Chapter 2- City of the Gate

CRASH!!! A huge crash interrupted Aeros thoughts.
"Wat was that?" he wonderd. Just then Aeros friend Eerye rushed in.
"Aero come look at this!!Hurry up!" and then rushed out again. Sighing, Aero rose up and followed Eerye out of the building.
A huge whit stone sat in the middle of the courtyard. It glowed like freshly fallen snow hit directly by an afternoon sun.
What is it? wondered Eerye out loud. Well obviously its a stone Eerye, thought Aero.
Aero approached the stone and Touched it... He was instantly Knocked back and his head was filled with pictures and visions. A ruined crumbling temple was shown in his mind. He knew that he must go there and take the stone with him. Luckily the temple was not too far out of the city...Can someone comment on these soon?

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Chapter 3- The Forest of Czaar
"YEEHAA!" Yelled Blade, as he jumped to the next tree.
Tall, slim, lean and good natured, Blade was a very athletic person who loved nothing more than to spend his days testing himself in the forest. But this was all to change... Bland looked at the green stone that had fallen from the sky the night before.
"hmm, interesting" he thought. As he picked it up, strange visions flashed through his head. He grinned as the temple appeared in his mind, it was a place he knew well, not too far from where he lived. he looked at the stone, then, as if deciding something, he walked away with it, and set off for the temple the very next day.

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Chapter 3- Meet The People

Tern sighed as he looked back at his home, the rock heavy on his back. He had found it the day before and it had glowed brown like the dust as the sun shone on it. He recalled the Flashes that had reeled through his mind, and carried on towards the temple.

Inferno stood before the disused altar, ignoring the stairs leading into the fain (not a misspelling). He heard a rustle behind him and spun around, drawing a long yellow sword at the same time as the white stranger behind him whiped out a staff. They clashed against each other, but Inferno was stronger, and sent the white one sprawling to the ground. Inferno did not laugh, but stuck his hand out to help the stranger up. Thanks he said. My name is Aero. Im Inferno, Inferno replied.
"Am I too late to join the party?" a loud joyious voice rang clear above them. They looked around, but saw no-one. Up here! called the voice again. They looked startled at the temple roof as a tall green figure swung down from the rafters, Backflipped and then landed with both feet and one hand on the ground. My name is Blade, he said. Aero and Inferno introduced themselves, then turned ad Tern truged over the hill.

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since noone is commenting i am gonna coppy and paste these chapters into a thread in fanfiction section

yeah but now i have transfered these chapters to the fanfiction secton and i will continue it there when i do