if anything, it should go in the fanfiction section.

You need to move this thread to the "Role Playing" forum, whatever it is
called. It does not belong in the General Chat section.

come on live a lil its here now :3

I have to sit next to little slobbering Ash again. I always do, because I’m always last up. I don’t mind sitting next to him though. He’s my favourite of all my brothers. I have a lot of brothers, five to be exact. I’m not very fond of any of them, but if I had to pick a favourite, it would be Ash. As you probably guessed, my least favourite is Blaze. Coal, who is sixteen also isn’t fond of Blaze, but he’s all grouchy and miserable and that puts me off him. He’s miles better than Blaze anyway.

Today we were having English breakfasts again. My mum is a very good cook, unlike my dad. When we were little she used to bake these huge fancy cakes that I loved, but when dad got into this healthy eating thing, they had a massive row and she never baked a cake again. They haven’t had a row about mum’s cooking since, but dad still nags Mum for what she cooks.

...seems like my posting privileges on the fanfic forum got removed for some reason... oh well, that was like, 2 years ago, so meh

Should I ask a moderator to move it?

For a person that says they are the age of 11, I am both surprised and
partially amazed to see that you have great grammar. I am also happy to
see that you use "anyway" in stead of "anyways" which is incorrect.

I agree you do have great grammer.

Now I’ve got all that over and done with, here’s the blurb:

Strong, handsome and powerful, Malefor is most popular student at Dragon High. All the girls go crazy for him, but skimpy, small and weak Ignitus is shocked when Malefor chooses to go out with him. With hesitation, Ignitus agrees to go out with Ignitus. Ignitus begins to enjoy this relationship, but things start changing when Malefor begins to turn evil…

And now here's a bit of the first page...

“Wake up!” A voice boomed.
My eyes immediately opened, revealing my brawny father in front of me. Everyone in my family was muscular, all expect me. I didn’t understand why I was so skinny and meek-looking, while the rest of my family were so strong- looking.
“Ignitus, what do you think you’re doing?” My dad yelled. I was silent. I didn’t want to talk, and I was too tired to anyway. I closed my eyes. Hopefully he would think I was ill and he wouldn’t send me to the dreadful school day ahead of me. “Stop dawdling and get yourself to school!” He screamed. Unfortunately, my dad wasn’t in the best of moods today. I shuffled out of my comfortable sleeping spot, and headed downstairs for breakfast. I was so tired I practically sleepwalked downstairs. Now I could smell my mum’s scrumptious breakfasts on the table, and I could hear one of my brothers, the very fast Burn, munching away at his breakfast. Burn was very energetic and irritating, but at least he wasn’t as irritating as Infernocus. Infernocus is fifteen, one year older than me. He is definition of annoying, snobbish, rude, big-headed, childish and if I put all the lovely words to describe him down it would probably fill this entire book. There are rude words to describe him as well, but I can’t risk my parents finding my diary and seeing a never-ending list of swear words to describe their little sweetie. They would go ballistic.

I have to sit next to little slobbering Ash again. I always do, because I’m always last up. I don’t mind sitting next to him though. He’s my favourite of all my brothers. I have a lot of brothers, five to be exact. My mum is pregnant, so it’ll be six soon, and seven counting me.