You have a story?Write it!!!!!!!

Nova147 · Jul 13, 2008 7:04 PM

Hey evryone!If you have an awsome Spyro or dragon story, write it up, and I,ll judge to see who has the best!Just something fun I thought up.But dont worry.To make it fair,Iwount write mine up for the contest.Mabye just for fun.It dosn't even have to be about dragons!Any creature you want!

Theres no deadline.I'll judge every month or so.

EXPRESS YOURSELF!!!! smile smile big_smile

dragon protector x · Jul 13, 2008 8:21 PM

I have a story, but its not even finished...hopeing to get it into a novel...tho dragons havent even entered the book yet...i could put my prolog up her and you can judge that aginst others i gess sence the book will have dragons. If thats ok.....

Nova147 · Jul 13, 2008 8:33 PM

Well What i mean IS that it could be about anything you want!
Dragons or not!Just write what your writing!

Hope that clears that up!

Aicebo · Jul 13, 2008 9:30 PM

Maybe this should be moved to General Chat...

Nova147 · Jul 13, 2008 10:06 PM

Aicebo wrote:

Maybe this should be moved to General Chat...

Haider!
Shut Up!(sorry!)

But no.Tecnicaly you can write about Spyro or dragons so it fits in here.
But you dont have to,you can writeabout other creatures or something too.(repeating myself is Very annoying!)

Byz!

TheManiacOnWheels · Jul 13, 2008 10:54 PM

Uhh...
I have a few...how many can you post?

Aicebo · Jul 13, 2008 10:54 PM

<=[ that was mean...
All I'm saying is that you said it could be about anything, so I thought that maybe it should be moved to General Chat...sorry...

dragon protector x · Jul 14, 2008 2:35 AM

I warn there is cuseing and talk of blood........Be warned....

Blood dripped from two identical daggers. They looked as if they were freshly sharpened. At the end of the handles there were small metal dragonheads with their mouths open with the blades to the dagger coming out of them. The fresh blood had not hit them. Who was holding the daggers was a young female with short hair as black as night. Her eyes were dark brown. She was in a dark blue suit that seemed to clutch to her body. She looked down at the now lifeless soldiers at her feet with their blood still dripping from her daggers...

She was in a hallway leading to a distant room. There was no blood on the walls from the soldiers; in fact the walls were as white as if some one had just washed them. There were small torches along these walls that barley let off enough light to see. Below her was a rug. The rug was red with golden designs woven in to it. The fresh blood was turning the rug a much darker red. The lifeless soldiers were wearing dark red armor, almost the same red as their blood. They wore coifs over their heads so all that was showing was their cold expressionless faces. Next to one of them was a sword with a bright green emerald shining at its hilt. Next to the other soldier was a long staff with a very sharp spike on it.

The woman blinked once at her victims then smiled. She looked up towards the distant room that was light by an either a very large torch or a fire place. Once she looked in to the light room her smile left to an expression that imitated the dead below her. She looked to the corner of her eye with out turning her head and listened. When she heard nothing, she bent down and wiped the blood of the soldiers on their corpses. She bent back up and started to walk towards the room.

When she reached the door she propped her self against the wall. She looked down the hallway were the bodies lay then back towards the door. She leaned out towards the door and looked inside.

Inside the room there was a table with a bunch of papers scattered all over it and a large candle stand with lots of candles on it at the far left corner. Under the table there is a very large rug. It had the same designs as the rug in the hall. Beyond the table was a fireplace. There were fresh new logs that were just starting to catch fire. Above the fireplace was a portrait or a man in full armor with his arm extending out holding a sword. The sword was beautiful. At the bottom of its hilt clung a sapphire. The hilt itself was in blue wrapping as dark as the sapphire. The blade was just perfect for a great war. The man was not standing, but sitting in a saddle that was mounted on a dragon. The dragon seemed to be young. It had scales as dark blue as the sapphire on the mans sword.

The woman looked right around the corner of the wall and saw a large bookshelf filled with books. The woman seemed impressed for a moment before turning back to a blank face. She then looked to the left. She saw a large oak cabinet. The cabinet could hold many things such as coats, armor, weapons, more books, or cloths. Next to the cabinet was a chair. The chair was pushed away from a door that was once keeping it shut.

The woman pushed off the wall and walked quietly towards the other door. Once in front of it the quietly slide one of her daggers into its sheath. She reached out and grabbed the handle to the door and opened it slowly. She leaned against the wall and pushed the door open. She drew her dagger and walked into the next room.

