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Anyway I have now posted my next fanfic "The Legned of Spyro: Young Hearts" http://www.spyroforum.com/post-250795.html#250795
Please check it out. (^_^)

What are lemons???

are there lemons through?

Final Chapter:
Goodbye friends:

Hope and Draco embraced each other, while the others discussed about whether they could trust him or not, but they came up with that they would give him one chance.
“Draco.” said Spyro, Draco tuned his head at Spyro.
“What is it?” asked Draco.
“We will give you another chance.” answered Spyro.
“Alright.” said Draco and kissed Hope again.

Leaf thought about something.
“Spark.”
“Yes Leaf?”
“That question you asked last time we was here in the village, I think I want to do it now.” said Leaf and blushed.
Spark thought about what she meant, but remembered what it was.
“Really?!” asked Spark who blushed too.
“Yeah I want to.” answered Leaf.
“You will be a good mother Leaf.” said Spark and kissed her.

After some time walked they to the others.
“Sorry guys but we have to leave.” said Spark, the others were surprised.
“Why?” Cynder asked confused.
“Because we…want to be alone, if you know what I mean.” answered Leaf.
Cynder began to blush, she and Spyro had thought about that as well, she looked at her love and saw that he blushed too.
“Do you mean children?” asked Draco, they all blushed.
“Mmm…Yes.” answered Spark.

Draco thought about something.
“Hey Hope shouldn’t we also try to get a kid?” he asked.
Hope looked surprised at him.
“Really? Do you want to have a child with me?” asked Hope.
“I’ll do many things with just you.” answered Draco and kissed her.

“Hope that we will see you another time.” said Leaf while her and Spark flew back to Leafian.
“Yes we will!” shouted the others back to them.
“And what about you two?” asked Cynder.
“We will go to the mountains…and also try to get a child.” said Hope while she blushed.
“Okay good luck with it, me and Cynder will go back to the temple.” said Spyro.
“Okay see you later.” said Hope and flew with Draco to the mountains.

“Should we go home?” said Spyro and the two dragons flew back to the temple.
While they were flying Cynder thought about what the others had decided and asked Spyro:
“Spyro…Should we also…”
Spyro knew what she was thinking.
“Of course, I would love to have a child with you.” said Spyro and smiled, Cynder smiled back and they flew towards the sunset.

-END-

(To be continued… )
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You all think why will it continue?
I have already write a new story there is a continuing story to this one.
It is called "The Legend of Spyro: Young Heards" and it is about there kids.
I will post it tomorrow if I can.
I hope that you will check it out. (^_^)

Chapter 30:
I love you:

They could now see the village ahead.
“*bleep* it Draco got here first, we must find him fast.” said Spyro.
They knew where they should search for him, they flew to where the dark crystals where.
They ran inside and saw that Zak was knocked out and Draco stood in front of the crystals.

“Draco!” shorted Spyro.
Draco tuned around to see who it was.
“Ohh, it is just you guys.” said Draco, when he saw Hope began his heart to beat again.
“Don’t disturb me, you will now see the dawn of the darkness.” said Draco and he got ready to destroy the crystals but then:

“Draco stop it, you don’t have to do it!” said Hope.
Draco didn’t look at her.
“And why not?” he asked.
“Because…I love you.” said Hope and blushed.
When she said that, Draco then turned his head and looked at her, he was surprised over what she just said.
“What did you say?” he blushed.
“I love you Draco.” She repeated, her heart began to beat intensly.
`What!? How can she love me after all I did to her?´ thought Draco while his heart beated.
“I love you Draco and I can forgive you, if you just don’t destroy the crystals.” said Hope while she began to cry.
Draco hesitated a little but then moved his paw towards the crystals, but he hit the floor instead.
“*bleep* it, I love you too, your annoying…” he didn’t say anymore.
Hope was in fact surprised.
“Do you really love me?” asked Hope while her heart beated faster than before.
Draco blushed and answered:
“Yes I love you!” he yelled.
“On the whole trip back here I could only think about you and nothing else.” He said and blushed even more.

Hope was happy, she ran to Draco with tears in her eyes and hugged him.
Draco was red like a tomato, he hugged her back.
“I’ll forgive you.” said Hope while she cried.
Draco took his paw and wiped her tears off.
“You should not cry, it doesn’t fits you.” said Draco and gave her a passionate kiss.

They flew back to the village to stop Draco.
Hope was still sad about what happened.
`Why? He was so nice that night when we were in the village. Why?´ thought Hope, she shed a tear.
Leaf noticed that Hope was still sad about Draco.
“Are you sure that you are alright Hope?” asked Leaf worried.
Hope wiped her tear off and answered:
“Yeah I’m alright.”

Leaf thought about a question she wanted to ask Hope.
“Do you still love him?”
Hope thought about it.
“He has hurt your feelings.” said Leaf.
“Yeah I know, but there is something about him that I like, I just don’t know what.” answered Hope.
“It is love.” said Spyro.
“Do you think?” asked Hope.
“Yes I think that Draco has it just like you.” answered Spyro.
It was sweet of Spyro to say that, but she didn’t think that Draco loved her, it was just a game to him.
“It will be alright Hope.” said Cynder who tried to cheer her up.
“We will always help you because we are your friends.” said Spark.
Hope shed another tear, but this time wasn’t it because she was sad, it was because she was happy to have so good friends.
“Thanks everyone, let’s get him.” said Hope and they flew faster.

