You have a story?Write it!!!!!!!

dragon protector x · Jul 16, 2008 5:14 AM

It doesnt have to be a contest. It could be just a share and compare thread for stories...

Adam Thurman · Jul 16, 2008 1:06 PM

I have just one problem my story Dragon missioner book one; struggle for destiny is 11'000 words and is 18 pages already so i will publish it when i get finished and there are inappropriate parts dealing with my hard past but i will tell the basics of the story here soon. Come see my writers group thats on here hosted by Spyro rocks. It should give the basics of the story. I will rewrite the introduction to it so i can post it on here and then you guys can go get the book at the local book store you can read it for yourselves. It wont be until 2010 at the pace i am going now so hopefully no one is in a hurry to read it. You did say that there are no dead lines right?

Adam Thurman · Jul 16, 2008 1:09 PM

Ya listen to TheManiacOnWheels and tell your father that it is creativity. Look at the picture TheManiacOnWheels has. Tell your father to shut his yap. LOL

Rurikredwolf · Jul 16, 2008 4:17 PM

I have too many stories....idk what to chose....

TheManiacOnWheels · Jul 16, 2008 11:19 PM

I do too, so I just posted the first one that popped into my head big_smile .

devonm0 · Jul 17, 2008 2:42 AM

There is a story that I have on both fanfiction.net and this site's fanfiction group. I would love to hear what you people at this site think, so for those of who are not part of that group, here's the link to it on Fanfiction.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3755266/1/

Hope you all enjoy it!

Adam Thurman · Jul 17, 2008 10:18 AM

Here is creative 101 for you and hints to those who are good at what they do. When you have multiple story's it is best if you put together the plot of each story idea that you have one at a time so you don't get confused. When ever i read about how to design a story the most common thing seen is that people like to write multiple story's at once. Most experts believe it is best to write one at a time "to have at least one on the back burner" sort to speak. A plot is the main events set in order kind of like a map to make the ending easer to write. Once you got the basic plot written for all the story's that you have on mind and this includes the ending for if you have no ending it will make it harder to write the ending when you finally do decide the ending at least put down the basic idea you have for the ending.

When you finally choose a story to write meaning one and all the others on the back burner for those who are just learning this is the best way to write a story since it will make things easer. You will find it hard to stay on one story this is normal. The best way to sort out your ideas is to keep a journal or required of all your ideas. Then when time comes to bring out that idea or your looking for an event that might fit better look in this list of ideas that you created. These are just tips and basics and i don't have enough time and space to mention everything you need to know to get started if there is any specific questions you have don't be afraid to pm me. If you have seen any of my other posts you know i love to talk and type hints the reason why i don't use slang. However i admire those who do because i can see it makes it easer to chat on line but i have much to learn if i ever hope to be in the career that i want.

Gaz237 · Jul 17, 2008 4:58 PM

Started to write a beginning of a chapter, due to boredom.

The lightning struck again; but this time, the ever-un-describable sound had changed, into
what more something of a whisper, as the wind beckoned in it's path. The Purple One looked
to his understandable, reliant and loyal companion, as both etched forward in their
journey. The rain began to pour down, heavier and louder - almost as if lumps of clay
were being excluded from the clouds, getting half-way down and extracting into a cold dagger
of water the landed in every ounce of clear path.

" When we get there, Spyro, will we have fulfilled what is expected? " asked Sparx, curiously.
" That's not for us to declare, my friend. If we are out to achieve what is expected, it's
by the decision of our peers; the people who put this expectation infront of us. " replied Spyro.
" Yes: I guess your right, " Replied Sparx in agreement. " but, will you feel we have done
the good of the Dragon Master's and everyone else regarded in the Dragon Realm, when we do
complete this quest ... this adventure? "
" I do as I am asked. If that is to prove happiness of others - then I feel I have done my
job. " Comforted Spyro.

The two budding adventurers and close friends prodded on, each understanding and respecting
one another in each decision made, and idea thought up. Spyro and Sparx closed in on the dark,
hollow forest; which would lead them on to find out what comes before them in their ever-
unfolding journey.

Rurikredwolf · Jul 17, 2008 6:55 PM

I have a freaking hilarious one, but it also kinda bashes SxC at the end and it has mature REFERANCES. Not the actual things. But still, it was written for humor, but I am not sure if I should post it on ehre.

Nova147 · Jul 18, 2008 1:29 AM

Haider!Ok,im finally gonna write my story!

AN UNFORGOTTEN TRUTH

Fire blazed and smoke seemed to choke Zoa,as she flew weakly through debry and chaos.She flew past many warriors,some injured,yet still battling,as if it ment nothing.Zoa sudenly felt heavier,as she slowly seemed to dip lower and lower untill she collapsed on the ground.She struggled to get up,but it was like her body was dead.Then,without warning,A huge dark figure plunged,landing on top of her,holding her down.It laughed.

Zoa screached,but it held tight.She struggled again to move,but couldnt move herself enough to break free of its vice grip.She dropped her head and drowned out the noise,the smell and shut her eyes.In one breef moment,the figures breathing came crashing down,and it took hold of her neck.She struggled,gasping and weezing.As soon as she felt there was no hope left for her,she could feel it.Air.She openned her eyes.It was gone.She was laying back in the field beside her brother,Namic.He was an ice and water dragon,one whod shed always known like a brother.

Zoa started stretching her legs and wings.Then she realize the dream shed just had."It felt so real."she whispered to herself.She was sweating,heart beating so fast it felt like it would burst.In her mind,she thought of the dark figure,suffucating her.She wobled on to her feet and clumsilly pushed up into the air.

