bmah wrote:

The song is not bad for a start. I'll admit though, it did make me fall asleep. It can have a lot of potential though, and as you said, you'll eventually add more I hope. For starters, you did set the music for a dreamy rave sound, which is nice.

What stood out:
- sound quality (perhaps needs some mastering done)
- syncing of some melodies offbeat (e.g. near the beginning)
- overusage of loops? (if this is the case, try to be more original)

BTW, what program did you use to make the music?

shadowsfall wrote:

oh okay well then the video gets a 7/10!

reason: well i like the music but it's not all that good if there is no entertainment. now i am not insulting you or anything if you think i am but it's good.

Ayumi posted this for the song, not for anything else. You shouldn't take the actual video into account, really.

It is looped...?

I used my trusty Synthesizer! The YPT-400!
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I sometimes mess up, though It means it IS User Made.

I used the edited vers. of "Rave" which had too much KB. 38 KB.

Instrument can take 30 KB ONLY. X(
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I hope I finally get the Tyros-3

Oh! I didn't know you were using actual hardware to make your music. I'd still think there would be a way to sync what you initially recorded. I personally haven't worked with a real synthesizer (like I can afford one), so I can't say too much else.

and 30kb max? lol, that might be a reason for the quality.

Ayumi posted this for the song, not for anything else. You shouldn't take the actual video into account, really.

i know that bmah thank you. i am just saying

The song is not bad for a start. I'll admit though, it did make me fall asleep. It can have a lot of potential though, and as you said, you'll eventually add more I hope. For starters, you did set the music for a dreamy rave sound, which is nice.

What stood out:
- sound quality (perhaps needs some mastering done)
- syncing of some melodies offbeat (e.g. near the beginning)
- overusage of loops? (if this is the case, try to be more original)

BTW, what program did you use to make the music?

shadowsfall wrote:

oh okay well then the video gets a 7/10!

reason: well i like the music but it's not all that good if there is no entertainment. now i am not insulting you or anything if you think i am but it's good.

Ayumi posted this for the song, not for anything else. You shouldn't take the actual video into account, really.

It is looped...?

I used my trusty Synthesizer! The YPT-400!
--------

I sometimes mess up, though It means it IS User Made.

I used the edited vers. of "Rave" which had too much KB. 38 KB.

Instrument can take 30 KB ONLY. X(
-------------
I hope I finally get the Tyros-3

What stood out:
- sound quality (perhaps needs some mastering done)
- syncing of some melodies offbeat (e.g. near the beginning)
- overusage of loops? (if this is the case, try to be more original)

BTW, what program did you use to make the music?

Ayumi posted this for the song, not for anything else. You shouldn't take the actual video into account, really.

reason: well i like the music but it's not all that good if there is no entertainment. now i am not insulting you or anything if you think i am but it's good.

well um... i didn't understand the point of that so i don't know what to say. sorry

It's Rave music, a sub genre of electronica...

I luff it, Ayumi.

PS: Why doesnt anyone comment on my vids on my YT? Seriously, no one ever comments on them... >.<