#326 Jun 17, 2008 10:36 AM

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I read all of this and I love it keep up the good work!

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I can't wait for the next chapter. This stuff is so amazing! Nothing I've ever written could ever match this!

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thank, i have the next CH ready, tho i have not typed it up......

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shame on you then! XD

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Yes!Shame shame shame!*gets whacked on head by shade*oww....*falls into a coma...*

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Yay!!!

Ok ok, i typed it but first, i have to do somthing.....

Warning! this Chapter contains some mature content, that some that are young may not want to see.....

Warning Warning Warning Warning Warning

ok, here it is......

Chapter 32- the night of passion:

The sunset passed in an incredibly quick time, but that remarkably small time was valued greatly by both Spyro and Cynder. The sun sunk all the way, letting a world of darkness rule over all living things. “Well… that was quite beautiful, you were right about that,” said Cynder
“Yeah,” said Spyro

Eventually Spyro and Cynder left their spot, to go to another location Spyro knew of. This spot was a small island not to far from the shore, the island, was of a size that Spyro and Cynder could rest in nicely. For this island was the reason Spyro learned to swim at a young age, since it was not for from homeland it was the genuine spot for Sparx and Spyro back then. Spyro and Cynder decided to lay down and Cynder rested her head on Spyro’s shoulder. They then began to look up to the beautiful stars when Cynder asked “What do you think is up there in the stars?”
“I don’t know,” responded Spyro  “Wanna know why?”
“Why,”
“Well,”
Spyro then looked at Cnder and with a smile kissed her. “Because all I can see and think about is your eyes, those beautiful emeralds that shine brighter then the sun,” he responded.
They continued to kiss after this remark, and eventually, Spyro shoved Cynder down on her back so he could lay on top of her.

That night, the whole forest around and it’s little creatures could hear as Spyro and Cynder made love, nothing held then back, the shadow of the night covered them from judgments of anyone. They were at true happiness as they went through their passionate embrace. It was as if this was part of prophecy.

After the long time went through, they finished, at it; Cynder laid in the arms of her purple mate, feeling safer then ever. She then said “From this day on, I’m only for you, I promise it to the ancestors,”
“As I promise my life to you cyn,” said Spyro
Cynder, exausted from the night, fell asleep, followed quickly by Spyro, with a soft kiss on Cynder’s cheek, Spyro dazed away to a world of dreams.

i hope you liked it, plz comment!

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sorry, this was a bad and stupid chapter.... i dont know if im gonna make more, if so, it will be better then this... im sorry

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ZOMG! Cynder is a guy! XD XD XD XD XD

you got a typo there bud. But it's quite funny.

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It was a good chapter. I hope you make more Shade because they are really good.

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Yes!Shame shame shame!*gets whacked on head by shade*oww....*falls into a coma...*

Me- *Pokes Lord Rattler with sharpened stick* I think he's dead!!
Doctor- No he's not.
Me- If I say he's dead, then he's dead! No one wins an argument with me! If they do, they die!
Doctor- Okay, what size straight jacket do you wear?
XD

Yeah, you did have a typo. You should go back and edit that to fix it.

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i fixed it, and i am making more, i just felt a little bad yesturday.....

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Awesome chapter Pal keep up the great work!

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thanks man!!!!!!!! thanks to all who support me

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I support you 99.5%! You wondering who I'm supporting with the other .5%? Me and my three stories on here. 

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wow, thats alot, thanks.......

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You're welcome! And now, I must go and figure out what I'm going to do now. Uh.... I got nothing.... I guess I'll just look around the forums some more. Grr, what is up with me and all my lame jokes?!

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lol..... tats funny...................................

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Great chapter in the greater story. I am glad you still continue your fantastic work on this!

keep your keyboard smoking!

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lol..... tats funny...................................

You think that's funny, I can get funnier. When I'm in the mood. Right now, though, I can't think of anything. :'( When I do, I'll get back to you. Again, great story. Can't wait 'til the next chapter. You know, you might as well call this a book, not a story. It's pretty darn long. I'm not complaining, I love long books, like Harry Potter, Jurassic Park, Raptor Red, and The Mage Wars trilogy ( The Black Gryphon, The White Gryphon, The Silver Gryphon). Yep, good books. If you don't recognize the books in parentheses or Raptor Red, just look them up or something, they're incredible. Now, umm, I think it would be a good idea if Spyro and Cynder, well... I'll PM you with my thoughts if you want.