Just a dream.Yet so real.How was that possible?She glided past many other dragons most asleep,others just awakening too.As she reached a clearing,she dropped to the ground.Zoa walked up a small hill and stared.
Over it,she could see all of Oasis from the Vex river to the Ardil mountains.She was upon the same mountain of which she had been held upon.She knew it.Zoa searched the sky, as if suspecting to see the figure swoop down and clamp down again.

She sighed.As she turned,Zoa gazed back at the mountains,their twisted peakes glowing."Someday ill see whats over there."she said.She turned,flapped into the sky, and flew back to were her family and brother were just awakening.

end of chapter one.
Byz! big_smile :-P

Nova147 · Jul 18, 2008 1:46 AM

Haider!
These are what my main characters look like!

Byz!!!!:D:D:D:D

Nova147 · Jul 19, 2008 12:35 PM

Haider!Chapter two!

Zoa glided down to great willow tree her family slept under the previous night.As she landed,Namic ran up to her,smiling.

"Were'd you go?I woke up and you were gone.Mom was really upset that it had happened to you!"He informed her.Zoa looked at the ground."I,just went for a walk."She replied."What do you mean "it"?What did mom mean by that?".Namic looked confused."I dont know.But whatever it is,It sounds bad.".

"I do feel your ready to learn the truth then now."came a voice.Zoa turned."What the!!!"She cried.Infront of her was a giant dragon,with huge wings and a large crystal hanging from a robe.Namic stumbled backwards,frightened.

Their mother stepped out from behind it.Zoa sighed."Mom!"She yelled."What is that?".Then,three more huge dragons walked out each differently coloured."They,"she began"Are guardians of the elements.Icas,Voxano,Ironis and Elvora.They can tell you."

Byz!More coming soon! big_smile

Nova147 · Jul 19, 2008 12:49 PM

Haider!
Now,here are the guardians.
Their huge,but the pics will be small.
So picture them...But bigger!

Byz! big_smile

SavageNymph · Jul 21, 2008 10:24 PM

On an average day,Spyro the purple dragon that everybody loves was sleeping in his nest.As he sleeps,He had dreams and dreams that are messages from his imagination.A few days its been happening to him.He tells Cynder and Sparks that something is contacting him in his head.They thought it was just his imagination.

In his dream,He was in a parallel world.Like space and with weird creatures,"This looks like convexity",said Spyro to himself.A portal opens infrot of him.A beautiful dragon with an aurora like figure floats to him."Hello,Spyro.Welcome to the Twilight Dreams.I was the one contacting you.My name Yuphoria and im a dream dragon".Spyro was amazed as she stare at him with her spirit like eyes.She lands next to him and coils her tail around him.Spyro could not speak one word.

"Its ok to talk to me.Im not a dream reaper",Yuphoria said softly and spirit like."Whats a dream reaper?",asked Spyro.Yuphoria eyes haze down."They destroy dreams.Thats why I called you.Your Spyro the hero and I do believe you can save a world full of dreams",said Yuphoria."Tomorrow I will want you to help me destroy the nightmares and the dream reapers."She begins to fade.Spyro flys to her."Wait!are you a world that can pass through other peoples mind or my mind?!",asked Spyro.Yuphoria smiles."Yes but I find your mind special ".

Spyro jumps out of his sleep.His eyes was glowing and it stopped."Yuphoria..........are you real?or a figment of my imagination?!".Spyro walked out of his room and went down stairs with Sparks."Yawn....are you tired,Spyro?".Spyro did not answer but was still thinking about last night.The visions and the dream.As he walk down stairs,he starts to see things.Cynder taps him."Spyro what are you looking at?"He saw something running across the hall."Did you guys see that?!".He follows the morphing figure.It stops and looks at Spyro.It was all white with light pink eyes.The figure reaches out for him."Yuphoria!!?!!",Shouted Spyro.He reaches out for it.Cynder and Sparks came.The figure disappears.

"Spyro!What is going on with you!?!?!",yelled Cynders."You been acting weird like this for the past few days.Tell us the truth!".Spyro walked past Cynder and stopped."It was just my imagination".Cynder and Sparks didnt understand what was his imagination and what he saw.

Chapter two:Castaway snatchaway.
Spyro was outside playing tag with Cynder and Sparks."Your it,Spyro',Yelled Cynder.Spyro was tired and couldnt catch up with them.
He looks around and they wa hiding,"Come on guy!Not run and seek,I cant stand that game!".Spyro saw something shiny in a tree.He thought it was Sparks glowing.He flew in the tree and move the braches out of the way.Cynder was hiding behind a rock.He see Spyro in the tree.He hears him scream and then gets hit out the tree.Cynder jumps from the rock and Sparks came out the long.They couldnt see what Spyro saw.It was Dream Reaper andit was trying to take Spyro.It was tall and wears a black cloak(Like the dimentors from harrypotter).It had huge white eyes glowing beneath the darkness glowing through its pitch black face.

Spyro feared it and he dont know why he feals that fears.The Reaper lundge out its claws and Spyros eyes turn bright.The Dream Reaper could not bear the the sight of good and light.Yuphoria was trying to protect him with all the magic she had.Spyro had no chose but to speak to gaurdians.He went in the temple of where the gaurdians stand."What is wrong,Spyro?",asked Ignitus.

"This girl appeared in my dream and she contact me.She told me about these creatures called Dream Reapers and I was attacked today.It was all black and had Peircing White eye under its torn hood".The gaurdians look at eachother.Cyril spotted long claw marks deep in Spyro's skin."Spyro!!Where did you got that?!!"The gaurdians look and Spyro and gasp.Spyro saw the claw marks on him too."Demons.......",Said Ignitus."What being has touched you?".

