Besides if you don't like to argument then ignore me and jsut get lost >_<

Just tell me what you want to tell Aceedwin...
I said that people could comment what I could do better so COME WITH IT! XD
I promise I will not be mad when I actually ask for it ^^

Oh and thanks my WATCHes on DA love this story too ^^

Yeah, verbal contract broken. I could sue if I had a good lawyer.

I said what you could do better, but regardless, you got mad. I actually started off with only good comments, taking your little emotions into account. Then you said that, and I decided you would be alright if I did post my more negative thoughts. Anyway, I'm boring of this argument. Quit pushing it further you two.

Now see, I was gonna leave this thread alone. But now I've been challenged! I can't back down from that!

Post 1: Ah, it's insulting me! How cute. I'm a critical person. It's not like I've told everyone their stories are rubbish, I liked Nightwing's one. But draggydrakness keeps asking for comments. I give them to him, but I just don't like giving SUGAR-COATTED LIES! (sorry, force of habit)

Post 2- Why don't you read it and find out.

Post 3- But why shouldn't he learn to become one? It'll make his stories better, more enjoyable, and he'll gain a skill, and a sense of achievement. Everybody wins.

Also, use one post for everything. It looks silly doing one for each point.

1) Your right that I ask for comments... but not what oter don't like about my stories but what I could have done better... you came up with what you didn't like and that wasn't what I ment... but if you dobn't want to come with the 'SUGAR-COATTED LIES' then just keep your mouth colsed and leave us alone.

3) That make sence but I don't care... my silly reason is that I don't like changes... cheangees really freak me out even that it just is something like my mother moves something around then can I freak out about that...
Besides I only write for fun... I shall not use my writting skills to something in my furture... so why be better?
And people like my stuff on DA and I have made great friends though my stories... that is maybe my reason to keep writting... to find more friends... on this webside have I made really good friends with two persons (one is beautygirl05) so in all I don't care about the way I write... I only hate to hear what people don't like about my stories... that really *bleep* me off...

Okay this comment get really long so I will keep quiet for now ^^"

Post 1: Ah, it's insulting me! How cute. I'm a critical person. It's not like I've told everyone their stories are rubbish, I liked Nightwing's one. But draggydrakness keeps asking for comments. I give them to him, but I just don't like giving SUGAR-COATTED LIES! (sorry, force of habit)

Post 2- Why don't you read it and find out.

Post 3- But why shouldn't he learn to become one? It'll make his stories better, more enjoyable, and he'll gain a skill, and a sense of achievement. Everybody wins.

Also, use one post for everything. It looks silly doing one for each point.

Three linked arguments at once? Hmmm...

It's an expression. Know you're trying to label me as a *Bleep*, you really aren't good at arguing are you?

Hmm, my advice tends to be based on doing the same story, but the main piece of advice I'd give is be more descriptive. You make your stories so short because you fail to use more advanced language. The sign of a truly talented writer? Using different words for the same thing.

And some of us comment because writing better stories is more than fun. Write a good story and you get a sense of achievement. Write a borish, dull one and it's just there, evidence of your lack of talent, after the fun has gone...

You know he's just expressing his feelings and just writering for fun..he's not trying to be like an avanced writer of something...

Heh, remember, I gave you a chance, you told me to say everything. You have absolutely no right to get angry like that. If you didn't want to see a critical opinion, you shouldn't have told me to say it. It's my opinion, I have a right to express it when given permission. Don't try to get the moral high ground on this one.

It's not like you could of done better. I bet yours would be horrible...

Yeah it is a bit rushly written but who cares? (except like a idiot like you)

If I somehow could block you then would I...
will you please NOT comment anymore on my stories if you have to be a jerk like that...

You know, seriously ...he's right..the way you say stuff about Spyro and other people's stories is really starting to *bleep* me off you *beep*.

Anyway we all don't care about facts so let's now jsut read the *bleep* story!

For a start, I was only saying it was cheesy. Now, let's continue from your point of view. For a start, the Spyro world doesn't really have genetics, otherwise the purple egg wouldn't suddenly pop up every ten generations.

Secondly, let us assume what you said is true and Spyro is Bb. For a start, that requires at least one of his parents to be Bb, or more. This is a 25% chance as we can see. The chances are stacked against Spyro's Bb alleles.

Finally, tail blades are a beneficial mutation, meaning that within roughly fifty generations, tail spades would be wiped out. And from the rough amount of time guardian dragons have been around it seems fair to say that the allele would most likely dominate.

Well, that's enough from me. You obviously don't want my points, so I won't post any more comments. What I don't quite get is why you didn't do that in the first place. I mean, you had a choice and you allowed this.

And yeah I have a problem with English... it is a hard language to learn perfectly.

Then why the f*** do you read my stories?
Go then and read some stories some pros have written instead of bugging me all the time.

Oh and one last thing.. about that with the hatchling do one of my other friends have something good to say:
"heres how i reason the hatchling COULD have blades.... genes are expressed using dominant and ressecive alles. so even if neither have blades but the only end black dragons can have is Blades (B= dominant) or none (b= reccesive) then Spyro and Lora in other words must be Bb, bb ( spyro has recessive but shows dominat trait while being a carrier for recessive and Lora has reccesive trait) So that mean the baby has to be Bb meaning that if it was born a purple dragon it would get a tail spade or a black dragon it would get tail blade. the guy who commented that bassicly contradicted himself."

It's an expression. Know you're trying to label me as a loser, you really aren't good at arguing are you?

Hmm, my advice tends to be based on doing the same story, but the main piece of advice I'd give is be more descriptive. You make your stories so short because you fail to use more advanced language. The sign of a truly talented writer? Using different words for the same thing.

And some of us comment because writing better stories is more than fun. Write a good story and you get a sense of achievement. Write a borish, dull one and it's just there, evidence of your lack of talent, after the fun has gone...

So I could do that better to my next story or my fanfic...

So? some of us like to write becuase we thinks it is fun...
And it is funny to get comments like those you give us?
NO IT'S NOT so get off your jerk >.<

I said what I didn't like, I probably could have put what you could have improved, but it was a one-off, so I didn't see the point.

Oh and to your friend. "Your friend isn't a good writer. Would you rather I cut down his hopes now, or an entire crowd does it when he believes himself to be some kind of god."