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ok... yeaht its alright..... not as good as sme of your other chapters but... oh well i suppose that this was a hard one to write

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sure, tell me your idea people, i always atcept new thoughts.....

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was i too harsh there? if so then sorry... i mean i couldnt write this well... at least i dnt think so as i never get feedback on my stories so i dnt really know..

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well, i dont know..... no one is "bad" at writing, you just have not tried it enough...... everything takes practice, i learned that with drawing, im decent now, but i was bad before.....

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Hey guys! i have a new CH up are ready, warm off my brain..... have fun reading it....

Chapter 33- Ms. Spider-Face:

The next morning came with a bright sun and a soft cold breeze, as Spyro awoke from his sleep, he looked at the one he had fully promised his love to the night before, and smiled. He knew she was the right one for him, she was a kind person, but had a hard outer shell, Spyro loved that about her. As Spyro moved around to stretch, he let a little breeze of air go under him and touch Cynder’s warm body, causing her to shiver and scoot closer to Spyro. Spyro chuckled as Cynder did this, finding it to be cute. Spyro then began to wonder within his mind when out of the mists in his memories came a thought, shouting with power, today he and Ignitus were leaving to that one realm. When this thought struck Spyro, he shivered softly, If he was not there when they were suppose to leave, he would be in grave trouble, and his relationship with Cynder could be in risk. Spyro, now fully aware of the consequences, began to stir Cynder softly to awaken her, and Cynder quickly reacted to him. As Cynder sluggishly began to open her eyes Spyro began to talk to awaken her “Cyn, Wake up Cyn,” he said softly
Cynder streatched and yawned before she turned to face Spyro, she gave him a warm smile and said “Hey Spyro, what’s up?”
Spyro, seeing Cynder’s warmness could not help but to smile, and kiss Cynder “We have to go cyn, I’m leaving today,” Spyro responded
“Oh… right,” said Cynder sadly, rembering about this day as well.

Both dragons quickly stood up, and left this very important spot, heading back towards the dragonfly village, to meet up with Sparx. When they reached it, they went to their parents, and Sparx was there.
“I’m not leaving,” said Sparx
“What!? Why!?” said Spyro
“Well, Spyro, remember Ms. Spider- Face?” responded Sparx
“Ms. Spider-Face. Heck yeah,” Said Spyro
“Spider-Face?” asked Cynder
“She was a girl in our school, that Sparx thought was very ugly, so ugly that Sparx teased her saing that she had a Spider’s face, she was insulted by many, I really never saw it,” responded Spyro
“Well that’s because you were not with your race,” said Sparx, but then shook his head, he creeping away from the point “But that’s not the point,” he said “anyways… well my mom and pop reintroduced me to her yesterday night and man, she’s a total hottie!”
“O…K…” said Spyro “So?”
“So, well she totally likes me, so I decided that I’m staying. Anyways you’ll be gone and I’d be stuck with doom-and-gloom,”
Spyro stayed quiet for a second, waiting to hear Cynder respond, but to his surprise she didn’t. Her mind right now was thinking about the night before, and had her completely occupied. Spyro, surprised by Cynder’s lack of action turned back to Sparx. “Well, If that’s what you want,” said Spyro
“Heck yeah I want it. Im hoping I get somewhere with her,” responded Sparx
“Odd…” said Spyro
“Odd!? I should be the one talking, you and Cynder getting all intimate with each other last night,”
Cynder, hearing this responded, she shot her head up and looked at Sparx with a heavily blushed face. “How the? How did you know!?”
Seeing Spyro blush now as well, Sparx smiled and said “Well, it was ovious, you two not coming back last night, while being alone, in one of the largest leakes in this realm,”
They all remained quiet, sulking the bizzar moment, when Spyro reacted “Well, I guess you can stay, have fun here,”
“I will, I’ll make sure I do. You two love-bugs go off and have a safe trip to the temple,” said Sparx
“Thanks Sparx,” responded Spyro
“We’ll be picking you up when we get back,”
“Ok cools,” said Sparx
“Bye!" said Spyro and Cynder as they left the village, heading back to the temple.

I hope you liked it, plz comment.....

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that was a good one. uhhh spider face???? lol

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