Spyro knew he had know proof because he was the ony one that can see it.He think the gaurdians would believe him especially Ignitus.Cynder came."Cynder,what happend to Spyro?!!"Cynder did not know,but hid her head in her wings.Ignitus gave serious eyes at her."I did not see anything.I knew he was attacked but it must been invisible.He been seeing things lately",said Cynder in fear.The gaurdians held their heads high in beliefe.They did not know what to do.They knew it was darkness,but they cant contact in dreams to get the darkness.Spyro remembered what Yuphoria said."The girl said that to stop them I have to help her destroy nightmares".The gaurdians now found out the source of this dark being."Spyro,if its in your dreams,why did this DreamsReaper attacked you in real life?",ask Volteer.Spyro did not know.Maybe he can ask Yuphoria in his dreams."Tonight she will call me for battle.I have to do this or the reapers will prey on you!"

Chapter 3:DreamScape

On that night,Spyro returns the world called Twilight Dreams.Yuphoria appears."Spyro,this is the night that we journey to the lair of the DreamReapers.I wont wake you up.When I enter in your head,I can wake you up when I want to"."Why did the DreamReapers attacked me in real life?!",asked Spyro with a panic face.Yuphoria looks another direction."Because your are their target.They know your the one who can save this world.If this dreamtropolis fall,you will die in their nightmares or anyone who have nightmares".

At the DreamReaper fortress,they began to do their sinister plan.The city was all black with abandoned clock towers.Xorpheair,the ruler send his minions to stop Spyro and Yuphoria."You must eliminate the purple one and that dream dragon.Her goal is to bring dreams back and free her people"."Dont worrie boss.We will take that purple lizard out of its misery.After all he's just dragon with a fire ability",said Vivian.Vivian is a DreamReaper that holds the Shintwylin Scythe.Her sythe had skull gems and a chain at the end.Her skin was pale and her eyes was all white with black devil horns sticking out.She gos through a portal that leads to Spyro and Yuphoria.

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SavageNymph · Jul 21, 2008 10:24 PM

While Yuphoria and Spyro was flying,A black portal stands infront of them.A flail shoots out and his Spyro.Vivian comes out with a sinster smirk on her face."Man,you didnt see that one coming.What a slow dragon.I knew dragons was so weak".She laughs evily and looks at Yuphoria as she swings her Shintwylin Scythe as her.Yuphoria uses a pyshic porce field on her self.Spyro shot a electric orb at Vivian.Vivian holds it."What the-"It explodes at her and she slams into a floating slab."This is not no ordinary dragon if its learning thunder",thought Vivian.She saw another electric orb hurling towards her.She dodges it and throws her flail at Spyro and he shoots it with a Polar bomb.Her flail breaks in two.Vivian gulps hard.She shoots a dark beam at Spyro and he got hit."Not so strong now?!Haha!"Yuphoria hits Vivian with her Disoba beam and it shatters her sythe."Leave Spyro alone,demon".Yuphoria uses her Psychic fury and it was bright.Yuphoria's eyes glow white as Spyro watches her dance.Vivian covers herself from the light but it blinds her and turns her into dust.The flash go's away and Spyro looks around.Everywhere was empty."Whoah! That was cool,Yuphoria!".Yuphoria giggles and blush.

They began to travel to a freezing zone in the dream area.Spyros wings was frozen and legs was stiff as a rock.Yuphoria was like spirit and did not feel shiver."Yuphoria,where are we?!It freezing here!can we take a short cut?!",said Spyro.Yuphoria kept floating along."This is the Frozen Savannahs and next we will go to the dream Somborai Wood.This is the quickest way to the fortress.Enemies can be in this area too".As they was walking, the saw tent.Spyro rush inside."Yuphoria,lets stop inside here and rest".Yuphorai agrees and went inside.Her lond tail coils around Spyro as she lays down with him".

Fifeteen Minutes later,They left the tent and began their long journey.It was snowing hard and was getting cold.Yuphoria stopped floating and sat on the ground."Something is approaching and its not friendly".Spyro did not see anything in the snow and just hear the wind whistles past.The ground cracks open.A tail whirled up the icy broken water.Spyro lands on a drifting block of ice and Yuphoria flys in the air.A ice dragons head slowly comes out the icy water.Yuphoria shoots a Disoba beam through its stomach.The dragon blows ice at Yuphoria and frozed her in a block of ice.She falls in the water.The FrozenDragon looks at Spyro with its ice covered eyes and charge his frozen horns through the water.
He flys up and rams in his chest.The dragon sheds his diamond covered wings and water throws and Spyro.Waves was created and Spyro flys upward.The dragon was to big to shoot fire at it.He had no choice but to use Fire fury on the beast.The dragon swallows Spyro and his whole body was made of ice.His glass teeth closed shut and Spyro was swallowed down in the stomach.He fell down in the frozen water.Spyro use Fire fury to escape.An explosion of flames Ignites and the dragon obliterates into crystals.Spyro saw Yuphoria's frozen body sinking in the water.He trys to bring her to the surface but his weight was not enough to pull her up.They drown in darkness.

