what is DOTO? and also again i still have a ways to go and right at the moment im the only person working on this i see what u mean but ok ya i see what you mean but you see i think i explained the reason why that are after flame and ember in the post but maybe it wasnt real pacif(srry if this sounds cocky)

Dawn of the Dragon (the last of the LoS series.) Cynder was never introduced in any pre-LoS Spyro as far as I know, and Ember and Flame were never in LoS, so the 2 canons never crossed (i.e. there is literally nothing about them known in the universe Cynder is in, giving them a chance *possiblehint* to change their personalities to more fit their roles in your fan-game.)

ok troble is your making a DOTD game, flame and ember have not been put into place in this world, why should they bad guys want anything to do with them?

Spyro and cynder i can understand, as they are heros and stuff, quite valuble, but 2 random dragons...not realy worth been held captive by a swamp king/queen.

Ok well I was tweaking my game idea and I thought of some things. First, Bosses: The 1st boss will be Baruk the demon dragon..His reason for trying to stop Flame is that you are traspassing in his land. Then the 2nd boss is where you find Ember trapped in a cage you go to help her but the boss, Varra the dirt queen, attacks and tries to stop you because you are trying to "steal" her reward, which is Ember. After you defeat her and save Ember, you continue on about halfway, where you find Cynder who is trapped in a small electric field, knocked out. She is guarded by a two tailed scorpion who is huge and goes by the name of Sanos the Gaurd*. After you defeat him you have to hit a series of switches to free Cynder. Then not long after that you find Spyro who is chained down and can't escape, and is guarded by two bosses, Kara the legendary monster and Furst the dragon of flame, who try stopping you because, well, they cant let you free Spyro. I havent thought of an ending yet and sometime here soon I'll post some enemy types. Thx for cooperating with me through my game design ideas and thx for the support

* Might wanna be guard

Fixed a lot of your typos and such so I could read through it. Sounds good so far. Not really fond of the idea of Ember or Flame (only saw them in "Let's Play"s and didn't like the personalities chosen for them), but other than that it's fine. For enemies, just think about what fits the setting. Earth/desert theme? Golems, coyotes, buzzards, and the like. Tundra? Mammoths, long-furred critters, stuff like that.

Also, Clock-La is kinda right on the whole story theme. Maybe not so much "save me" theme. Perhaps a "they save themselves" thing (although that'd require more work if you use all the elements for Cynder, and make 4 for Ember and Flame or w/e.)

just some creative critasisam