#1 Feb 25, 2008 1:20 AM

Razz

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Razz's Spyro Writing Critique

Spyrofriend

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Re: Razz's Spyro Writing Critique

Your stories are short, but carry in them enough description to make up for thier brevity. They are very good though Raz. Imo I'm a good enough writer myself to tell when someone is a good writer. it shows in the way the story flows with each word, and you can easily picture yourself there as an onlooker.. That I can d with your stories. Keep up the good work..

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