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SavageNymph · Jul 21, 2008 10:27 PM

Chapter 5:Spirit Wood

Spyro and Yuphoria made it to Somborai Wood.The people that save them was a special species of forest dragon.Spyro opens his eyes and saw the forest dragons looking at him.Spyro jumps up and thought they was enemies."We come in peace,purple one.We bring you to the Wood.Its our only home from the Hooded Demons,but our home wont last long",said Kreto.Kreto was the elders son of their village.His scales was emerald and his eyes glow with envy.He had a tooth sticking out of his mouth and had tiny wings to glide through the wood,but cant fly.He reach out his long arm with long claws to Spyro.He pulls him up on fours."Where's Yuphoria?!".Kreto talk to the the other forest dragons."She in deep wood of our home.Come with us to Joheh village".Him and hos people stand up on their long legs and walk stiff.Spyro follows them.As they enter their village.He spotted Yuphoria."Yuphoria!!!".She floats to him.She hugs Spyro and was glad that he was safe.Kreto came with the elder."This is the suviver,father.They reach great distance from the outer wood".The elder looks at Spyro with his green snake eyes."He is not one of them.You are welcome here,but we dont want others exploring in out sacred wood.The number of the hooded demons had been more active than before.We fear and hide in this forest.We will never leave.The dream realm change and this forest will stay".Spyro knew what they were talking about and the DreamReapers are destroying there home."We will stop them.Dont worry!".The villagers held their head high in happiness.The elder shakes his head and smiles."Make your journey safe,young traveler.Wait.......I sense one coming.I will speak with the wood".Leaves shimmer and swirl around the elder and the light shines on him."We must hide".They all hide in the tree's.

A black portal opens up and Zeferi comes out.His sythe had blades around it like a fan and They spin.Spyro and Yuphoria was blown away.Wind was so sharp that it slice the trees.Spyro lands and his wing ripped.He looks at it at the corner of his eye."Thats it,buddy.Your going down!!".Yuphoria stands infront of him and shoots a Disoba beam.Zeferi was hit.Spyro hits him with electric spin.Zeferi slams in a tree."I dont want fight!!!I was forced!!"Spyro and Yuphoria stopped attacking."How can we trust you?!",said Spyro.Zeferi gets off the ground."My dad is the leader of the DreamReapers.He is powerful,but want you to help me stop him.I will take you to him".Spyo and Yuphoria looks at him.They trust him and shoke their heads.Zeferi puts away his sythe and opens a portal the leads to DreamReapers Fortress

Chapter 6:Nightmare's fall

Zeferi,Spyro and Yuphoria cmae to the fortress.It was dark and creatures fly in the air."This is our last show down.I will tell the guards that you are prisoners and that our chance of sneaking in".Zeferi went to the door and the guards blocked it."These are prisoners from the Twilight Dreams.I will taking to my father".The guards let him through and they walked up the dark steps..Spyro looks at pictures of old Dreams that weald the grand sythes.

Lepher(Twin sythe)

Scarmor(Hammer chain scythe)

Dreven(Dark staff scythe)

Rheku(Silver Lance sythe)

Vivian(Shentylin scythe)

Zeferi(Whirli-gig spear scythe)

Xorpheair(Black sniper sythe)
"Who are these people?",asked Spyro."Everyone has a picture ecept you.You hold a weald a sythe too"."I didnt die yet.The others are the ones who died in battle and tried to rule with darkness".They finished walking up the stairs and made it to Xorpheairs lair.He was in his thrown."You bring more prisoners,son.At last the purple dragon is captured.We will flood the land with darkness and everyone in the Dream and real world will have nightmares forever".Zeferi hits Xorpheair with a wind gust and it scratches his armor."No.This wrong.Whats the reason of taking ver the world.Nothing special is going to happen.Dreams will live and new imagination will change the dream world.After you take over,what are you going to plan next if no ones going to stop you.This is not just a nation.....its a ImaginNation".He points his sythe at him.Xorpheair laughs evily and loud.He shoots a beam at him with his Black Sniper sythe.'You think that you can defeat you own father?!"He shoots another beam and it reflects on every wall.It was going to hit Zeferi,but Yuphoria blocks it with her psychic shield.Spyro rams Xorpheair into a wall.Xorpheiair shoots Spyro and he slams into a statue.Yuphoria runs to him and protects him."No!"Xorpheair was going to shoot them,but Zeferi hits another gust of wind on him.It sliced some of his armor off.Hooded DreamReapers that look like dimentors had bust through the windows of the lair.They attacked Zeferi and was going to attack Spyro.They attacked Yuphoria and ganged up on her.The DreamReapers slammed Spyro on a wall to hold him down.Spyro could not do his magic because Xorphoria would shoot him."Spyro!use your imagination!!!",yelled Yuphoria as she was getting attacked.Spyro trys to think of something.His eyes glow white and his skin turns like Yuphoria's.He waslike a aurora spirit.He unleashed the Dream Fury.Shock waves of light had obliterated the DreamReapers and Xorpheair.In the real world,The DreamReapers bust through the door.The was all over the castle.Cynder screams as they was going to kill them.The Reapers turn to dust and Spyro wakes up fast.Everyone looks at him."Spyro!You did it!!!",screamed Cynder as she hugs him.The guardians smiled and laughed.Sparks came out from the bed."You did it buddy!!!My butt is saved!!".

A few days later,Spyro was outside.He was dreaming about Yuphoria all day.He wonder what happend to the dream world.One thing he knows is that the nightmare's had fade.Cynder came to him and coil her tail around him.He turns around at her.She had spirit like eyes as Yuphoria.She kisses him and flys away.Spyro did not see that coming.Yuphoria was in Cynders head.'Was that Cynder or Yuphoria?!?!?!"
Spyro's face turn red from purple.The dream and real world was at peace.

Spyro walked back inside and slept for the rest of the day.In space,a Ice meteor crashes into the sun and the sun turns frozen.The earth lost its light and clouds cover the world.It was the eternal frost in the dragons realm.Ice Rapage across the lands and freeze everything in its path.Spyro's friends was frozen in the suns ice beam.The guardians was caught too.Will Yuphoria and Spyro stop the frost world from being eternal?The fate begains again...........

