36IStillLikeSpyro36 wrote:

personally, i'm not a fan of those games where the main character/s disappear/s for most of the game.

Ok well they  arent gone for most of the game just half of it

No offence but is'nt that kind of the same thing? Prehaps 3/4 woulD be more satisfying

personally, i'm not a fan of those games where the main character/s disappear/s for most of the game.

Ok well they  arent gone for most of the game just half of it

Okay, I'll try and get this in before someone else comes in and criticizes you. If they give you good advice or constructive criticism, take it. There are quite a few good writers on this forum and I'm sure they'd gladly help you out with expanding upon your ideas.

If you're interested in writing more about your idea, first come up with a distinct setting for your story and get a general idea about how you want your plot to go (Though from what I gather you have a rough outline already). Since Flame and Ember were minor characters, you have plenty of room to expand their personalities beyond what the original creator had in mind. It's fiction, you can make it whatever you like.

Once you have all the basics of your story down, move to coming up with more specifics like boss names and what motivation they have for wanting to oppose the protagonist(s).

When writing it's important to remember that you will always have critics that won't like your work or your ideas, no matter how good you get. Take these in your stride and don't let them get you down.

Thanks this really helps in about a week or so ill probely have more pafic and detailed about my idea 

I relized on my poll i wasnt real pacfic... Ok wouldnt it be cool if they made a game that comes after "The Legend of Spyro: Dawn of the Dragon" that was called "The Legend of Spyro: The Return of Spyro and Cynder". Ok it would be nice if it was like this: You are Flame the dragon(from: "Spyro: A hero's Tail") and you want to find Spyro and Cynder. As you go on your jourany you run into new enemies. Then when you are 1/4 of the way through you run into Ember(Also from Spyro: A Hero's Tail") And She joins you on your quest. Then you continue on your quest and there are some little missons you can do along the way. Then half way through you would fianly find Spyro and Cynder. But you have to fight A few bosses to get to them. Then you have to get them. Then go take out the rest of the enemies. Then the end would be a surprise. After you beat the game you could just wonder around complete missions and find items.[ The reason for Flame and Ember is because they were only in one game] And You can change charaters as you unlock them.( Flame, Ember, Spyro, and Cynder)..........and thats my game idea and it sounds short but it would be as long as the other spyro games like Dawn of the Dragon and Eternal night or new beggning.  So How do you like my idea?

Thats not realy a spyro game...its more like spyro All 4 one

If you're interested in writing more about your idea, first come up with a distinct setting for your story and get a general idea about how you want your plot to go (Though from what I gather you have a rough outline already). Since Flame and Ember were minor characters, you have plenty of room to expand their personalities beyond what the original creator had in mind. It's fiction, you can make it whatever you like.

Once you have all the basics of your story down, move to coming up with more specifics like boss names and what motivation they have for wanting to oppose the protagonist(s).

When writing it's important to remember that you will always have critics that won't like your work or your ideas, no matter how good you get. Take these in your stride and don't let them get you down.