ColdCore [RP thread]

Wolfgurl989 · Mar 11, 2009 11:41 PM

(ok..lol, tired of waiting!) I kept looking at him, then got bored and looked up into the sky which was now begginign to turn pink with the sun setting. I sighed. It looked pretty. I jumped up and flew as high as I could and caught site of the dragon that had killed the one dragon. I flew down to about level with his head. "Why did you kill her? did she do anything wrong?" I asked. I hadn;t the slightest clue on why he had atacked her.

Aceedwin · Mar 12, 2009 4:47 PM

"Well aren't you the little detective!" Gor touched her on the head, injecting a short-term sleep-inducing virus. Now that he thought about it, wouldn't that mean she'd fall into the abyss below?

Meh.

Wolfgurl989 · Mar 12, 2009 9:20 PM

(um..ok...why am I always the one that blacks out all the time?!)

He touched her head and something made her sleepy. She closed her eyes and fll into the water, though because she was still breathing, she floated on top of the water kinda. She blacked out...

Swaffy · Mar 12, 2009 10:15 PM

I've been on vacation since Monday, sorry.
It's actually good that there are no PCs in Port Aransas. Family time.

Wolfgurl989 · Mar 13, 2009 11:20 AM

A half ohour later Spirit woke up in the waiter, he head hurt too. "o..k..." she said. She flew out of the water to dry land. She looked around and saw the other dragon, he seemed to be in pain. I waked over to him. "Are you k? What happened?" she asked him.

Aceedwin · Mar 13, 2009 4:44 PM

"Boo." Gor used his tail to swing down, face to face with the dragon. "Is my little gift giving you grief? Better do what it says, that thing doesn't know the first thing about mercy." Gor cackled and swund back up and darted off into the trees, concealing himself so he couldn't be followed by the other dragon. The apprentice would be able to track him, though, because if he tried walking in any other direction, it would be painful.

Swaffy · Mar 13, 2009 7:19 PM

No 13 year-old is going to read my mind. No, no.
[Oh, and the *bleep* thing was (bas tard)]

Wolfgurl989 · Mar 13, 2009 9:45 PM

(lol, swaffy I'm surprised, I thought you didn;t cuss? JK lol! XD)

She nodded, when he took off Spirit looked after him for a second, then took off after him!

Aceedwin · Mar 14, 2009 7:09 AM

Gor was happier than he'd been in ages. He should start teaching his new apprentice what he did, how they fought and such. A faemhouse would do. Gor skipped merrily out of the forest and into the farmlands on the other side. The pastures reeked of animals. For fun, Gor roasted a chicken, starlight style.

Gor then found a farmhouse. He sidled up to the window and listened. Three dragons, a couple and a friend. This would be tricky. He wasn't used to taking hostages...

Ten minutes later, the two males were dead, and the female lay on the ground, tied-up and attempting to scream throught the cloth on her mouth. All he had to do now is wait...

Swaffy · Mar 14, 2009 8:39 AM

Exodus and Spirit searched the trees for their foe. Nothing.

Exodus: "Where is he? I just saw him fly right into these trees. Maybe he
flew North. Lets go."

The two had no thought that they were heading in the wrong direction.
Eventually, they will find out their mistake. Soon enough.

Exodus's mate got killed, and he is mad. Stuck chasing this killer. So 
his language is a bit crummy right now. It will clean up once Gor stops 
sending mental messages to Exodus and that other thing he controls 
him with. :)

Wolfgurl989 · Mar 14, 2009 11:13 AM

OOC: lol, it seems fine to me!

She looked around. "I dunno, he WAS over here, he fricken knocked me out over here!" Spirit exclaimed.

Aceedwin · Mar 14, 2009 12:34 PM

Gor growled. He wasn't hard to track. Just follow the screams of terror! Fine, if the apprentice wanted to play rough. Gor clapped his hands together and closed his eyes. He found the dragon's mind. He was going the wrong way! "Wrong way foolish dragon...".

He accompanied the message with the condensed pain of being stabbed with poison needles every day for a week. Gor shuddered at the memory, and pushed it over the link. Gor almost felt sorry for the poor dragon. Gor smiled, "Not completely heartless."

Wolfgurl989 · Mar 14, 2009 4:32 PM

I looked around, I still couldn't find him anywhere!

Swaffy · Mar 15, 2009 7:33 AM

 Cowgirl, put  around your OOC comments, please.

Aceedwin · Mar 15, 2009 12:16 PM

Gor tapped his fingers. First impressions... Tsch.

I got bored, so for fun ( o_O ) I'm going to list our pros and cons as rpers! *whispering* Oh my god, I am so sad...

REMEMBER! These are just my opinions. Complain if you wish, but don't take the too seriously if you know I'm wrong.

Swaffy-
Pros: Has an excellent grasp of language, and can make his actions heard effectively. Has a good idea of relationships.

Cons: Lacks the ability to drive stories, the ability to think what should happen next as it were. Also, sometimes gets outside the main story (probably not a fault as much as a lack of strength).