Next series:Journey to the FrozenSun

DarkMaster · Jul 22, 2008 7:27 AM

Here is mine its about four dragon eggs that could be combined to make one and when you hatch the mysterious black dragon egg you gain the greatest abilities man has ever known and doesn't know and will have a loyal and powerful dragon who will do what you command, here it is

The Dragon Master

Chapter 1
The Beginning

Long ago there was a told legend called â€œThe Legend of the Dragon Masterâ€ and its said that who ever finds the four mystical black dragon eggs and combines them will have the greatest abilities in the world and will have the most valuable question in there life, will they use the fours eggs great powers for good or evil, but who will find the four eggs first? the good or the evil, and this legend, lives to this very day.

A Carefully hand crafted black dragon dagger lay on a small side table with a small light and also a tall and muscular figure standing right next to it. The dark figure picked up the dragon dagger and threw it and it zoomed across the room faster than the human eye can see and it snagged the shoulder of a legend researcher on the other side of the room. The legend researcher flew with the dagger across the room and smashed into the wall, he said â€œWho are you?! and what do you want with meâ€

â€œTell me where the four dragon eggs areâ€ Said the dark figure

The legend researcher gasps and saysâ€œThe four dragon eggs of The Legend of The Dragon Master?â€

â€œYes you ignorant fool!â€ shouted the dark figure

The cowardly legend researcher said â€œFirst i must know your name, i need to know what kind of person would want the four eggs and if you will use them for good or evilâ€

The dark figure slowly walks towards the terrified legend researcher, the light shines in his face and shows his face, he says

â€œMy name is Dyrax and i need the eggs to stop the evil Dyaro from taking over world with his powerful dragons, so i am using the four dragon eggs for goodâ€ Dyrax said with a straight face

â€œOk i will tell you where i think the eggs are, I don't know exactly were the eggs are but i am 90% shore that they are hidden all around the globe and they are all hidden deep underground in the most dangerous cave in the world the first dragon eggs is hidden in a huge dungeon in the middle of the Zyratharian Jungleâ€ said the legend researcher

â€œThank youâ€ said Dyrax as he disappears into the darkness
Outside the window the innocent legend researcher saw a dragon flying toward the moon and murmured to himself â€œI hope Dyrax never comes backâ€ and at the same time Dyrax is murmuring to himself â€œI'll be seeing him againâ€ as he flew into the moon light.

DarkMaster · Jul 22, 2008 8:50 AM

here is chapter 2 and i'm working on chapter 3

Chapter 2
The First Egg

As Dyrax flies bak to his secret lair he gets his reviver, armor and his dragon dagger which is all the stuff he needs to find the egg and jumps on his dragon and says out loud â€œTo the Zyratharian Jungle!â€ and the dragon flies of to the Zyratharian Jungle.

As Dyrax lands in the middle of the jungle he searches threw the jungle and finally finds a massive whole in the ground and thinks to himself â€œThis must be itâ€. Dyrax jumps into the massive whole and falls for 20 meters and finally reached the bottom, he finds skeletons all over the place and moving traps with flame throwers shooting flames at anything that passes. Dyrax says to himself â€œI can do thisâ€ and leaps over the spikes and dodges the scorching hot flames and throws one of his dragon daggers at the spike shooters and finally does the biggest jump of his life over the never ending pit of death. He runs forward extremely fast to find a puzzle, he solves the puzzle in a phew seconds and passes the door and finds the egg on the other side of the room, but with moving platforms in front of it, he jumps to the first platform and wait for the next to move and then leaps to the second and then the third and then does a forward flip to the forth and finally does an amazing backflip to the egg and picks up the egg and then sprints back threw all the traps and calls his dragon and the dragon puts it's giant paw down the whole and picks up Dyrax, he then flies back to his lair.

When he gets back to his lair he puts the first black egg into the case that combines the eggs to make one and thinks to himself â€œTime for the next one, i better visit the legend researcher again.â€ as he walks away.

please give me your opinion on chapter 1 and this

Misa · Jul 23, 2008 11:25 AM

Prologue

~*6 years ago*~

It was midnight, a young girl looked on as she sat on the sand near to the shore Something is going to happen she thought to herself, gripping on her leather bag Oh come on! There has to be something she thought to herself again, this time being fidgety. But all there was, were the waves crushing down, the wind blowing in her ear and the sweet smell of baked pie, sitting there on the on the window edge, the girl breathed in the sweet smell Lets face it, nothing interesting is going to happen, might as well steal that pie. She stood up, brushing the sand off her bum But one day, itâ€™s going to happen.

At the exact time in the Natureza world, a bossy, uptight girl waited impatiently for her parents to return from there long trip to the Dark kingdom â€œHow long does it take?â€ she command to one of the guards, he made the wrong choice to shrugged his shoulders and to give her a hopeless look â€œWhat do you mean you donâ€™t know?!â€ she shouted to the guard, he gulped and stumbled with his sentence â€œSorry Princess, I um donâ€™t knowâ€, the girl shrieked angrily at him â€œGet out of my sight thenâ€, two guards leveled their swords to his neck, the princess shook her head â€œI said leave not kill, I donâ€™t killâ€ the guards lower their weapons, the shaken guard bowed unsteadily to her and hurried out of the room. â€œPapa, Mama, please be wellâ€ she whispered to herself, so quiet no one heard her.

Across the Natureza world also on the exact time another event happen, but this one was full of sadness and pain â€œRUN, PRINCESSâ€ screamed one of the royal servants. The small girl breathe heavily, tears steaming down her face â€œWhere is mother!â€ she shouted to the servants, he looked her full with sadness â€œNoâ€ she whispered, she collapsed to the floor, a large muscular man pulled her back â€œHoney we must leaveâ€ he carried her â€œWhat about mother?â€ she whispered softly, so only he could hear â€œShe diedâ€ he said firmly, yet his voice was full with miserly, the girl closed her eyes and cried on his shoulder as he carried her to safely.