-In the mean time-

Draco still flew with his heart beating insanly.
`It’s so annoying.´ he thought.
But he could have liked that feeling that there was someone that loved him.
He had never tried it before.
All the other dragons he met were afraid of him, because of his looks.
But Hope didn’t look like she was afraid of him.
She dared to call him a jerk, and he liked when she was cocky.
His heart beated intensely, he couldn’t stop thinking about her.
But he had still decided to complete his mission.
He got closer to the village, he could now in fact see it.

Hope was crushed, she loved him but he had just been lying to her this whole time.
The others were still getting over Draco´s sudden attack, they saw that Hope was crushed.
Cynder walked over to her and asked:
“Are you alright sis?”
Hope turned her head and saw that the others were looking and was worried about her.
She wiped most of the tears off and answered:
“*sniff* I’m fine.”
“We shall go and stop him.” said Cynder who tried to cheer her up.
Hope didn’t answer her, she was still sad about it all.

“Spyro you must stop him, if he destroy the last dark crystals, darkness will be back.” said Terrador.
Spyro didn’t answer him but nodded to what he said.
“You can count on us my friend.” said Spark who was holding Leaf.
“Good, let’s get going.” said Spyro.
They walked to Hope and Cynder.
“Are you alright Hope?” asked Spyro.
Hope wiped the last tears off and answered:
“*sniff* I’m fine, led us catch that *bleep*.”
The others were surprised at what she just said but she was right.
“Let’s catch him.” said Spyro and they began to fly towards the village.

-In the mean time-

Draco flew towards the village, so he could destroy the last crystals so darkness could come back.
But he could not forget Hope.
`What is wrong with me?´ thought Draco while his heart beated intensely.
He thought about her beautiful dark-blue eyes and her beautiful body, his heart began to beat more intensely now.
He daydreamed for some time but shook his head and thought:
`No forget her, you have a mission to do´
But he couldn’t stop thinking about her.
He loved her and he couldn’t deny it.

Spyro was awoken by someone who talked, he opened his eyes and saw three dragons that were talking with Cynder.
“Volteer! Cyril! Terrador!” said Spyro surprised but also tired.
“Spyro it is good to see that you and Cynder are okay.” said Terrador.
“Cynder had told us about your trip and about Ignitus.” said Cyril.
“We have also met your three new friends.” said Volteer.
“Three? Don’t you mean four?” asked Spyro.

But then he heard someone who was laughing and you couldn’t mistake who it was.
“He he, he did that?” said Draco still laughing.
To Spyro´s big surprise it was Sparx he was talking with.
“Yeah but you haven’t heard the worst…oh hey Spyro.” said Sparx who was still annoyed that Spyro and Cynder was together.
The three guardians looked at Draco and the other three dragons were also coming inside.

“You!? What are you doing here!?” asked Terrador surprised.
Draco began to laugh.
“So you do recognize me.” said Draco.
“What do you mean Draco?” asked Hope who didn’t understand what was going on.
“He was Malefor´s apprentice.” answered Terrador.
“What!?!” shouted everybody except Hope that was most shocked.
“It was fun to be with you all, but I must go now.” said Draco and walked towards the exit but got blocked by the three guardians.
“Where do you think you are going?” asked Terrador.
“Back to the village and to destroy the last dark crystal.” answered Draco and attacked them with a powerful dark energy blast so he could get though them.

He was about to fly when he heard a sniffled voice said:
“Draco *sniff* why?” it was Hope, she was crushed over hearing that he was Malefor´s apprentice.
Draco smiled his evil smile.
“Sorry pretty, like I’ve said, it was fun to be with you all.”
“What about when we were in the village, didn’t you mean it?” asked Hope sad.
Draco began to laugh again.
“That was my revenge for when you destroyed my crystals.” answered Draco.
Hope was surprised over what she just have heard, was it all just a game for him?
“But don’t you love me?” asked Hope who was about to release her tears and cry.
Draco didn’t answer her and flew away.
“Draco!!” shorted Hope and began to cry.
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PLEASE COMMENT

The scond I know that Maybe is not writen to well but like you said It is my frist so that will be okay. `I think´

There is a plot with the dark crystals and the romance.

Thanks.
and I have also writen:
"I love you" a Spyro and Cynder Romance http://www.spyroforum.com/topic-8318-qu … mance.html
"Who was my father?" a Spyro and Cynder tragedy http://www.spyroforum.com/post-248078.html#248078

However, though the antics of your characters was cute and humorous, there seemed to be a lack of depth to them. What I mean is that you really didn't take the time to develop them properly, but since this is a fanfiction, you can get away with that a bit.

Also, I've noticed that there doesn't really seem to be a plot or a storyline in this story, aside from the fact that several young dragons randomly show up and start having romantic intrigues.

I know I'm being a bit vague with my suggestions, but since this is your first fanfiction, don't worry too much about it. You'll get better with time. Hope to see more of your work in the future.

Sincerely

Torch Firetongue