Wolfy-
Pros: Good grasp of thinking in the future, has excellent skills in building personalities. Decent spelling and grammer. Has some nice posts when well accompanied.

Cons: Sometimes fails to read posts. Has a rather bad notion of timing, and tends to ignore certain things. Is a bad writer when not offered a situation (i.e. Isn't a good soloist).

Me!-
Pros: Has some interesting personalities, very good spelling and grammer (not quite as good as Swaffy's I'll concede), and is good at planning ahead.

Cons: Very aggresive style of play, tendency to be unsociable, and doesn't like to allow the story to fall into other hands, for fear the hands in question are insufficient at imagining good stories.


Heh, maybe I'll scout out other people and see how their rping skills are. Now, I wonder how many times I'll be complained to for this...

Wolfgurl989 · Mar 16, 2009 11:21 AM

 ok I tried the code thing, hope it works! And yaay! I'm good at building personalities! And yes, I SUCK when I don't know what to do next sorry!

 YAAY it worked! XP

Spirit looked at Exodus. "I saw the dragon touch you...then leave. Do you think he could have made it so he could share the pain you've been having AND talk to you in your brain?" She asked. She wasn't sure. ANd according to the other dragon's actions. They should beable and hear where he was. -Follow the screaming...- she thought glumly. "I think were to high up to hear him, you know he's just GOT to be terrorizing a city or something right now!" She pointed out.

Swaffy · Mar 17, 2009 2:15 AM

Aah, code is much easier than OOC commenting.
Also, you need to realize that most stories need extra stuff going on to the 
side. Like Exodus and his [now dead] mate in the beginning. In fact, it is 
you that needs to chill and take some time instead of always racing 
through with the story.

This is a long RP, so make it worth the time. Life isn't always about beating 
each other up and chasing each other.

Wolfgurl989 · Mar 17, 2009 11:15 AM

 Race through? I didn't really think of it like that, I just need a subject because I'm not to good with just writing out of the blue...it's why most of my stories are onic based becasue they already have part of a story to start with, I tried making totally new characetrs that were humans and such, that was ayear ago and I'm still trying to figure out the main point!

He flew in the other direction, Spirit changed course. He yelled out. Spirit's eyes went wide.

Spirit: "What are you doing...you could find him then use a surprise like attack thing...now he's, oh wait he can hear your mind, nevermind!" She said. She thought. "I don't know exaclty what happened, was the girl dragon he killed your mate? He ripped out her heart..." She said.

 do you do the narrator thing like that or am I screwing it up?

Swaffy · Mar 18, 2009 5:31 AM

Hahaha, I meant that AceEdwin is speeding a bit.
Oh, and no, your paragraph was quite a fine one actually.

You may want to watch out how you split your sentences, like [...] [,] and [.]
Other than that, you are doing well.

Aceedwin · Mar 18, 2009 5:19 PM

Swaffy · Mar 19, 2009 1:02 AM

You have pulled a Fail. How is Exodus supposed to find Gor when all he 
hears is "Come here" in his head? I will go this time, to the shed you sent 
the message from. That's where the origin of the message is, anyways.

Aceedwin · Mar 19, 2009 4:45 PM

The dragon is dead. And the idea is that Exodus has Gor's command etched into his subconcious, so he knows where Gor is subconciously. Silly Swaffy.  :-P

Gor left a trail of bodies towards his destination. Not all were dragon, most were squirrels who had been roasted alive, or deers that had been in so much agony, they killed themselves. As the sun rose, the white walls of Leyawinn came into view, and Gor laid up camp in a nearby grove.

Also, haven't Exodus and Spirit already met? In our other rp?

Later on:

OMG I found a dragon creator that will do my characters the way I like them! Man, =coyote is like the coolest guy ever.

I'd post them here, but I haven't a clue how to do that...

Swaffy · Mar 19, 2009 7:27 PM

Alright. Now I know that he can always find Gor.

If you get pics. Right click the picture, click 'Properties', then copy the URL. 
Put [img][/img] around the URL, and remember to make it a Spoiler.

Exodus: "Wait. I know where he is. Come."

The images and messages left Exodus's mind. He flew off, mostly
conscious of what he was doing. He was tracking Gor. It was a weird,
unworldly feeling to be able to know where someone was all of the time,
but it worked. Now, Exodus knew how to use the power. More like it
was 'activated' by Gor himself.

I can't just instaltly know how to track you, so I though I would 
make it to where the tracking power was activated by Gor. Cool?

Crap, Spirit. Post already.

Aceedwin · Mar 19, 2009 7:31 PM

No... Nothing works... Well that screwed that. Well, I expevt I can get my stepdad to figure it out. Never mind.

Wolfgurl989 · Mar 19, 2009 8:06 PM

 Sorry! I havn't been watching the topic!

Spirit looked at the ground and saw a trail of dead creatures, her nose wrinkled in anger, baring her teeth and snarling. "If I ever find out how to kill him.." She promised ersef. She looked to Exodus and followed him.

 THERE! XD

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