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Nova147 · Jul 30, 2008 12:47 PM

Haider!Chapter three!

Zoa stared up at the mighty dragons,amazed."Tell me what,exactly?"she said.Sudenly,the one in the front,Elvora,lowered her head to speak."There are many things you must learn if you are to forfill you destiny.".Zoa and Namic returned looks of confusion."What destiny?"Zoa asked.

Icas,the ice warrior stepped out beside Elvora."There are powers you have things you must learn and many past and future stories you must learn about.Young dragon you have been safe these past 12 years since you were born,but now you must trust us.You are the one who can save or destroy Oasis.".Zoa gasped.Namic trotted up beside her."What do you mean?She cant do anything like that!"he cried.Zoa Ignored the comment,for she was thinking of something different.

"Is that why im differently coloured?Why I have dreams that aren't understandable wether there good or bad ones?And is that why i can do some strange things?"she asked calmly looking out at the moutains were the sun had almost reached the peek.Elvora nodded.Then Voxano and Ironis came up aswell."We must prepare you for the battle that will come and you must learn about all that now revolves around you."Voxano informed her.

Then,Ironis spoke."We understand you were not expecting this,and that you can not believe it,but you must.And you must come with us,back to the temple to learn what you must,and unlock the powers that lay dorment within you.".Zoa Looked overwhelmed by all this.As she thought,Namic put his wing around her."Zoa,are you?If you can save our world then,thats great but,what do you think?".

Zoa sighed."Okay.Ill go."Namic removed his wing from her back.He nodded."Well then,come.Me must go now."Elvora said.The guardians flapped into the air,creating huge gusts of wind.Zoa waved at Namic and flew away beside Elvora.Toward the moutains.

Chapter four coming soon!Byz! big_smile

SavageNymph · Aug 01, 2008 6:12 PM

[glow=black:4764eee141]Bone Wings[/glow:4764eee141]

Chapter 1:The Reaper comes along

In a city called Nortropolis,A young dragon was walking in to her room.Her parents was angry at her because she didnt do anything right and had bad grades.The dragon name was Zyphori.She was a white and black dragon with silver eyes.She had bad grades because she couldnt consentrate at school.Zyphori wish she was in another place away from her parents.Her parents hate her because of the way she acts.On a star,she made a wish that an angel will take her from this pit of fire.Her answer will be called.Zyphori close her door so she wont hear her parents arguing about the grades.She wrote in her skull diary about how the angel would look and the place the angel will take her away.

In another world called The Realm of Dead Dragon Souls,A ReaperDragon name Dreviant was resting in a pile of dragon bones.He swings his Scythe at the edge of his tail.He was all black,red and silver with armor made out of dragon bones.Another ReaperDragon walks up to him.His name was Myoto and his body was made of bones and he and bat like wings and badages covering his eyes."Hey!Dreviant!You have a job to do!Rumors said you have the lowest score of reaping souls.You better hurry!You getting a bad name".Dreviant gets up and yawns."What of it?",yawn Dreviant.

"Your being a waste of a reaper they say.Your the one with the lowest reapings!",said Myoto."What?!Are you serious?!!",asked Dreviant."Yep!You better find a person with a useless soul of living!",Replied Myoto.Myoto spreads his balck bat wings and flys away.Dreviant walks to a well with no water inside.It was a portal leading to the live world.Dragon souls flew out and bats.Dreviant jumps inside.

In Zyphori's home.Zyphori was on the bed drawing pictures.She had picture of the angel on her walls.Zyphori heard foot steps upstairs and the door opens.Zyphori thought it was the angel but it was her parents.They told her to stop being bad."Look at your grades!!You should be ashamed of yourself!!!",yelled the mother."Thats it!!!No more games,comics or htose dumb drawing you do!!!Your so stupid and you will never pass if you dont do your work!!!",screamed the father as he pulls her picture away from her.Zyphori began to cry.She wish her parents were dead and gone forever.Zyphori's room became all black and wind gust through.Her parents dropped on the floor like they died.Zyphori stopped crying and rubbed her eyes.She tried to wake them up but they didnt move one bit.Their scales were pale as they was dead.The room grows darker.She hears foot steps coming to her room.They door slowly opens and Zyphori stands back scared.Dreviant walks inside and see's her on the floor.Zyphori stops being scared and walks up to him."Are you an angel?"."No.....Im a reaper",said Dreviant.Zyphori just stares at him.".........cool!O_O".

Aura24 · Aug 01, 2008 6:48 PM

I have a story, but it's completed. But I'll participate, beginning with Chapter 1. I know some of you are familiar with the story, but the ones who don't...here's the link to it: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3855467/1/T … ten_Realms

The Forgotten Realms

Chapter 1: The Warning

It was late afternoon in the other side of the Dragon Worlds. Near a mushroom-infested jungle stood a brown, grand temple. Each of its wooden doors had the face of a dragon with eyes glowing like embers and the temple itself was large enough to house hundreds of dragons. Outside of its grounds were dragons, young and old, frolicking happily in ledges and trees. Some were Artisan dragons, others were Peace Keepers, Magic Crafters, Beast Makers, and Dream Weavers, all made for different realms that were on the side of the world. Their Elders watched them carefully, keeping an eye on the young dragons as they spent their day playing in the gardens.

Near the mouth of the forest, a certain, purple dragon emerged from the shade of the trees, looking around cautiously as he slowly walked around. He glanced at the sky before looking back to someone hidden in the bushes. "I think it's safe enough now, Ami." Spyro said, turning around and facing the Dragon Temple.

A young, female voice replied from behind Spyro, "Still...something feels strange about the temple this evening..."

Spyro asked, turning back, "What is it?"