Inside there was a wooden chair with a horrified man sitting in it. The woman looked the man in the eyes and smiled. The man shaking with fear pleaded, "Please don't kill me! Please! I have done nothing wrong! Spare me! Oh please Ziatha don't kill me."

The woman stopped smiling. "I know you didn't do anything wrong. I've just come to get some information out of you," said Ziatha.

"I'll tell you every thing you want! If you do please let me live," cried the shaking man.

Ziatha put her daggers away and smiled. "I want you to tell me were the tomb of the last dragon rider is."

"What do you want from there? There isn't anything worth taking!" cried the man.

"You know *bleep* well what is down there, Dyro."

"Ok, I'm sorry. Please tell me what you plan to do with the dragon eggs, Ziatha. Please tell me you wont give them to the king or destroy them. Promise me Ziatha," Dyro whimpered.

Ziatha shock her head in disbelief. "Dyro, Dyro, Dyro. You don't think I killed those soldiers out there just to get the information to where the last dragon eggs are just to destroy them or give the to the king? I would rather be a peasant like you pleading for my life then work for the king. I'm not going to destroy the remaining dragon eggs either. Only a complete mad man like the king would do that. No, I'm going to take the eggs and give them to the ones who will become new dragon riders."

Dyro relaxed a little in his chair. He was not crying anymore. He was still distant of Ziatha, for he feared her much. She was the last person you would want questioning you. Dyro looked down at the floor and muttered just loud enough for Ziatha to her, "I'm sorry for mistaking you as a servant to the king. If you say is true then I will help. But if I am wrong, may my soul find forgiveness." Dyro stood up and walked out of the small room. He keep on eye on Ziatha's daggers. He walked over to the desk covered with papers and sorted threw them.

Ziatha walk over to the other to the door she first came threw and shut it. She grabbed the only chair in that room and put it against that door. She looked back towards Dyro and put her daggers away. She walked slowly towards the desk and stopped just before it and looked and Dyro with calm eyes. Dyro could feel Ziatha looking at him and he froze for a minute. He quickened his looking pace until he came a crossed a map.

"Here it is. I'll mark were the tomb is and on the back of the map ill write what you have to do to get in and the dangers of the place," Dyro muttered while reaching for a glass of ink.

"Dangers? What kind of dangers?" asked Ziatha curiously?

Dyro sighed. "Well, when the tomb was built, the builders wanted to make it so that no one can disturb the riders grave. The whole tomb is like a trial. They made it so that only the mightiest and the bravest will make it threw. Many have tried and the farthest they have gotten was the last room before the grave. No one has ever gotten past the last trap. The elves named it the tomb Trid ot soules, which means Tomb of Endings."

Ziatha went in to deep thought. "That sounds like a challenge. Do you know all the traps?"

"Aye. There be four, which represents the last four eggs. The first has something to do with crossing a pit filled with spikes. The second you must doge fire. Third you have to cut four objects to stop the room from filling with water. The lastâ€¦no one could figure out what the object of it was."

"Sounds fun. Had me the map and ill be off. One more thing, don't be telling any one I was here," Ziatha said taking the map and walking towards the door.

"I swear on the pain of death I wont."

"Good boy," Ziatha said before disappearing in to the shadows of the hallway.

Sammy The Dragon · Jul 14, 2008 6:01 PM

my story would be toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long for one reply.

Nova147 · Jul 14, 2008 9:44 PM

TheManiacOnWheels wrote:

Uhh...
I have a few...how many can you post?

Haider!
You can post mabye just two per month so its not unfair.
You dont have to write them all at once either!You can 1 or 2 each month or so for me to judge!
-D
Byz!

Nova147 · Jul 14, 2008 9:47 PM

Aicebo wrote:

<=[ that was mean...
All I'm saying is that you said it could be about anything, so I thought that maybe it should be moved to General Chat...sorry...

Haider!
Ya,Sorry about that shut up thing,I was very irritated!
I do see your point,but I feel people might have more dragon and Spyro stories if Their HUGE fans!

Byz! smile

Nova147 · Jul 14, 2008 9:49 PM

Sammy The Dragon wrote:

my story would be toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo long for one reply.

Well you can write yor story in chapters so each month or so Ill judge a chapter!Its okay if its a long story!I cool with that!Alot of stories are split into chapter anyway!

Hope that helps yay!Byz! big_smile

Nova147 · Jul 14, 2008 10:01 PM

Haider!

Your story was AMAZING!I loved the storyline and use of words!
It was super descriptive and fun to read!I hope thats not all!

