak
Water Entite – Of course we can you incompetent fool
Topaz – Whom are you calling incompetent? I don’t know if you have realised but I command the power of the thunder element
Water Entite – And you think that scares me?
Water Element – It scares me I hate thunder
Water Entite – Get a grip you coward
Topaz – Even it doesn’t worry you let me demonstrate my power

Narrator – Topaz ascends into the air and a massive thunderous aura forms around him.

Water Entite – This isn’t going to affect us you fool
Topaz – Oh really? Then let me test that theory but with a little more kick

Narrator – Topaz carries on charging his attack.

Dark Entite – Haha he’s going to waste all his energy before we begin
Dark Element - ….. I’m out of here
Dark Entite – Blasted Coward
Topaz – EAT THIS!

Narrator – Topaz releases the thunderous blast at the Granada Sea and the water entite watches s the attack completely misses him and carries on to the water. As the attack hits the water the water element is completely destroyed and the water remains electrified.

Water Entite – Well it seems I underestimated your power as you still stand after your attack and managing to beat my assistant, as you would call him
Topaz – I could fire them off for hours you fool
Water Entite – Really? Then prove it
Topaz – Very well but its your death wish
Water Entite – My shield will block everything you throw at me

Narrator – Topaz ascends into the air once again and the thunderous aura begins to form. Topaz then releases after a few seconds of charging the attack directly at the water entite slicing it in a clean half.

Topaz – How’s that for you? Good?
Water Entite - … Good? No that bloody hurt
Topaz – You still live then I guess I have to fire another one
Water Entite – Hmph

Narrator – Yet again Topaz ascends into the air and charges the attack, which is very quickly released directly at one of the halves of the water entite obliterating it and with that destroying the water elements.

Topaz – That was bloody simple I was expecting a challenge against these, oh well I better let the others know that I have succeeded

Narrator – Topaz communicates with everyone to tell them that he has finished the water elements. Meanwhile Silvia is battling the Earth Elementals.

Earth Element – This one knows our weakness
Earth Entite – Yes I know but she must succeed in hitting us to even hurt us
Silvia – (panting) This isn’t all that easy I have to try harder if I am to succeed, wait Topaz has beaten the water elementals dammit that doesn’t give me much time
Earth Entite – Did I just here that right? The water elementals have been destroyed? If so then we must keep our fight going for longer that an hour so they can regenerate properly
Silvia – (to herself) Dammit they know our plan
Earth Element – Come on fight us properly
Silvia – Fine I will use my strongest attack, (to herself) I must time this right otherwise I’m screwed

Narrator – Silvia wraps herself in her own wings and then begins to float above the ground not by much but enough that she could time an attack good enough to hit the earth elementals.

Earth Entite – Be prepared to dodge this one
Earth Element – I’m ready when you are

Narrator – Silvia then unravels with a blast stunning the elementals and quickly after releasing several tornadoes dragging the elementals into the air but even though they are in the air Silvia follows them upwards and constantly fires blasts of strong earth attacks at the elementals shattering the rock-like bodies.

Silvia – (out of breath) Th..a..t Ta..kes c..a.re o..f t.hem (regains breath) I must let the others know

Narrator – Two sets of elementals have been beaten leaving six and the next fight is to be continued when you return.

End of part 4

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#5 May 02, 2008 12:21 AM

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Re: Here is the sequel (The Elemental Entities) Scrapped....

you are soooo good those are soooo cool man wow wow wow wow oh and how do you tybe soooo fast?

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#6 May 02, 2008 12:25 AM

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Re: Here is the sequel (The Elemental Entities) Scrapped....

he probably used Notepad, or word, plus Dark Cynder, can you please help me with my Fanfic? please?

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#7 Aug 17, 2008 9:57 PM

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Re: Here is the sequel (The Elemental Entities) Scrapped....

Delaled due to loss of ideas sorry guys

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#8 Aug 18, 2008 2:27 AM

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Re: Here is the sequel (The Elemental Entities) Scrapped....

Oh well... Still, you did a pretty good job on the story.  wink  wink  wink  wink  wink  wink  wink  wink

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#9 Apr 11, 2009 1:30 AM

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Re: Here is the sequel (The Elemental Entities) Scrapped....

Right sorry guys, completely lost this story due to not backing up stuff, not only that I've completed scrapped the ideas. So essentially I've given up on writing my Spyro fanfics for a while.

Sorry guys and thanks to those that took interest in reading what I written up to start with smile

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