"Well, I don't know.." The voice replied, as a small blue dragon, slightly smaller than Spyro, emerged from the bushes. Her wings were purple and her horns were snow white and two, purple barrettes was wrapped around each of her horns. The little, blue Artisan called Ami continued her worries, "Something very quick. Like lightning. It looks safe enough now, I think."

"Come on, I'll race you back to the temple." Spyro smiled, as he raced off toward the temple grounds. Ami smirked and ran after her big brother through the grounds while she scurrying through a few young dragons that were playing in the gardens.

Spyro stopped to catch his breath and looked back, seeing Ami nowhere to be seen. He then saw a young, Dream Weaver dragon running by him. Her scales were silver and was a little smaller and slightly obese than Ami and her scaly underside was gold. A pink barrette was placed in between her white horns. The silver dragon stopped and turned back to Spyro, "Hi, Mister Spyro!" She greeted happily.

Spyro greeted back with a smile, "Hi, Ruby."

With a quick bound, Ruby ran back to a group of other dragons resting in the grass. Before Spyro can walk forward, Ami accidentally tackled the purple dragon forward, sending the both of them tumbling down a small hill. There was a short thud when the dragons reached the bottom and Spyro shook his head to shake away the dizziness.

Ami was sprawled beside Spyro, and when she saw the purple dragon in his dizzy state, she giggled. The little, blue dragon was about to apologize, when a cold chill ran through the blue Artisan's body and made her stop. She slowly looked to the sky and widened his eyes. "Spyro? Oh, Spyro...I know now...A terrible thing is coming..." She shuddered, her eyes glazed.

"What do you mean?" Spyro asked, turning to Ami.

Ami turned to the sky, quaking, and as she looked at the sun, images of dark threads stretched across the sky appeared in her vision, blocking the sun in eternal darkness. "The sky...it's covered in darkness..." She muttered.

"Darkness?" Spyro repeated with a slight chuckle, "Don't be silly."

As Ami continued to watch the images, she started shaking while the visions ran through the little dragon's mind.

Darkness suddenly fell upon the Dragon Temple, coating the land in blackness. A horde of bat-like monsters fell through the skies, dropping bombs in the temple grounds as they released swarms of creatures from the blasts of fire. The evil creatures appeared all around the temple, then started storming into the walls as they began killing the Elders and the young dragons by sight. Instantly, the temple, the dragons, and everything around them was destroyed in a split second by a enormous blast of purple energy created by the creatures before the images swirled away and vanished from Ami's vision...

Ami started shaking after seeing the terrifying images, she once again saw the normal sky and environment around her again and her eyes were still wide with shock and dread. Spyro looked at his little sister and blinked, unaware of the visions she had seen.

"Ami? Are you okay?" Spyro asked, then he looked to the horizon and saw the sun sinking into the trees, "It's getting late, we should go back to the temple."

Ami instantly snapped back to reality and turned to Spyro, repeating with a frantic edge in her tone, "Back to the temple? No, no, they'll come there. Don't think they won't! We have to get everyone out of here!"

"Now stop it, Ami." Spyro said sternly.

Ami stammered, running around Spyro a bit, "We...We have to get away from here. All of us."

"Away? Don't be silly." Spyro responded, shaking his head, "They won't come. They think you're out of your mind."

"You must listen to me, Spyro." Ami urged, looking around nervously, "Something very bad is going to happen!"

Spyro replied, sighing, "All right. We might as well see Elder Lindar, but I don't think he'll like the idea." The purple dragon then turned and hurried to the temple as fast as he could with Ami close behind, as he ran past several dragons that were enjoying themselves in the evening. As Spyro ran, he spotted a small group of dragons resting on a hill not too far from the Dragon Temple. There were five dragons, including Ruby.

The first was a green, slender dragon, slightly taller than Spyro when standing on his four legs. His eyes were brown and his horns were light brown along with his scaly underbelly and his wings. By his appearance, he is a Magic Crafter dragon. His name was Coltrane.

The second was a dark blue dragon laying on his back next to Ruby, resting in the sunlight to expose his light blue underbelly to the warm rays. He was a little smaller than Coltrane, though was more slender than the other dragons. He is an Artisan dragon named Bruce.

The third was a brown dragon, a Peace Keeper dragon and was a little more obese than Ruby. His horns were darker than his light brown scales and his eyes were dark green. His name was Grayson.

The last one was a small, lime-green dragon, the second youngest of the group and also a Magic Crafter dragon. She wore a pink barrette on her head and her purple scales ran down from the back of her neck to the tip of her tail. Her eyes were light-blue while they twinkled with innocence in the sunlight. Her name was Rikki.

Spyro ran past the young group of dragons who happen to be his best friends, and as he glanced at them, he went on to the temple. Ami skidded to a halt and said urgently to the five dragons, "We have to get away from here, all of us."

"Get away?" Bruce repeated, glancing at Ami from over his shoulder.

Ami replied frantically, "Yes, before it's too late!" With a quickly leap, the little, blue dragon resumed running to the temple in a fast pace, following Spyro. Coltrane, Bruce, Ruby, Rikki, and Grayson all stood up from their resting positions and gathered, confused at Ami's strange behavior.

Coltrane asked, "Is something wrong?"

Bruce responded, "This has never happened before."

"Is it danger?" Grayson questioned.

"Come on, let's see what's happening." Bruce suggested, as he, Coltrane, Grayson, Rikki, and Ruby followed Spyro and Ami into the temple. The purple dragon and his little sister scurried through the Dragon Temple at full speed, not stopping to greet the other Elders while they ran by.

Flame, a young, red dragon, was standing guard in front of the door leading to the chamber where the lead Elder, Lindar, was resting in. The red dragon turned his head and caught sight of Spyro and Ami running toward him until the two dragons stopped in front of Flame.