But dont think youve won!I have a large open mind to other stories!
Keep that in mind!

AWSOME!Byz!

Hail The Ice Dragon · Jul 14, 2008 11:50 PM

WARNING: MATURE CONTENT!

Spyro And Cynder On A Vacation

As Spyro continued his quest to find Cynder he thought..(Mabye I could bring her to the beach) Yeah just like a vacation!!!
When Spyro finally found Cynder he exclaimed"We should have a vacation go to the beach and sip lemonade catch fish tan swim!
Cynder shakes her head no. Cynder says"I can't I don't belong there spyro..."
Spyro sadly says" Come on Cynder I don't belong there and I go to dragon shores!"
Cynder shouts" ALL RIGHT FINE! Hope its fun for my sake!"
Spyro and Cynder look around. They both burst with excitment and they fly and fly. Finally Cynder and Spyro both land on a beach with a old tatty sign that says "DRAGON SHORES SORRY WE ARE CLOSED!" Spyro screams" NOOOO! I love this beach!!!!!!!!!!!! Cynder turns away from Spyro and growls" You brought me here just so I could see a dead beach didn't you?" Spyro sees a little sparkly blue tear fall out of cynder's eye. "We flew all these miles to see a dead beach...Spyro why are you like that?" Cynder turns to spyro. Spyro smiles. Cynder blushes. Spyro runs after Cynder and he locks them both in a popcorn stand. Were they "CAN'T SAY THE WORD mate CAN I? WELL THEY DO!" Spyro hugs Cynder and licks the mark on her forhead. Cynder had 1 little half cynder half spyro baby dragon. Spyro licked him clean. Cynder smiled and said" I knew we could have a family Spyro." A month later they married each other. They now are a happy family.

TheManiacOnWheels · Jul 14, 2008 11:51 PM

Here's one of my fanfics...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4324381/1/

Nova147 · Jul 15, 2008 1:10 AM

Haider!

LUVED the story!It made me laugh!
Your great at coming up wiyh stories,i can tell!Your end was very nice too!Lots of romance and spoofing in the story!
Keep writing!

Byz! big_smile

Spyro_fan55 · Jul 15, 2008 3:57 AM

I started mine in FF section.

Thundersoul · Jul 15, 2008 12:24 PM

Heres one, Long time ago in a Galaxy Far Far Away *StarWars Theme* tongue But seriously I have Ideas for stories but they dont sound as well when I get them too the computer and I spend more time hitting myself in the head. (I have prof reading my work so badly) But one day I might throw it out there after

dragon protector x · Jul 15, 2008 4:07 PM

Stupied laptop logged me out like right the instant i sent that post....Sorry.....

dragon protector x · Jul 15, 2008 5:17 PM

ok here it is... tho i quite it before it got to...high rated...

