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Re: Spyro and Cynder In:Marriage (part 1)

dummy@example.com (Kmn483) — Mon, 17 Aug 2009 18:44:39 +0000

how did u think of that andy thats hilaruos! yeah its... weird. the story, I dont care for it, but there is always someone who hates something. yeah its your choice. you the one going out of your way for us right? we are the poeple who read it, and get entertain ment from it, so sure contiue if you wish.

Re: Spyro and Cynder In:Marriage (part 1)

dummy@example.com (cynder401) — Sat, 15 Aug 2009 21:21:04 +0000

omg no XD that would be funny though

Re: Spyro and Cynder In:Marriage (part 1)

dummy@example.com (Andy123) — Sat, 15 Aug 2009 02:19:18 +0000

anyone can write a story. but only a select people can write good stories. :-| I don't know continue if you wish but don't expect millions of fans.

Let me guess. ITS HUNTER NAKED JUMPING ON THIER BED. XD

Spyro and Cynder In:Marriage (part 1)

dummy@example.com (cynder401) — Fri, 14 Aug 2009 19:50:59 +0000

Spyro and Cynder were walking in the Blossom Forest.
Spyro was about to ask Cynder the big question.
(Spyro)''cynder.... i.... WILL UH UM....''
Cynder gave Spyro a weird look.
(Cynder)''spit it out! what?''
(Spyro)''WILL YOU MARRY ME?!!''
Spyro flinched for a second.
Cynder smiled.

3 months later......
(Cynder)''k spyro lets get in the limo! i heard the hotel is great!''
Spyro was carrying the suitcases.
He was panting like crazy, the suitcases were heavy!
(Spyro)''are you sure we need all this stuff?''
Cynder nodded.
(Cynder)''yeah want me to help you with that?''
Spyro shook his head stubbornly.
(Spyro)''let a man do the job!''
They got into the limo.

4 hours later......
(Driver)''here we are! the grand dragon hotel!''
Spyro and Cynder came out of the limo.
The hotel was pretty big. looked very clean too.
They walked inside.
(Cynder)''wow! what a nice hotel!''
(Spyro)''it is nice... but lets check out the rooms''
They walked over to the front desk.
(Cynder)''excuse me sir, could we have a look at the rooms?''
The man nodded
(Man)''of course! here's a key to room 144 the best room here!''
They went up the stairs, one of the rooms was open.
It wasn't their room but they looked inside.
(Cynder)''OMG''
Cynder and Spyro held each others hands as they looked at the horrible sight they wish they never saw.

what do you all think? should i continue? i will take criticism