"Spyro?" Flame began, looking at the purple dragon then saw Ami, "What are you guys doing here?"

Spyro replied in a serious tone, "We need to speak to Lindar, Flame." Shortly after he spoke, Grayson, Rikki, Ruby Coltrane, and Bruce stopped at the corner of the hall, looking at Spyro, Ami, and Flame from a distance.

"Really?" Flame questioned, "What's it about?"

Spyro replied, "Well, it's-"

"Flame!" a voice called out, as Spyro and Flame turned to see Elder Cosmos, lead Elder of the Magic Crafter dragons, standing near the window to water the flowers that were recently placed in the sunlight, casting a water spell on their stems as he glanced at Flame, "What do they need?"

"They want to see Elder Lindar." Flame simply replied.

Cosmos questioned, trilling the R in his word in his Magic Crafter dialect, "What for?" Ami opened her mouth to reply about the danger only to be cut off by Cosmos' rude response, calmly ordering Flame, "Send them along. Lindar is resting now." The Magic Crafter leader resumed watering the plants with his magic.

"I'll take care of it, Cosmos." Flame replied, turning back to Spyro to tell him to go back.

However, Spyro stepped forward and said firmly to his friend, "Flame, when did I ever ask to see the Elder before?"

Flame glanced back at Cosmos, then to Spyro and sighed, "Alright, fine. Wait here then." The red dragon entered the large chamber and closed the door behind him to see Lindar. Behind the door, Spyro could hear Flame asking the Elder if the purple dragon and Ami can see him. There was a brief silence before Flame opened the door and said, "Come on, then."

Spyro nodded. He and Ami went inside the chamber and Flame closed the door behind them as he walked in too. Rikki, Ruby, Grayson, Bruce and Coltrane went over to the door and listened carefully to the conversation that is about to occur inside the chamber.

A large, blue dragon laid in the center of the chamber, sitting down on all four legs to rest his muscles. He was old, but still had the strength to walk normally and use his wings for flight. Elder Lindar looked to Spyro and Ami as they approached him and bowed for a moment "Spyro. Ami. What brings you here today?" The Artisan Elder asked with a smile.

Spyro replied, glancing at Ami, "Well, my sister says that a bad threat is coming to the Dragon Temple."

"A bad threat...? Now what sort of threat is coming?" Lindar questioned, patiently.

Ami replied, "I don't know, but it's bad. It's so bad."

"Well now." Lindar answered, arching an eyebrow before he scratched the back of his neck, "What ought we to do?"

"We have to escape, all of us, right away." Ami responded, her voice sounding more urgent.

Lindar perked up and repeated with suprise, "Right away? In June? The summer time? And where will we go to?"

"Well, she had these feelings before and she's been right again and again-" Spyro began, but was interrupted.

"I shall have to consider this very carefully." Lindar said, shaking his head before looking back to Spyro and Ami, "Perhaps we should discuss this later in the end of the summer." However, Ami started shaking her head, refusing to wait for news to come from the other realms, her eyes started widening.

"No...No...We can't wait. We can't!!" The little Artisan shouted, as she turned around and ran past Flame to open the door.

Lindar spoke out calmly to Spyro, before settling back down to rest, "Well, it was good seeing you, Spyro."

Spyro nodded respectively to Lindar before he turned and raced after Ami into the halls of the temple. Flame watched the door close as Spyro left the chamber, he thought about what the purple dragon said and wondered if he was crazy or speaking the truth. After thinking about it, the red dragon exited out of Lindar's chamber...

Nova147 · Aug 09, 2008 6:38 PM

Haider.

Ok um,I kind of forgot my story line past chapter 4 so,Im not continuing util i remember,or come up with a new story.

Byz. :-P

Cynder12345 · Sep 04, 2008 10:56 PM

KAY HERES MY STORY

ONCE UPON A TIME THEREWAS A BOY NAMED KOVU. AS HE WAS COMING HOME FROM SCHOOL HE FOUND A CAT BADLY HURT. HE BROUHT THE CAT HOME WITH HIM. HE GAVE IT FOOD AND WATER. HE NAMED THE CAT KIRARA. ONE NIGHT KIRARA FELL ILL. KOVU WAS GETING READY FOR BED THAT NIGHT. HE SAW A GHOSTLY FIGURE APPER ON HIS BED. HE REALISED THAT IT WAS KIRARA. HE CHECKED ON KIRARA AND CHECKED HER PULSE. HE REALISED THAT SHE IDN'T HAVE A PULSE AND THAT SH WAS GONE. HE BURIED HER OUTSIDE IN THE BACKYARD. HE FOUND A STONE AND WROTE, "HERE LIES KIRARA R.I.P.". SHE STILL VISTS HIM OFTEN. BUT DON'T WORRY, SHE SAID IM STIL WITH YOU ALWAYS. IN YOUR HEART.

Spyro_fan55 · Sep 05, 2008 12:21 AM

I have a story that I'm writing at the moment. I hope it gets turned into a novel once I'm done. big_smile I can't completely tell you about the story cuz it might ruin it. ^^ But here is one of those short summaries that are on the back of books.

14 year old Juniper Louis has lived with her granmother ever since her parents went missing. 3 months ago. Her grandma, Anna Loius, always told her about The Dragon's Legend when she was younger. But soon, things begin to unravel about her family's past, along with her own. June and her friend, Ryan, are determined to figure out these mysterious happenings and discover the truth about The Dragon's Legend.

Well, there is a little short summary thing I just now made up. ^^ Hope it sounds good. Well, I have my story, The Dragon's Legend, up. I'm working on Chapter 4 at the moment, so you'll have to wait. Please read and comment. Be honost so that way I know if I need to make some changes.

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