Spyro woke from his nap after training. He looked around to make sure Cynder hadn't left again. Which she didn't. She was laying right next to him. He didn't know why, but he had this wonderful fluttery feeling in his stomach when ever he looked at her. This affection seemed to start up after saving her from Gaul. Spyro didn't know what this feeling was, but it was good. He seemed like he always wanted to be around her. She was like an angel to him. He was amazed by her beauty. Her voice, oh Spyro loved her voice. It was as if all pain would wash away from the world when he heard he voice. It was soft and kind to him. Ignitus has been real watchful of Spyro lately. What ever the reason, Ignitus must be worried Cynder might try to attack him.
Spyro heard a little buzzing sound coming from the hall way. It was Sparx. Spyro shook his head. â€œSpaxâ€™s What do you want?â€ Spyro whispered to not wake his angel sleeping next to him.
â€œHow many times do i have to say. Why do i have to want something?â€ Sparx said creeping into the room.
â€œSparx how high is the sun right now?â€ Spyro asked.
â€œIts about to set,why do you ask?â€ Sparx said itching his tiny head.
â€œIâ€™ve had something to do around this time. Could you please go away Sparx. Cynder might get you,â€ Spyro said taunting.
â€œShe does and ill kick her butt just as bad as that bird on that big old ugly had,â€ Sparx said bringing his fists into the air.
Cynder laughed out of random. Spyro and Sparx bolted their head to look at her. â€œSparx you are funny,â€ Cynder said raising her head. â€œI wouldn't be half as easy as those birds.â€
Sparx shrieked and bolted out the door. Spyro and Cynder heard him screaming all the way down the hall.
Cynder turned her head to look at Spyro. â€œWhat makes you think i didn't hear Sparx coming?â€ Cynder said playfully.
â€œI...I didn't know you were awake,â€ Spyro said looking into her wonderful green eyes. Spyro started to have that fluttery feeling again.
â€œWell lets say i heard him coming before he reached the hall,â€ Cynder said rolling closer to Spyro and playfuly swatted his face. â€œSo what did you have planned? Were you going to leave me all alone her?â€
Spyro Blushed. â€œNo i was going to take you some were.â€
â€œOh, thank you!â€ Cynder said rolling on her back playing with Spyros tail while still looking at him.
Spyros heart jumped every time her paw touched his tail. She looked so wonderful. Just at that second they both heard Sparx heading back to their room. With one of the guardians following him. Ignitus looked into the room and Sparx zoomed right past him and stopped and tried to hide back behind the wall.
â€œWhat have you guys been doing since you woke up?â€ Ignitus questioned looking at Spyro then to Cynder.
â€œWe have been talking,â€ Spyro said looking at Ignitus. His heart still was jumping because Cynder was still playing with his tail.
â€œOk. Well we have finished training for the day. Just to let you know,â€ Ignitus said turning away looking still worried.
â€œIâ€™ll follow him,â€ Sparx said turning and leaving.
Spyro and Cynder turned to look at each other knowing Sparx didn't leave. Other wise they would have heard his loud wings flying down the hall.
â€œSparx you may leave now,â€ Spyro said looking at the hall way door.
â€œNo one is here!â€ Sparx said with a high pitched voice.
Spyro put his head next to Cynderâ€™s and whispered, â€œLets go.â€
Spyro and Cynder got up and walked to the hall and Sparx bolted down the hall thinking they were after him. He screamed as they appeared. Spyro and Cynder left the temple to go were Spyro wanted to take Cynder.

Spyro took Cynder to a hill by his old home that Sparx didnt even know about. Spyro watched the sun set every day before he learned he was a dragon. Spyro landed and walked a few steps before laying down. Cynder looked in awe. A tear appeared and rolled down her face.
â€œSpyro this is amazing. I have never seen anything like this,â€ Cynder said with a few more tears flowing out of her eyes.
Spyro got up and walked over to her and wiped her tears away. â€œI'm glad you like it. All for the one i love,â€ Spyro said.
Cynder looked him in the eyes with even more amazement. Spyro just realized what he said and blushed. He quickly walked over to the spot he was at and sat back down. His face felt like his fire breath back fired and hit him. He didn't dare look back at Cynder after what he just said. He felt her sit right next to him. He tail wavering back and forth.
â€œSpyro i didn't know you felt the same i did,â€ Cynder said.
This time it was Spyro who was shocked. He looked over at Cynder who was blushing as well. Tho she had black scales Spyro could see them turn a little pinkish red. Cynder looked up from the ground to catch Spyro looking at her. They both turned their heads back to look at the ground. This was so awkward to them. Both of their tails were waving, and suddenly touched. They both looked at each other and tried to pull their tails away, but their tails seemed to tie together. They both felt embarrassed, so they looked out at the sun with their tails tied together. Spyro couldn't help looking over at Cynder. Spyro moved a little closer to her. He didn't know why his body wanted to be closer to her when he was so embarrassed, but it wanted to. They suddenly both laid down at the same time and turned to look at each other again, but this lips touched. Their faces both felt hot from embarrassment, but the kiss felt right. after a few seconds their lips left each other. Both of them knew they were in love.

Nova147 · Jul 15, 2008 10:02 PM

Haider!

Um...well...i,uh....IM SORRRY!
SO ABSOULUTLY POSATIVLY AM SUPER SORRY!
My dad said that I shouldnt do a contest!!His reason is unknown!
Please understand!I would if i could!I KNOW ALL YOUR STORIES ARE
or WOULD HAVE THE GREATEST!THE GREATEST!But sadly,I cant.

Byz!

Nova147 · Jul 15, 2008 10:18 PM

Haider!

ONE THING,in my last post I forgot to say hoe totally awsome all the stories were!They rocked!But,because of what my dad said,I dont thing I should be writing comment because others could get the wrong idea!
My dad wont let me have fun with posting!!!!But please still write stories here so others can read them!

Byz!

Nova147 · Jul 15, 2008 10:46 PM

Haider!

OKAY!Im not sure!Should i write my story or not?
Someone help me!
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Byz!

TheManiacOnWheels · Jul 15, 2008 11:39 PM

If your want to write it, write it. There's nothin' stopping you. Heck, I write random stories all the time big_smile .

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